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RAE181 is not online. RAE181
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06 May 2015 11:13 PM
[Name: James Greene]

You fold the report neatly and you place it into your pocket, then you hear the loud speaker say "PEOPLE REPORTING TO THE 47TH INFANTRY DIVISION GO TO DOCK 2. PEOPLE REPORTING TO THE 12 ARMORED DIVISION REPORT TO DOCK 17. PEOPLE REPORTING TO...".

The loud speaker goes on and on, but you heard your dock, so you go to dock 2. You give your ID to the MP, he salutes you and you salute back. Then you enter the train, you go the the "High Ranks" train car. You put your brief case under your chair then you sit, currently awaiting the train to depart from the train juncture to move to the front.

As you wait, you look out the windows. Then you are interrupted by the train car opening, then closing. The figure is a female, her rank appears to be a colonel.

She sees you seated, then she salutes to you. "Colonel Alison reporting for duty, Sir!"
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07 May 2015 12:01 PM
I stand and return the salute.

"Please to meet you Colonel. Lieutenant General James Greene."
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07 May 2015 12:09 PM
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pirate59392 is not online. pirate59392
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07 May 2015 04:06 PM
(Uhh?)
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RAE181 is not online. RAE181
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07 May 2015 04:47 PM
[Yeh, sorry just got back from school.]

Colonel Alison nods and lowers her hand, and thus the salute. She takes the seat in front of you, then she puts her briefcase under her chair. Moments pass before you hear the loud speaker click again. "TRAIN FROM DOCK TWO WILL NOW BE DEPARTING, GOOD LUCK ON THE FRONT." Before it clicks again, then the train starts to gather steam and it starts to move. Moments after you hear Colonel Alison speak again, "Sir, are you nervous? Nervous at all?"
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07 May 2015 05:06 PM
"Naturally. I'd be lying if I said I wasn't. Why do you ask?"
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RAE181 is not online. RAE181
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07 May 2015 05:32 PM
"Um, sir. On my way here I saw new generals heading to there docks, they all seem confident and they all look similar in age to you. I just wanted to check that you were one of those confident generals, guess my suspicion was wrong. But, please don't let that be demoralizing to you. Instead I'm looking forward working with you, as you see. I am part of your new staff, I'm sure the rest of your staff is already at the divisions HQ." Colonel Alison answers honestly as she goes for a cup of tea.

(You can initiate a time skip if you want.)
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07 May 2015 05:37 PM
"I try my best to look confident, and I assume they're doing the same."
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07 May 2015 05:42 PM
"Good point sir, anyways you think our division is going to become famous? Perhaps be even be named" The colonel stops for a bit then she speaks up again. "A Royal division? Being in a Royal division is like reviving the highest medal of honor, I just wanted to be in one of those. But its something we have to work for right?" She finishes as she sips a cup of tea.
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07 May 2015 05:48 PM
(Im a little unclear, its 1938 so I assume WW2 is going on, but none of the AlliedPowers were involved in WW2 yet by 1938. What country are we in, fictional/non-fictional.)

"I don't see why not. If the 47th doesn't have a reputation yet, well then, it starts here."
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RAE181 is not online. RAE181
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07 May 2015 06:28 PM
(Its fiction but it uses our dates, I'll give you the country you are fighting for and a bit of light info about it. But I'll RP the nation you are fighting against.

The country you are fighting for is the United Kingdoms of Verona (Note: I know that Verona is a city in Italy but I'm using the name, so don't get mixed up with those two. This Verona is different.)

-Its government is hierarchy, being established in 1015 by a set of kingdoms and stood the affects of time and still stands strong today.)

"That's nice to hear sir, I'm already becoming convinced that you will be an excellent general some day. Possibly even commanding a field army, but like you said. It starts here, but on other terms. You'll need to know what your fighting against, because they don't teach you that while you are in the military school." Alison says as she grabs a surprisingly thick book from her brief case. "Here, this is what you'll need to know. They issue it to every high rank in the military once there done training, I'm guess you forgot it or its in your brief case. But right now its good to read up about it instead of a later date." She says as she slides the book labeled "KNOW YOUR ENEMY: VEILMALIAM"
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07 May 2015 06:43 PM
"I appreciate your vote of confidence."

Well, may as well read up, I've got nothing gut time.
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07 May 2015 08:17 PM
You open the book and start reading at page one, you skim through it and you make mental notes one what to keep track on. You seem to loose track of time as you continue to read the book from start to finish.

TWO AND A HALF HOURS LATER

You just finished the book and you look up at Colonel Alison, shes sleeping in her chair. Deciding not to wake her up, you do a re-cap on the things to need to remember.

Veilmaliam - A Hierarchy nation that was founded in 1544 by a wise and merciful king. His family ruled over the country for over 300 with a peaceful rule until his family met there demise. In 1864 revolution led by John Markubar did an armed take over from the country for reasons still unknown. When Markubar officially seized control of the country in 1873, he had all of the people that was related to the royal blood line to be executed by firing squad. Til then he was set in control, he changed Veilmaliam from a peaceful country to a blood thirsty country.

Veilmaliam Armed Forces (VAF) - A strong but weak military at the same time, with the most recent purges of the VAF. Many officers who saw service before the war against the UKV were executed under suspicion of being traitors. But despite this, the VAF is the second most technological advanced country in the world, UKV being in first.

Veilmaliam Special Military (VSM) - Founded in 1900, it is a special branch of the military. It has some of the most experience and elite soldiers in the entire world (similar to the Waffen SS), noting that there gear is always up to date and there training is one of the best as well. With a strong special military, it has some excellent generals as well. Most noting, Four Star General Arthur Macbrown also known as "Deaths Head". Macbrown is renowned for inflicting large ammount of enemy causalities but keep his own casualties at a minimal.

That are all the main things you kept note of, everything else in the book are less known generals and history.

You are disturbed from your own thoughts by the sounds of a massive tweet. The noise wakes Colonel Alison up as you look out the window. You see that your at a train junction but a way smaller one than the one you departed earlier. The train has came to a full stop, a loudspeaker creaks to life. "ALL UNITS REPORTING TO THE 47TH INFANTRY DIVISION, REPORT TO DOCK 12 FOR DEPLOYMENT." Then it shuts off, but you know where you need to go to and so does Colonel Alison. You and Colonel Alison get up and take your brief cases from the under your seats. You exit the train, quickly followed by the Colonel. The journey to Dock 12 is seemingly quiet until you are disturbed by a voice. "Hey! New guy!" You turn your head towards the voice, so does the Colonel. You see a Lieutenant General, looking the same age as you walking towards you both. You seem to keep quiet until he speaks up again. "So, I heard your the new replacement for the 47th. Heh oh well, another person to the idiot division. I can't believe you lost 3800 men in a four engagements! Boy, you guys are sure utter crap." The man says as he continues to mock you.
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07 May 2015 08:31 PM
"Save some for the Veilmalians, prick."
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07 May 2015 08:40 PM
"Save some for the Veilmaliamns? Boy, that's a lot coming from a division that only killed 43 of them. My divisions killed at least over 500 Veilmalians! That's at least five times the amount of your total kill amount! Say, go get your division destroyed so we can actually have a 'good' division and a 'good' general take your sorry place. Your just a sad thing to look at, heck. Even all the generals talk how bad the 47th is, if your covering our flanks. Were gonna withdraw the instant that happens, like hell. Your that fat kid in gym class, always to be chosen first." He says.
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07 May 2015 08:44 PM
"Yeah, let me just write that down, for my memoirs."

I make sure to get a look at his nametag before turning and walking away.
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07 May 2015 09:06 PM
You look at his name tag and it reads "JARKOV" as you turn away to head towards dock 12. Then you are approached by someone, you look at his rank and hes a field marshal. A diffidently a high rank than yours. Possibly even the army group commander, then he says. "Nice job on dealing with that Lt Gen, most people would've punched him straight in the jaw."
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07 May 2015 09:11 PM
I salute birskly, dropping my arm after the salute is returned.

"Well sir, I was about to. I took note of his name, so I'll file a complaint and let someone else administer the spanking."
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07 May 2015 09:15 PM
"Smart man, in this case I'll do the spanking. Hard." The high rank says, then he speaks up again. "By the way, I am Field Marshal Coshal. Pleasure to make your acquaintance." He lifts his arm and opens his hand for a handshake.
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07 May 2015 09:18 PM
I shake his hand.

"The pleasure is mine, sir."
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RAE181 is not online. RAE181
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07 May 2015 09:29 PM
"Aha, I like your spirit. Between me and you, you can screw the ranking. You can call me Jim, but run along now. I have to get my whip and spank a little rat that got into my way." Jim says as we nods towards you and starts walking towards the Lt Gen who insulted you. After a couple of moments you start walking to dock 12, keeping note you just made a friend in the high ranks. That's always good to have, always. Then Colonel Alison, who is beside you speaks up again. "So sir, how do you think about Field Marshal Coshal?" As you and the Colonel walk to the dock.
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07 May 2015 09:33 PM
"Well, he's one of two officers who didn't immediately dislike me."

I think for a moment.

"I think I'll hope to work with him at a later date."
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07 May 2015 10:07 PM
"Yeah, from what I heard. He parried fourteen Veilmaliam assaults in a row. So hes basically a living legend here in the military, god hes a God of War." Colonel Alison says as her voice is full of nostalgia. But we should really get to dock 12, they're probably waiting for us." She says to you as she begins to walk a bit more faster and you follow beside her. After a while she asks you a question again, "So, what do you want to talk about?"

(Time Skip is available at any time.)
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07 May 2015 10:31 PM
"Do you know much about our new unit, besides it's reputation?"

(Also, its been nagging at me for a while but I just figured out what it was. 5000 people really isnt a Division, its closer to a Battalion. The Battalion then splits into 1000 man Regiments,, which spit into 5 200 man Companies. Basically, my character, as they are technically leading a Battalion, would be a Lt.Colonel/Colonel, and Allison would probably be a Major. Battalions are lead by either form of Colonel, Regiments are lead by Majors, as well as Majors being part of the senior staff, and Companies are lead by Majors as well I think, possibly Captains if theyre new to the position. Just a nitpicky accuracy thing, but I'd like to make the revision, for the sake ofImmersion.
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07 May 2015 10:49 PM
(That could be done, but remember that this is a work of fiction so things might be different. But I'll happily make the revision if it makes it more immersive for you. But with the current forces now which is 1200, it is basically a battalion. But with the full strength it is 5000 men it is a brigade, but still. I'll make revision if it makes it more immersive for you.)

"Not much exactly, other than the report I was given which was the exact same thing as you. I know next to nothing, hopefully someone that served with the 47th Battalion long enough would tell us. But other than that, nothing." Colonel Alison replies to your question, just as she answers your question you have reached dock 12. Both you and Colonel Alison show your IDs to the MP then they let you inside the dock. You enter a military staff car followed by the colonel. Surprisingly you are not in the passenger seat because it is already occupied. The person who is in the passenger seat shifts his body towards you and the Colonel, you can read the name tag clearly which says "CPT MC ARTHUR". Then he proceeds to say "Welcome general, were on our way to the 47th Battalion." Then he pats the driver on the should and the car roars into life, then it starts to move in motion. Following the convoy the trucks which are obviously the new reinforcements for the battalion.

(Or you want it to be a brigade, whatever you want I'm open to.)
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