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| 24 Apr 2015 08:48 PM |
Hah,Orange Crush,More Like I Crushed Competition Kid Your Average Like Everyone Eles,Don't Talk [S] Saying You Flammed Tyga And All,Please,REAL Votes Copying Off On Google,And Them Quotes Thought You'd Diss Me,Trying To Dodge Every Move But You Don't Care What I Say Or Prove Game On,Lets See If You Can Compete With Me Hunt You Down,Hang You Up On That Tree Your [F]'ed Up,G[3]y,And Stupid,Wasting Time On Tyga "Unwanted Beef" What You Mean?You Dissing My Homies You Create That Fire,I Spit The Fire Now What Kid?"Orange Crush"? Nope,Your Crushed And You Went Down The Toilet, And Get Flushed You And Your 2.0 [S],[F] Off Kiddo Oh And When You Comment On This, This Is An Alt Pxddo I Shipped Off Metrix,Now's You To Go You're Average Like Everyone Eles, But Nah,Your "THE BEST",But Your Slow But You Made Gold,Platnium Or Diamond?NO Ya,Bias Votes Cuz You Think Orange Won He Didn't Won,But I Don't Do This For Fun I Don't Care If I Get Haters,Go Ahead And Hate On Me After You're Done,Your Gunna Cry Like A Little Creep Nope,No Bias Votes,Its Either Who Have The Best Disses Between Us But The Bias Votes Again.I Don't Trust You're Confused About Who You Going To Face But Your Angry Right Now,I Rest My Case Reply This.Ik This Isn't The Best I Try But I'll Keep Reply. |
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zepher32
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| 24 Apr 2015 09:08 PM |
I like how your rhyming scheme is off and how you don't put spaces after your punctuation, it really allows for an interesting reading. |
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| 24 Apr 2015 09:13 PM |
I'm gonna give honest and hard criticism on this. But, why get in this beef that isn't yours? If its because Tyga's your buddy, I can somewhat see that. Anyways...
"Hah,Orange Crush,More Like I Crushed Competition Kid Your Average Like Everyone Eles,Don't Talk [S]"
You can't really either.
"Saying You Flammed Tyga And All,Please,REAL Votes Copying Off On Google,And Them Quotes"
The REAL Votes said he won. Damn, EVERY voting poll and thread said Orange won. Also, I haven't seen any copied quotes.
"Thought You'd Diss Me,Trying To Dodge Every Move But You Don't Care What I Say Or Prove"
You actually said you'd diss him, he said "Ok".
"Game On,Lets See If You Can Compete With Me Hunt You Down,Hang You Up On That Tree"
That was a struggle bar.
"Your [F]'ed Up,G[3]y,And Stupid,Wasting Time On Tyga "Unwanted Beef" What You Mean?You Dissing My Homies"
Well, your homie is freaking annoying. Everyone is dissing him.
"You Create That Fire,I Spit The Fire"
Now, this line actually confused me. You said he copies bar, and you just said he makes fire, but you spit that fire, meaning he made the good lyrics and you copied him. Unless, I mean, your admiring him as a source for another plot?
"Now What Kid?"Orange Crush"?"
No, not another plot.
"Nope,Your Crushed And You Went Down The Toilet, And Get Flushed"
That was a struggle bar [2]
"You And Your 2.0 [S],[F] Off Kiddo"
Whats the problem if he wears 2.0? Are you really judging people's ROBLOX clothing? I mean, I can see Tyga doing that, but I thought you were smart!
(Now I'm just going after parts I had something to say about)
"I Shipped Off Metrix,Now's You To Go"
You always mention Metrix for some reason. Like, move on. I've beat alot of people, do I walk around saying "Ha, I won, you lost". Stop bragging.
"Ya,Bias Votes Cuz You Think Orange Won"
There were atleast 3 threads for voting, all of them said Orange won. I've made on, I think Chich made one, and that Ro-Rap News thingy made one, everyone agreed Chich won. Thats facts.
"Nope,No Bias Votes,Its Either Who Have The Best Disses Between Us"
In that case, you better be ready.
"But The Bias Votes Again.I Don't Trust"
Oh, because you and DZA voting for Tyga isn't bias? His 2 "homies"? Chich actually won.
Anyways, 2/10 for me. Could of been better, and alot of the stuff you typed here wasn't actually true, and it seems like you don't know what your talking about (not trying to sound cocky). |
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| 24 Apr 2015 09:18 PM |
^ That's Why Stated "Reply This.Ik This Isn't The Best I Try But I'll Keep Reply." |
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| 24 Apr 2015 09:19 PM |
| Relax it's just Dx's bias opinions |
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| 24 Apr 2015 09:24 PM |
@CJ alright
@Young Yeah, but this isn't bias:
You cant rap |
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| 24 Apr 2015 09:30 PM |
| What you need to learn is how to shut your mouth and not talk a whole lot of sht. I'm being real with you right now. You wouldn't be in all this mess if you stopped talking. |
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| 24 Apr 2015 09:32 PM |
| I'm not gonna get to your level, but seems like King Hurricane was wrong. Your about to get bodied 4 times if you keep up with that tone. |
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| 24 Apr 2015 09:33 PM |
| Plus, I was just giving you advice on how to get your head out the dirt, and moving out of the beef. |
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| 24 Apr 2015 09:33 PM |
| Don't say sht about me I won't say sht about you |
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| 24 Apr 2015 09:34 PM |
| Alrighty then. I was just trying to help you. |
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Cybertro
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| 25 Apr 2015 02:33 AM |
@DX
"Oh, because you and DZA voting for Tyga isn't bias? His 2 "homies"? Chich actually won."
>lol, stfu. i wasn't involved so why is my name leaving your mouth. |
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| 25 Apr 2015 08:54 AM |
You were.
''PhD in Internet Retarhrdation |
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Zokulzoh
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| 25 Apr 2015 08:59 AM |
"Relax it's just Dx's bias opinions"
I'm gonna diss tyga right now, you ready?
Your bars are rehearsed, and they're still crap, you should just walk away
because
you can't rap.
also the opinion was pretty legit and well thought out |
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stardash
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| 25 Apr 2015 09:01 AM |
| I stopped reading when I saw your grammar. |
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| 25 Apr 2015 10:47 AM |
| Star Can't Rap,She Just A Fan. |
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Erened
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| 25 Apr 2015 10:58 AM |
| This was garbage. Terrible. Not sure if I should even reply to this trash. |
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Erened
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| 25 Apr 2015 11:09 AM |
And what do you mean ride? You g3y, sir?
Also, your grammar was beyond terrible. |
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Cybertro
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