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| 04 May 2015 04:57 PM |
So, I thought I would make a mini TGE story, probably the first one to do this, but here it goes. (I might be making marines look overpowered, but it is just for the sake of the story.)
The Marines Journal Entry 1: The blood stains and the stormtrooper bodies and helmets were scattered around the terrain. There were so many speeder parts there it turned into a trash pile. There was blasters scattered around the control points. This place was recently attacked by the Rebels. The bloodlust was for 1 day and 8 hours. Neither side won. There was barely any rebels or stormtroopers left. Those who were left were stuck in hiding, scared for the dead and how much more will die. The forces were repleted on the Empire side massively. We started with 1531 troops, we ended with 109, most wounded. Earlier I was brought to Tatooine from a MAAT. Me and my fellow marines were sent there as a frontline mission. We needed to kill the rest of the Rebels, and then get the heck out of there. The side doors of the MAAT opened. Me and 6 other marines got out of the MAAT and got ready to fight. We saw 5 wounded troops right close to where we landed. Our medic healed them while we went and fought. We were under the command of Eric, which he told us to get speeders and drive to Bravo, some ship that was right by the scarlac pit. When we got there, I looked inside the pit. There was helmets flooding the hole, and rebel's bodies on the sides. We checked B. I slowly looked under the ship, no-one. We captured B then used our speeders to get to the rebel outpost. It will take us hours.
END. (Should I make more? Was this good? Was it bad? Put in the comments on this forum page please, also, please dont hate on this, I am pointing to you, noobs.)
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| 04 May 2015 06:25 PM |
deez nuts are delicious
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| 04 May 2015 07:33 PM |
| This is really good. This reminds of the 501st Journal in Star Wars Battlefront 2. |
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| 05 May 2015 04:33 AM |
| Thank you for a real post. |
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| 05 May 2015 04:52 AM |
...?
TGE Marine Journal Entry two here: |
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| 05 May 2015 04:53 AM |
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=161590650 http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=161590650 http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=161590650 http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=161590650 ^TGE Marine Journal Entry 2. |
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