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Re: OG Lyricist by Reaper/Chaotic

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ChaoticsVEVO is not online. ChaoticsVEVO
Joined: 16 Dec 2014
Total Posts: 46
02 Jun 2015 02:22 PM
Welcome to my Murder story, better yet hell where thing's are purgatory
I got all these rappers praying for their life, I feel predatory
Better yet I feel malicious, haven't been eating too much rappers, malnutrition
Don't influence my decision whether to stab you or create multiple incisions
In your heart or your brain, or better yet your blood veins
I'll watch you bleed out as your body parts get rearranged
I'd stomp you out but I got a stampede of wild things
Vicious things, plus I own explosive corrosives
So when my motives seem low my tantrum doesn't go unnoticed
When I step in the building, people get sweaty, not because they're nervous but because this heat im emitting
I'll pop up like Matilda, wave my wand steady and cover up these murders im committing
The damage i'm inflicting is equal to diseases that i'm transmitting
Matter of fact i'll demolish you like a tractor or extinct you like dinosaur raptors
You wear red nail polish and show your emotions like an actor
Earth is lined up for disaster plus i'm ready to explode [s] like a nuclear reactor
Line up all the MC's for execution, Altar too, no excuses
Leave you in shock then electrocution, from the head to the knee's you got bruises
Distribute evenly, Rap game beast to beat impossibly
They don't believe in me, everythings left explicitly exposed and your trigger finger is wobbily
I'm actually tragically the fatality to your inner mortality
I stick 2 sticks up metrix ass but that's just a formality
Rapping better than me? You're better off killing yourself with hypodermic needles
So sharp that they'll kill your schizophrenic friends 1 by 1 like the beetles nikka





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ChaoticPath is not online. ChaoticPath
Joined: 29 Apr 2011
Total Posts: 8695
02 Jun 2015 02:23 PM
r/c
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GrimReaperOfChiraq is not online. GrimReaperOfChiraq
Joined: 31 Mar 2015
Total Posts: 154
02 Jun 2015 02:25 PM
damn who angered my cousin......
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DevilishFilip is not online. DevilishFilip
Joined: 28 Jun 2012
Total Posts: 2322
02 Jun 2015 02:48 PM
7.1/10.
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DXZ0MBI3117 is not online. DXZ0MBI3117
Joined: 04 Oct 2012
Total Posts: 3843
02 Jun 2015 03:02 PM
I think the problem is you have a lot of potential going in the wrong direction. 6/10 tho
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Urethritis is not online. Urethritis
Joined: 23 Apr 2015
Total Posts: 1186
02 Jun 2015 03:09 PM
Rip, Chaotic's brain
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lunafanplace is not online. lunafanplace
Joined: 11 Sep 2012
Total Posts: 2943
02 Jun 2015 06:15 PM
7.5/10
This was really good!
I would rate higher but some of these lines are god awful.
The majority of it is good though.
(Blood veins, and the raptor extinction one as an example)
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lunafanplace is not online. lunafanplace
Joined: 11 Sep 2012
Total Posts: 2943
02 Jun 2015 06:15 PM
Those last lines are to be switched.

*(Blood veins, and the raptor extinction one as an example)
The majority of it is good though.*
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Zemalf22 is not online. Zemalf22
Joined: 18 Jan 2014
Total Posts: 25
04 Jul 2015 04:21 PM
You said better yet 3 times in the first few lines and that made the song pretty bland
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sangyourrefrain is not online. sangyourrefrain
Joined: 02 May 2015
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04 Jul 2015 04:55 PM
'Welcome to my Murder story, better yet hell where thing's are purgatory'

What does this even mean?

Do you know what purgatory is?

Also, unless the thing possesses something, then you can drop that apostrophe.

'Better yet I feel malicious, haven't been eating too much rappers, malnutrition'

Is this supposed to mean that you haven't been consuming any rappers lately and, therefore, are suffering from malnutrition? Or are you informing fellow rappers that you haven't been eating very much lately?

'When I step in the building, people get sweaty, not because they're nervous but because this heat im emitting
I'll pop up like Matilda, wave my wand steady and cover up these murders im committing'

If you're emitting that much heat, then you have a serious problem. And if you're trying to cover up the murders you're committing, then why did you then write a song about how you're going to kill everyone?

'Rapping better than me? You're better off killing yourself with hypodermic needles
So sharp that they'll kill your schizophrenic friends 1 by 1 like the beetles nikka'

I have several questions about this. One, did you purposely misspell 'The Beatles' or are you saying that my schizophrenic friends are going to be killed off like actual beetles?

Also, I would assume the whole point of telling your audience to kill themselves with a hypodermic needle is because it's basically impossible, just like it would be basically impossible to beat your impeccable rapping skills. But that second line completely discredits that by saying that you're going to kill them with aforementioned hypodermic needles (or they're going to kill themselves with the hypodermic needles. Which means that it is, in fact, possible to rap better than you.





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ChaoticPath is not online. ChaoticPath
Joined: 29 Apr 2011
Total Posts: 8695
04 Jul 2015 05:26 PM
^ white people be like


http://www.roblox.com/item.aspx?id=185522769&rbxp=16424036
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superninjapig6 is not online. superninjapig6
Joined: 12 Apr 2014
Total Posts: 797
04 Jul 2015 05:38 PM
8/10
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sangyourrefrain is not online. sangyourrefrain
Joined: 02 May 2015
Total Posts: 4343
04 Jul 2015 07:43 PM
so you have to be white to care about songs making any sense? that...well, i'd say that doesn't make any sense either, but that seems futile here.
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ChaoticPath is not online. ChaoticPath
Joined: 29 Apr 2011
Total Posts: 8695
04 Jul 2015 11:37 PM
No i'm saying how y'all take things in a sense to where yall don't understand things lol


http://www.roblox.com/item.aspx?id=185522769&rbxp=16424036
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Jinglehasse is not online. Jinglehasse
Joined: 15 Aug 2011
Total Posts: 16592
04 Jul 2015 11:40 PM
Hey ChaoticPepperoni, I bought yo swaggy album d00d
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ChaoticPath is not online. ChaoticPath
Joined: 29 Apr 2011
Total Posts: 8695
04 Jul 2015 11:42 PM
thx brocli


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superninjapig6 is not online. superninjapig6
Joined: 12 Apr 2014
Total Posts: 797
05 Jul 2015 07:37 PM
i bought it 2
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ChaoticPath is not online. ChaoticPath
Joined: 29 Apr 2011
Total Posts: 8695
05 Jul 2015 07:42 PM
thx g


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superninjapig6 is not online. superninjapig6
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05 Jul 2015 07:43 PM
np
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