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| 05 Jun 2015 07:12 PM |
[Intro] Yo hit me with this beat. Lemme tell you a story about kings.. This is based on true moments..
[Chorus] We hail the kings. Kiss their rings. Their puppets on strings They spread their wings.
[Verse 1] Its King of Compton underground today's the coronation. Rappers hungry to get at me. they die of starvation. Rap gods creation. Tryin to refuse the temptation. To go for a little bit of acceleration. This is confirmation. (beat goes silent) I hit em kill em stab em drill em skill em spit em thrill em fill em chill em grill em and still Em is the best. i make the rest rest. With the fishes. Servin rappers with deep dishes. Im the answer to raps wishes.
[Chorus]
[Final Verse]
Time for control. Eatin these rookies like a spring roll. Hole in one. Goal is won. I have fun with a loaded gun. I leave these fakers spun. Set the brains on stun. Then drive off in the silhouette of the sun. i won. they run. If Eminem and Tupac had a son. I'd be the one. Heavyweight weighting a tonne. I spray bullets. a ton. Done...
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| 05 Jun 2015 07:15 PM |
First of all, You're a rookie so quit it. Secondly, Dont use syllables for 3 lines if you wont use syllables for the rest of the song. Third, You're bad so if you're trying to prove something, Stop. |
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| 05 Jun 2015 07:16 PM |
| Don't care what you gotta say. Personally you and your Minililawsomeguy can die. Oh wait.. |
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| 05 Jun 2015 07:37 PM |
| iEmmanuelEmenike: Dont care about your opinion. Minililawsomeguy #Death (5:20 PM) |
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| 05 Jun 2015 07:38 PM |
| Smh, What type of person tells someone to go die and makes fun of someone whose close friend died. You're trash kid, I would rekt you with 10 lines. |
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| 05 Jun 2015 07:42 PM |
| Do it then. idc about your opinion or your friend. I lose friends nearly every week. idc. |
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| 05 Jun 2015 07:47 PM |
| Call me a rookie. even tho he joined 2 months ago and im an 09er (soccerninja22) |
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Cybertro
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| 05 Jun 2015 08:04 PM |
Edgy rap.
Expected from an Eminem fan. |
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| 05 Jun 2015 08:06 PM |
| Not an eminem fan.. Kendrick Lamar fan + 2pac + Biggie fan.. |
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Cybertro
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| 05 Jun 2015 08:14 PM |
| Srsly dont know why im gettin hate. didnt rlly ask for it tbh. you aint got anythin nice to say be silent. |
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Cybertro
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| 05 Jun 2015 08:19 PM |
| You're supposed to take the criticism, no ones gonna like you if you b[]tch and m0an about every comment hating your (awful) lyrics. |
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MrMeese
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| 07 Jun 2015 12:34 AM |
Yo. Why is everyone hatin'? Most of these damn losers couldn't drop a verse even if their life depended on it. Like for real.If ya'll know ya'll can't do better, don't say nothin'.
One more thing, before I get a bunch of hater comments, (no offense to Em) I beat his rap before. So I got previous experience. But most of you b*tches can't even rap for anything. So shut up. |
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Cybertro
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| 07 Jun 2015 02:00 AM |
@Jaye
I can write verses better than him (and you).
Its called criticism.
Go drink bleach. |
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| 07 Jun 2015 10:28 AM |
| Lol, all of your are calling bad on this when this would have been praised back in the early days of ro rap with altar and sht. (It's because the community wasn't large yet that he's thought of like that now. Not much competition.) |
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| 22 Jun 2015 10:42 PM |
@ Cybertro
It's not criticism if you're looking for literally every excuse to downplay his rap. As previously mentioned, your little ass couldn't even rap for anything. And besides, you said you can easily beat me and Em. I'm calling you out then. Cuz anyone can talk trash about someone behind a screen. But when we meet face to face, you'll see who has the "awful" lyrics. Idiot. Man. Besides, if you wanna give criticism, tell him the ways he's messin' up. Don't be a stupid ass and just say "your lyrics are awful". "It's called critism". WTF. That's like saying a teacher yelling at a kid is teaching. Don't judge no one. And I wanna see your reply too. Probably might be something ignorant as usual. So, do you accept my challenge, or are you gonna make a $2 excuse for why you stink at rap, or why you can't challenge me? The choice is yours. |
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| 22 Jun 2015 11:26 PM |
| Actually cyber is one of the best ro-rappers around sooooo bump outta here with that argument. |
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Cybertro
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| 23 Jun 2015 12:43 AM |
@Vigi
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@Jaye
I don't feel like replying to your god awful paragraph but I guess I will.
"As previously mentioned, your little ass couldn't even rap for anything."
>You've never seen my lyrics. How am I "little"?
" And besides, you said you can easily beat me and Em. I'm calling you out then. Cuz anyone can talk trash about someone behind a screen. But when we meet face to face, you'll see who has the "awful" lyrics."
>You have the awful lyrics and I'm not meeting you irl.
"Idiot. Man. Besides, if you wanna give criticism, tell him the ways he's messin' up."
>Told him his rap was edgy, that's how he's messin' up.
"Don't be a stupid ass and just say "your lyrics are awful". "It's called critism"."
>You didn't read my comment, obviously. "Critism"? Learn to spell.
"WTF. That's like saying a teacher yelling at a kid is teaching."
>No, it's not. You're terrible at similes. "Don't judge no one. And I wanna see your reply too."
>k.
"Probably might be something ignorant as usual."
>Well, you obviously don't know me.
"So, do you accept my challenge, or are you gonna make a $2 excuse for why you stink at rap, or why you can't challenge me? The choice is yours."
>I don't know how to respond as you never did challenge me. If you did, I missed it.
Did it take all fifteen days to write that? |
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| 23 Jun 2015 01:04 AM |
EMMANUEL you're verse was awesome I always support you And f the haters
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