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Re: is this good so far?

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wayne2018 is not online. wayne2018
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23 May 2015 02:40 PM
what do you think?
http://www.roblox.com/games/247792268/Project-A
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wayne2018 is not online. wayne2018
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23 May 2015 02:55 PM
bump
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23 May 2015 03:28 PM
B2
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TheCreationWorld is not online. TheCreationWorld
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23 May 2015 03:30 PM
Make spawn transpareny, and it's really good!



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wayne2018 is not online. wayne2018
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23 May 2015 03:39 PM
Yea I will the spawn transparent
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LongKillKreations is not online. LongKillKreations
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23 May 2015 04:29 PM
nice, add some music and it will ahve a great atmosphere

when I stepped in the fireplace the fire became massive..
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23 May 2015 06:01 PM
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23 May 2015 07:40 PM
bumpz
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wayne2018 is not online. wayne2018
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23 May 2015 07:58 PM
I NEED MORE OPINIONS ON IT
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23 May 2015 08:45 PM
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23 May 2015 09:45 PM
Um, bump
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alphaboy299 is not online. alphaboy299
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24 May 2015 12:05 AM
Needs a lot of work!
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CardsOfFate is not online. CardsOfFate
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24 May 2015 12:15 AM
This is nothing special but you have clearly spent a good amount of time on it so you get credit for effort but Its quite square placed as in nothing really looks like they join together its all very minimal detail and a lot just looks under-done, good effort but effort is not always everything.
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LongKillKreations is not online. LongKillKreations
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24 May 2015 01:00 AM
yeah, it's nice but it's literally a miniature square
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wayne2018 is not online. wayne2018
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24 May 2015 01:04 AM
And what can I do so it doesn't look just like a square?
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CardsOfFate is not online. CardsOfFate
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24 May 2015 01:07 AM
First: Look at Everything decided, could you add more to it?

Second: Create Natural Cracks and Flaws in the Buildings and Furniture

Third: Try to add in a atmosphere, Music is recommended. but also perhaps some mist? something to really blend everything together.
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lilblitz56 is not online. lilblitz56
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24 May 2015 01:13 AM
I'm pretty sure there's a spread script inside of that fireplace that causes it to get huge when you touch it. Also try adding some terrain instead of a flat baseplate, or just something to make it look less blocky :P

Overall not too shabby.
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FauxSundew is not online. FauxSundew
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24 May 2015 01:20 AM
Pretty cool
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KodakKid3 is not online. KodakKid3
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24 May 2015 03:36 AM
looks really nice, just needs more content
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24 May 2015 03:46 PM
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DevSuper is not online. DevSuper
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24 May 2015 03:49 PM
Looks very nice.
I would make the spawn transparent, like other mentioned.
I'd also add music and a cozy skybox.
Also, on the fountain, it looks odd making the water come out in bursts, I would do a continuous stream.

Other than that, great game, keep up the awesome building!
(Thumbs up btw) :)
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25 May 2015 04:39 PM
B3
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wayne2018 is not online. wayne2018
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25 May 2015 05:08 PM
B4....WAIT, I GOT BINGO YAAAA
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wayne2018 is not online. wayne2018
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26 May 2015 05:16 PM
Um, bump
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JamieRBLX is not online. JamieRBLX
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26 May 2015 05:32 PM
I like it. I think the windows need a bit of work, though. if you improved them I feel like the whole place would look so much better.


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