|
| 05 May 2015 03:21 PM |
Recorded Version: https://soundcloud.com/wonderflow/paralyzed-bassicly-a-paradise
[Intro] The biggest sinister villan, rap minister killin, Whisper of dead listener,(shhh) hear it?
[Verse] Fused with lunars energy(synergy) mixed with acts of anarchy, As manly as mustaches of phantom pete, anthems over beat, Hundread d*cks like millipede, hate me when i sin 0rgy, Drain white fluid from my soul, like Lisa Ann doing laundry, Send everyone off till im lonley, don't show mourning, Im the only person put under pressure that isn't m*aning, Measure the level of confussion, put on vaseline, hope you're not losin, Im the orthodox of unorthodox, backwardsly spinning clocks, Stuck in paradox, breaking both reality and all the locks With just eye contact, and a little luck, opposite of lux, Im ultimate, ultimated, not illuminated, still underrated, Undebated, community gated, over me a hanging pendulum, Getting free ambulence ride, paradox amplified, Let me simplify this simplified fact, Check the wrinkled sky, and throw a foam party, Once you get epilepsy, the sh*t's snarly, I hardly even try, oddly, like future, Im godly, backwards like manga, Just letting out anger, not really a club banger...
[Hook] Im nocturnal, everything but diurnal, Mind filthy like urinal, dancin' on funerals, Enjoy the yellow pink sky, abstract paradox, Dotted out like chiken pox, Running Marathons with Parasite for parasites, While im paralyzed, bassicly a paradise.[Intro] The biggest sinister villan, rap minister killin, Whisper of dead listener,(shhh) hear it? |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 05 May 2015 03:21 PM |
| Whoops, ignore the intro on end of hook, that was accident lol. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 05 May 2015 03:36 PM |
Rate(s)/Feedback?
''PhD in Internet Retarhrdation |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 05 May 2015 03:44 PM |
you mumbled a bit in some parts, but i like it. Instrumental should of been a bit upwards in volume. 7//10 |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 05 May 2015 03:46 PM |
Thanks.
''PhD in Internet Retarhrdation |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 05 May 2015 03:46 PM |
Roblox standards is 10/10 In real rap standards it's around 8/10 |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 05 May 2015 03:48 PM |
Ty.
''PhD in Internet Retarhrdation |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 05 May 2015 03:56 PM |
| I have to agree with Universal, except the 8 would be 7. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 05 May 2015 03:58 PM |
Ty. guys! :D
''PhD in Internet Retarhrdation |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 05 May 2015 04:22 PM |
bump...
''PhD in Internet Retarhrdation |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 05 May 2015 06:57 PM |
struggle bump..people be sleeping on me lol.
''PhD in Internet Retarhrdation |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 05 May 2015 09:02 PM |
| I have earbuds in so that's probably why I can't record. Devil, do you have earbuds in when you record? My parents would kill me if I blared it loud LMAO |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 05 May 2015 09:51 PM |
yeah i use earbuds+mic. lol.
''PhD in Internet Retarhrdation |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 06 May 2015 02:59 AM |
Ima whisper next time I recordh lmao.
9/10 btw |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 06 May 2015 11:58 AM |
lol. ty.
''PhD in Internet Retarhrdation |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
Chichland
|
  |
| Joined: 21 Feb 2011 |
| Total Posts: 2442 |
|
|
| 06 May 2015 02:00 PM |
6/10: recording 8/10: lyrics |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 06 May 2015 02:01 PM |
^Lowest rate so far awe :( . ty anyways lol.
''PhD in Internet Retarhrdation |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
Chichland
|
  |
| Joined: 21 Feb 2011 |
| Total Posts: 2442 |
|
|
| 06 May 2015 02:01 PM |
| Keep recording! Definitely better than first one imo |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 06 May 2015 02:07 PM |
Yeah, i agree, and im def. gonna keep recording.
''PhD in Internet Retarhrdation |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 06 May 2015 02:23 PM |
| hell f#ing naw hated recorded version but written 8/10 |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 06 May 2015 03:04 PM |
| df sounded like an 11 year old mumbling words he found in the dictionary |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 06 May 2015 03:10 PM |
^Lol, your ego is as big as your forehead.. And btw your insults are weak lol.
''PhD in Internet Retarhrdation |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 06 May 2015 04:41 PM |
| your dk is as small as your voice |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 06 May 2015 05:23 PM |
Small..as a voice? That makes sense. mhm.
''PhD in Internet Retarhrdation |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 06 May 2015 05:34 PM |
| your voice is pretty small so it makes sense |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|