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| 07 May 2015 09:54 PM |
I've developed the first paragraph and my English teacher is praising for my "scholarly" writing.
It's the first two paragraphs for an analysis of "The road not taken by Robert Frost"
At a first glance, this poem is talking about two simple roads. But as you go deeper into this masterpiece, you find that it’s not just talking about two simple roads, but the decisions that you make in your lifetime, and how rare it is to have the chance to undo a choice you’ve made. This idea is perfectly exemplified by an allegory of choosing which road to go on.
In the first stanza, we are told that one traveler was walking in the woods in fall, and the roads diverged. Figuratively, this means that a person had to make a decision in life. Then the traveler attempts to make a choice of which path to go on. He looks where it bent in the undergrowth, and that would be nearly impossible to see. This means that the person, both literally and figuratively, had to make a difficult decision.
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| 07 May 2015 09:54 PM |
Yes, I'm on my alt This is weapon343 as you can see on my siggy
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| 07 May 2015 09:54 PM |
not really scholarly so to say your teacher just probably isn't used to seeing actual decent writing |
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| 07 May 2015 09:55 PM |
Kind of edgy, exaggeration. Your teacher might have something for you.
I will fite you on the beaches, I will fite you on the landing grounds, I will fite you in the fields and in the streets, I will fite you in the hills. I will fite you irl. |
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| 07 May 2015 09:57 PM |
Thx, this is my second draft
im in seventh grade gifted
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| 07 May 2015 09:58 PM |
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| 07 May 2015 09:59 PM |
| I think the teacher was just amazed by the vocabulary which honestly isn't much to be amazed about. |
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| 07 May 2015 10:00 PM |
how can i improve
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