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| 04 May 2015 05:35 PM |
I was standing beside Matt, and was in the casual USCPF attire: dirty boots, a fair green uniform, and flak jacket. I had the "rarest of the rare" backpack, which nearly no one else wears, due to them being too weak and or they just don't want to. Matt was standing, looking ahead, and then we heard shouts coming from the actual fort. It was a recon who was on shift, he said "Oi, a party of bandits coming from the north east!" I though that it was a small time raid, but it sure wasn't. I was almost about to drop from weariness. I'm sure many other people were fatigued too. It all happened in a flash, bullets flying, gunshots echoing throughout the dunes, and smoke rising from both the USCPF and the bandits. The group charged forward, going in a "ballistic" type mode, which they didn't seem to care about being shot, therefor they ran out of cover almost always. We saw that the raiding party had us outnumbered by three to one. They kept marching forward, and some of them dropped from being shot. I heard screams and orders coming throughout Fort Outlook. I wasn't sure if Matt was telling me to get the others, or to stay in my position. Soldiers, whom which were heavily armed, ran out the barracks, ready to fight. Four artillerymen, two for each howitzer, got on and loaded the artillery. Shot after shot, the artillery hit, making body parts fly, and blood soar. I felt a thud beside me, and turned to see Antonio Ramirez Montoya by my side, he was always a great friend and was trust worthy. This was my first defense from a raid, yet it wasn't going so well. I was a 1st lieutenant in the ranks, yet never defended from a raid. I saw more men gather by the barricades, and the howitzers were firing once every 30 seconds. I head a shark slush-like sound, and turned to Matt, to see that he has stopped. Matt dropped him gun, and fell face first into the sand. I saw a bullet hole in the side of his head, with slabs of flesh lying beside it. I nearly gagged, for it wasn't an easy sight. I thought I was left CO, because Matt has died, but then I remembered Bob Figglebacon, a personal horror to me. I turned to look for Bob, then say him laying on the ground, un-moving, and groaning in pain. He was shot in the chest, and the medics were working overtime, and they couldn't fit enough people in the med bay. Bob Figglebacon was somehow unnoticed by the medics. I swiftly stood up, and shot a bandit dead, one shot in the chest, another to his neck. I saw three more bandits drop, I crouched behind cover, and heard the bullets whizzing by me. I turned, and saw fresh blood spread across the sand, and also corpses littered the area. There was echoing shots, yet I turned to the artillery, which the men working it were shot. One of them was still alive, but wounded. I saw more men approaching, and one of them carried some MG-like weapon. A UR-22 could be seen in the distance, coming. The man with the unusual weapon set it down, and began spraying the UR-22. I stood up, and shot in his direction, but he was out of range for my Levi-3. Andrea Davis was on the wall, spraying at oncoming raiders, Preston Wolf was shot dead, and he fell off of the wall. The raid was seeming to become a nightmare, but it was anything except a nightmare. The corpses were enough to make me sick, but the blood and body parts of the bandits and the USCPF were even more eerie. I was beginning to break from the battle, it has been 30 minutes into the raid, and 1/7th of Fort Outlook is dead. The raiders kept pushing forwards. I thought that this was the end, yet I didn't know what would come to the future. There was radio chatter across Hawaii. Apparently Fort Outlook wasn't alone in the raids, there were two other forts that were under attack. One of them was captured, the other was winning the battle. I remained in cover, afraid for my life. I heard gunshots beginning to lighten up, but there were corpses aside me, and a bullet whizzed past me making me drop my Levi-3. Before I could get a grasp on reality, I had a barrel against the back of my head, and three men were in front of me. I was cuffed, and brought by the flagpole. Where the wounded were slaughtered, alongside the medics too. I was sat down, and then Antonio was escorted next to me. I had no idea where the rest were, unless we were the only survivors. The "boss" of the group had a man stand behind me. I was unaware what they were going to do next. I suddenly felt a sharp pain in my back, and the core was small. The pain began to flush throughout my body, and stopped at my feet. My back felt like it was throbbing, and I turned my head, just enough to see the combat knife sticking in my back, right on my spine too. I felt weaker by the second, and then another man come next to me, holding a low powered pistol. He pressed it against my gut, and pulled the trigger. The shot echoed through out the dunes. I screamed in pain, and stopped, then suddenly dropped my head against the sand. My cheek was pressing on the sand, and was a little soaked from blood there. My body never has felt the pain of hot lead merging with my skin, and that was the consequence. Everything went dark, and there was laughter of the victors. I slowly faded back into reality, to note that I was still alive... --HueOsaurus, and his terrible writing skills. |
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| 04 May 2015 05:41 PM |
| Huehue u have bad writing m8 |
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| 04 May 2015 05:43 PM |
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| 04 May 2015 05:48 PM |
| All I read was the things saying paragraph |
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Udoxas
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| 04 May 2015 05:48 PM |
| That was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, that was not spam. It was simply teaching you to use paragraphs to help you encourage writing. I showed you how to use them properly, yet you still say "eh... no". That is very ignorant. You turned down my honest lesson on becoming a better writer. That is very disrespectful, and you will not become a good writer that way. You need to respect people, because you will be praised for your work if you do become a better writer, and calling people's lessons and praises spam is also disrespectful. I tell you, |
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| 04 May 2015 05:49 PM |
| It wasn't ignorance, it was me turning down your spam... |
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| 04 May 2015 05:55 PM |
| Have me in the next one pls. |
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| 04 May 2015 05:56 PM |
| what I mean to say was, http://gyazo.com/5e889bbeffa8e0226c5e8c07082f9d95 "Sharp" instead of shark |
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| 04 May 2015 05:57 PM |
| As explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful, because as explained in the last post, that was not spam and it was an honest lesson to help you become a great writer. If you keep turning down this so called spam, you will just become worse of a writer. I personally think that if you keep being disrespectful like that, you will just fail and fail over and over again. You should listen to constructive criticism, as if you don't, you will never become better and will never be able to become the writer you always wanted to be, because calling constructive criticism spam is disrespectful. |
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| 04 May 2015 05:58 PM |
| @Corp, Just PM me your char information |
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| 04 May 2015 05:59 PM |
| And for the love of god, I turn down your spam because it is annoying. |
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