staraarin
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| 10 May 2015 12:37 AM |
If you came here just by strolling around the fourms, then ignore this post. If you came from this link: http://www.roblox.com/games/224900462/The-Star-Orb-HUB Then Read on!
Hello! I am staraarin, the creator of Star Orb. If you like to be apart of Star Orb then I'll consider it. Please before asking to be a character, Please make sure that i know you as a friend. If you want to be apart of Star Orb But isn't a friend, then you might have a chance to get in anyways.
If you want to be in star orb, reply to this post 2 Reasons why i should put you in as a character. If your Reason are Valid, I will consider it. Thank you for understanding, and I hope you have a good day. |
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| 10 May 2015 12:46 AM |
I'm a Pict. I have a crown.
Lord of all things, breaded and unbreaded. |
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snoggerz
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| Joined: 13 Jan 2015 |
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| 10 May 2015 03:52 AM |
| I've spotted many mistakes in your big blob of a paragraph! Try again! |
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| 10 May 2015 11:41 AM |
@Up top There are no mistakes. Check your eyes! |
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| 10 May 2015 12:35 PM |
Spent a minute rewriting it:
If you came here from just strolling around the forums, then ignore this post. If you came from this link: http://www.roblox.com/games/224900462/The-Star-Orb-HUB, then continue reading. Hello! I am staraarin, the creator of Star Orb. I am accepting applications for characters in my game, Star Orb. Please make sure that I know you as a friend, or your chances of being a character will be lessened. If you wish to be a character in Star Orb, reply to this post with 2 reasons why you should be put in as a character. If your reason are valid, I will consider your application. Thank you for understanding, and I hope you have a good day.
I didn't do a secondary check, so there's probably a few things wrong, but nothing glaringly obvious.
Lord of all things, breaded and unbreaded. |
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DomoMojo
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| Joined: 27 Jun 2014 |
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| 10 May 2015 12:38 PM |
| @Pookie much mistakes. Check YOUR eyes. |
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DomoMojo
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| Joined: 27 Jun 2014 |
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| 10 May 2015 12:42 PM |
"If your Reason are Valid" - Reasons, there's two reasons. "Please before asking to be a character" Forgot a comma I'm pretty sure. Bunch of letters capitalized in the middle of a sentence.
Game desc: "1. This will use Grammar." You capitalized in the middle of sentence and your post didn't do better."
Those are some of the mistakes? That pookie is why you must check your eyes. Don't criticize people because you think they are wrong.
No offense to you staraarin.
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| 10 May 2015 12:45 PM |
Forums is also spelled wrong, "apart" is meant to be "a part", proper nouns are not capitalized, pronoun antecedent agreement is off, bad subject-verb agreement, and a few sentence fragments.
Lord of all things, breaded and unbreaded. |
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| 10 May 2015 10:19 PM |
| Why should I even reply to that T.T When I was surrounded by complete n00bs in a game?? I am not saying you are a n00b. It's just that I had bad times dude. So, I might not be as good saying that people are wrong. But it's just that I have bad times. |
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gIuton
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| Joined: 21 Apr 2015 |
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| 10 May 2015 10:32 PM |
I should be in because I'm mexican, unique, have a sombrero, and you could make me as a humorous character, someone who is sorta dumb and just makes the game a bit more entertaining.
Ey you like my sombrero? | rip hiddenreporter |
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| 11 May 2015 07:00 PM |
Reasons:
1.I supported you with my map "metallic base"
2.I am a friend of your's. |
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| 12 May 2015 01:28 PM |
@Up top
Great reasons C: You be famous at midnight c: |
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| 15 May 2015 08:55 PM |
| Remember to add me as a traitorous dark clone |
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| 23 May 2015 10:44 PM |
Subject: Characters in star orb series
Reason 1: I am a creative funny silly guy :D (I also like to make faces with the keyboard such as :3
Reason 2:I love your games and other orbs (dark, food, and revenge)
Reason 3: (yeah I just did that, had 3 reasons makes me a cool guy and a rebel :3) Anyway reason 3 is I/m always willing to help a friend in need with something. (that makes me nice, Now I feel as if I accomplished something Hooray) |
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| 27 May 2015 02:20 PM |
| is it just me or has this forum turned into finding mistakes about writing? |
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| 27 May 2015 06:36 PM |
| you are gotta add me to star orb...right... |
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| 31 May 2015 04:50 PM |
When they will read it?
Anyway,let me write other reasons.
1. I wanna be in the series,i am kind.
2. I support you. |
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Luminak
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| Joined: 27 May 2012 |
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| 31 May 2015 07:16 PM |
me, name me Chicko the chicken 1.I'm a intersting character 2. noobs like chickens :D |
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| 01 Jun 2015 04:54 AM |
| My Name Is Emma The Star Girl 1.I Light Up The Sky 2.I Like Stars |
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| 04 Jun 2015 02:33 PM |
Guys,stop interrupting my forum/reply,please..
Also, @up
You need more razonable reasons.
And also you don't know even build! |
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Sega659
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| Joined: 15 Aug 2014 |
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Sega659
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| Joined: 15 Aug 2014 |
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| 12 Jun 2015 10:55 PM |
reasons? 1.i like helping friends in need 2.your games are very very good also you are great as a youtuber |
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