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| 24 Apr 2015 04:45 PM |
[Intro] Welcome to Diss culture, where i give out exposures no closure, so lets get it, the faster i start the quicker its over
[verse/Keyyon] Aye let me begin to say that i apologize at this moment Heres my [d], Master why wont you do me like u did hurricant and blow it. Shout out to Indiella i cant diss her cause i have no problem but shout out to that dxpey person who went diamond on his album Congratulations thats the only piece of jewelry you can say you have oh right, my bad, you cant because its fake, But hating isnt my path Santos mess with me ill lyrically slice you in half shove needles through your calves, and fill it in with beetles LosSantos, you got swag? well ill admit your not on fleek tho fleek means [s],your not the [s] hell your not even hotter than Jubril thoughts of men hes daydreaming about hopsin blowin kisses to speakers knockers and at the doors action bronson is knockin to join the ****** united party while moms out shoppin i had to censor that line so i wont get blocked and my flow, is outta control, i feel like this verse isnt my standards Hurricane heard i returned and [s] on himself, but this kid still wear pampers I just feel like gettin a [f] AK and uzi and blast every single camper But this isnt me, naw man im not even rhyming like i used too Even devilish said that the old me could body the new me The thing about that is i dont believe i changed one bit you can say i fell off yea well you fell on my [D] Hate on me, say im childish for sayin DEEZ NUTZ in a diss to Santos I still believe i went ham tho, he thinks hes on fire? dude your a scented candle My vocabulary isnt the best in my opinion i think its small But when i spit hard, it crashes into your skull like a pirate cannonball Diss culture, so i guess i gotta diss pop Icons So lets start with iggy, your music videos are worse than the first tron
[V2/ Black Shady] I dont like Demi, Justin, or even jeniffer Hudson I'll leave them in a body bag, with joe budden, Lil wayne, Drake, Lupe, and Young Thvg husband "YOUR NOTHING BUT A.." im feelin like kanye right now yall cant tell me nothin When the street king Immortal album supposed to be released?? Do what drake did and make that [b] accidentally leak. So i turn on my tv but its stuck on MTV and im tryin to get to BET, or maybe the warriors play so ABC but i cant find the remote i lift the couch and spin it around, then i heard this sound i was listening to bed of lies, with skylar and nicki minaj when i heard some noise, so i opened my garage I saw kevin hart throat getting pressed in by a dart I seen charlie sean stickin his fist between a dqpe f1end jeans In the corner Tyga and Chris was sing ayo I saw tony yayo head in a container full a mayo All i wanted was to find the remote to watch some comcast cable Keyyon isnt better than danny brown talkin with his mouth full of cheddar Twista, Tech, are some true choppers, [f] speaker knockers ill bang his head against the locker, if sia was over the sea hanging onto me I'd most likely drop her Rihanna ill Mock her, And take Dr.DRE to see an actual doctor cause he had us waiting for detox to drop, we went yonkers like that dude searching for fairy odd parents, whats his name oh yeah crocker But like steph curry i am captain clutch, Tell a [n] to look left, then from the right i [f] punch [s] on your lawn, and stand their until its dawn Dissin the entire culture, Even myself, im so black that when the suns gone Shady's missing like a wanted Artist thats a Con.
END OF ROUND 1..
Shady or Keyyon
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| 24 Apr 2015 04:51 PM |
| Im going to say.....a draw |
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| 24 Apr 2015 04:55 PM |
FLAWS: 1)Dissing Someone Who Records Raps And Shames You Irl 2)"Heres my [d], Master why wont you do me like u did hurricant and blow it."-That's The ONLY Line That Killed The Song.LITERLLY. 3)"I saw tony yayo head in a container full a mayo"-That Too 4)Your Song Don't Make Sense 5)"Twista, Tech, are some true choppers, [f] speaker knockers"-YOU Will Get Yourself Killed By Saying That 6)"Hate on me, say im childish for sayin DEEZ NUTZ in a diss to Santos"-Pratically You Are Childish And This Song Have Soo Much Flaws I Can't Even Think Of It. 7)"Welcome to Diss culture, where i give out exposures"-I Give Out More Exposures Than You.Ok Enogh With These Flaws. CLEAN: Their's Nothing Clean Of This Song.
My Ratings... 1/10 This Is JUST Worse.
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| 24 Apr 2015 05:15 PM |
My goodness, he's done it again
8/10 |
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| 24 Apr 2015 05:24 PM |
This is diss to me or?
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| 24 Apr 2015 08:30 PM |
Idk is ot
And i am starting to record dude who pointed out my flaws Isnt a song just lyrics, acapella, diff egos
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| 24 Apr 2015 08:56 PM |
I liked the part where you named random celebrities for no other reason than to look more credible |
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Cybertro
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| 25 Apr 2015 02:51 AM |
Shady won.
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Bias?????? I think yes, autistic boy. |
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| 25 Apr 2015 09:23 AM |
I'll consider it a diss, except a response.
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| 25 Apr 2015 12:28 PM |
Ok I dont c how its a diss to u anyway lol |
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| 25 Apr 2015 01:07 PM |
Even devilish said that the old me could body the new me The thing about that is i dont believe i changed one bit you can say i fell off yea well you fell on my [D] Hate on me, say im childish for sayin DEEZ NUTZ in a diss to Santos I still believe i went ham tho, he thinks hes on fire? dude your a scented candle My vocabulary isnt the best in my opinion i think its small But when i spit hard, it crashes into your skull like a pirate cannonball
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| 25 Apr 2015 02:59 PM |
Im done talkin bout u after i said bit Line when i say u can say i fell off im addressing my haters And rest was aimed at santos
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