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| 02 May 2015 07:14 PM |
I spend all night on a really detailed RP and just because it used present tense in the plot nobody wants to join it and I get a criticized a whole bunch when I literally joined the forum yesterday and IT WAS MY FIRST RP! I don't think I've ever even seen a mystery RP before so what gives you guys the right to criticize me?!
I based the present tense plot off of a roleplay by rockmax2112alt which can be found HERE: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=161248237 SO I THOUGHT PRESENT TENSE WAS A LEGITIMATE WAY TO WRITE A PLOT FOR A ROLEPLAY! YOU DON'T HAVE TO CRITICIZE ME AND CLAIM IT'S NOT A REAL RP BECAUSE OF IT!
I thought I was going to find a nice and helpful community of writers, not a bunch of idiot critics who insult people who don't write something the way they like! :( |
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| 02 May 2015 07:17 PM |
| It looks to me like it's just one person being a ...donkey |
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Pruz
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| 02 May 2015 07:17 PM |
| Some people here... Tend to stay negative. I'm pretty sure that is what you mostly got. |
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| 02 May 2015 07:18 PM |
| So this roleplay http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=161422823 isn't bad? :( I tried my best and it's my first roleplay... |
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| 02 May 2015 07:20 PM |
| Have you ever heard about interest check? That is the first step in making an RP. |
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| 02 May 2015 07:22 PM |
I did do one, and people said they liked it...
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=161422823 |
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| 02 May 2015 07:22 PM |
No, Phantom, it's definitely not bad.
And Sage, it's not NECESSARY. It's just a way to see if people will be into it, maybe build a little hype for the roleplay, but an interest check is by no means necessary for making a RP. |
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| 02 May 2015 07:23 PM |
wrong link sorry
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=161369504 |
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xbikeman
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| 02 May 2015 07:27 PM |
Phantom, I tend not to be negative. Some other fellow robloxians criticize just because they don't like it, or can't make something as good. To be honest, we have very little who actually give CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. I am fortunately one of those people, but I don't really need to give it because most rps I join are great.
I'll actually join your rp, it's sounds cool. |
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| 02 May 2015 07:31 PM |
No problem. Wanna check out mine?
They are
School Of Languard The Oaks (UNFINISHED) Three Skies Tsunami Waves Ghosts |
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| 02 May 2015 07:33 PM |
I'll do just that! :D
Can you send me links to them? I don't want to lose track if they disappear from the front page before I make my character sheet for any of them. |
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| 02 May 2015 07:40 PM |
It is good to have interest checks and your own writing style. This will make your rps more unique, especially when collabing.
Some of my works, with help from others, are:
Control: The Power of a Parasite A touch 'til death Anonymous band Dark Half |
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| 02 May 2015 07:46 PM |
^ K.
School Of Languard: http:www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=159820177 The Oaks: I lost the link D: Three Skies: I uh... also lost the link :P Tsunami Waves: http:www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=161374928 Ghosts: http:www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=161009170 |
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| 02 May 2015 07:52 PM |
| @bike, Cosmic is turning out to be a challenge to draw, so I don't know if it'll be as good as I thought it would've. |
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| 02 May 2015 07:54 PM |
Phantom chill out I made an rp that took five days on and it died don't feel entirely bad |
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xbikeman
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| 02 May 2015 07:55 PM |
@sk8er
Can you just draw her in front of a mountain then? |
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| 02 May 2015 07:56 PM |
Are you kidding me? Silverhawk52 is just a break. Ignore him. He litterally made like, must have been his first RP or something in MARCH. it was a bad zombie rp claiming that other zombie rp's "weren't serious" (which indicates to me he's blind) and now he rips into your half-decent RP that was WAAAAhhAAAYY better than his?
UGh. He even PMed me claiming how wrong I was about his cruddy RP. |
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xbikeman
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| 02 May 2015 07:58 PM |
@gweb
Wow. Thats.. thats a wow. |
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| 02 May 2015 08:03 PM |
| @bike, I can, but the main problem is that I'm used to drawing more masculine characters, so I'm quite new to female characters. |
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| 02 May 2015 08:07 PM |
okay sorry I got a little mad
silverhawk if you read this i'm sure your a good guy
but claiming to "r@pe" a half-decent RP is little
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xbikeman
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| 02 May 2015 08:07 PM |
@sk8er
xD. Hey, it's important as a artist to experience new things. I'm going to a art summer camp this summer, to do stuff like pastels and sandpaper. I also did a art class for a few weeks in Winter, which spread me out. I missed two of the classes though, due to me being sick.
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| 02 May 2015 08:09 PM |
| @bike, yeah, also I've only been drawing with this style for like two months. |
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| 02 May 2015 08:35 PM |
This forum isn't mean, per se. Allow me to give you some context. When I was new, my writing sucked, and whenever someone pointed it out, I biched about it. This went on for months. And then I realized that they had a point, and I started accepting criticism. And my writing improved to where it is now. I didn't know it at the time, but my writing sucked.
Your writing, however... It probably sucks as well. But it's meant to suck, this is your second day here. |
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