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| 12 May 2015 06:43 PM |
Disclaimer: I know that this is really late, but I have had trouble initially remembering my experiences with the ROBLOX event in the past. Also, I've been having a lot of tests, exams, sports, etc. I literally had to write 6 copies of this novel before I can put this on the forums. It took over an hour proofreading every singly one of my copies.
If you have a short attention span, you will most likely not make it out of this thread alive. Yes, this is my first initial ROBLOX story. And, this was actually a school project, which got an A- on. The game I used was Ripull's Minigames because it was an actual hunt.
Thank you and enjoy!
-52dollarbill
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"A bright, sunny day outside today," says Lou as he is going outside putting his sweatshirt on. Along with a basket, and a small magnifying glass, Lou was ready to search for some eggs. He is approaching Mount. ROBLOXia as he is looking for his first eggs. "Perfect," he says as he is starting to make his way up the mountain. He is climbing the hard, bumpy mountaintops. Now utilizing his magnifying glass looking at an oval up ahead. "Aha!" He says. He picks the egg, takes a look at his book to see whether it is a decoy or a real one.
Lou is reading definitions, researching the egg and making important notes about it. It indicated as real. He found one out of the twenty-two he needs to complete his search. He spots a casual-looking man. A tee-shirt, jeans and brown hair along with a cap. Lou is now approaching the man, accidentally bumps into him. He can't hold his balance on how impacted Lou's bump was on him.
"Oh my God," Lou says as he is trying to help the man, who is nearly falling and can't hold on to the hard, bumpy gravel. The man manages to grab Lou's hand. "Phew," Lou says as he says "Sorry" for bumping into him. "Are you okay?" Lou asks in a sorry-sounding language? "Yeah, I'm fine." The man says in a nice, gentle tone. "What's your name?" Lou asked. The man is clearing his throat, wiping his hand on his head to get rid of all the sweat climbing the mountain. "My name is Bernard." He says. "Pleased to meet you, Bernard. I am Lou, as in Louis." He says introducing himself. "Are you searching for eggs, too?" Lou adds. "Sure am." The man says.
"But, I sure am having a lot of trouble finding a few." He says.
Silence.
"How about we hunt for the eggs together?" The man adds. Lou stops and thinks for a second. "Sure," he says as they start climbing the mountaintop again. They haven't seen any eggs. Seeming like it's been quite a while. They make a rough, tight turn.
"You know what, Bernard? I don't think we'll find eggs for quite a while. I think we should go back to the ground to see if we can find more eggs because this is a bit of a waste of time, don't you think?" Lou says. "Yeah, sure." Bernard agrees.
Lou wasn't much of a go-downer when it comes to mountains. Not mainly because he's naive with climbing mountains, but when he goes down something. Lou was nervous, now holding to dear life. He slides down a bit almost screeching against Bernard.
They both stopped to get a drink of refreshing water because they were tired of going down from the mountain. They both found 6 eggs and grabbed 3 each. Lou got one of the same one, so he just threw it on the ground. A jumbo-tron came out of nowhere and pointed at Lou and Bernard.
"Why did you just put that egg on the ground?" Said the rabbit on the jumbo-tron.
"Because I got one of the same one." Said Lou.
"Nobody would give a crap. You wouldn't, either. Now, pick it up, suck it up and bring it with you." Said the rabbit in a loud tone of voice.
"You can't make me." Said Lou with some fighting words.
"Oh, really? Well, how about I send my guards to come and kill you?" Said the rabbit in a threatening, serious voice.
"Sure, send me some carrots while you're at it, too please." Said Lou in a sarcastic way.
The rabbit scowls and the jumbo-tron is turned off.
"Hmmph. Let's just go on." Lou says.
"Bernard?" Bernard is gone.
"Bernard, where are you?" Lou says.
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To be continued
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| 12 May 2015 06:43 PM |
"bernard"
is this a carss fanfic, austin |
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sauske419
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| 12 May 2015 06:45 PM |
I'm not reading because
1. you obviously suck as a writer 2. Nobody wants to read a roblox novel |
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majoko1
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| 12 May 2015 06:50 PM |
Not sure how I feel about this.
It just seemed oddly written. Not poorly written. There was something strange about it. |
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qdhxx
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| 18 Jul 2015 10:35 PM |
I CRIED.
mfw http://www.roblox.com/face-item?id=241134674 |
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| 18 Jul 2015 10:35 PM |
| why are you doing this to me |
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colorclaw
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| 18 Jul 2015 10:36 PM |
| U EXPECT EM TO READ THAT???????KYS |
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