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| 20 Apr 2015 10:25 PM |
inspired by groundskeeper
i am darkness incarnate; a raven black color without a shred of light i am a demon formed by satan himself a warrior of the dead, a prisoner of the living i am bound by these chains that hold me, my hands are locked, my feet are tied, darkness is the key to my freedom but my freedom is made of light
*silent snapping and awkward coughs*
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shysun
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| 20 Apr 2015 10:28 PM |
thanks guys, it really helps me get through this depression that lasted for like an hour
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| 20 Apr 2015 10:29 PM |
| the angst is strong with this one |
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| 20 Apr 2015 10:29 PM |
here's attention, money, and sympathy now gtfo of my house |
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| 20 Apr 2015 10:31 PM |
| I like it, actually. It's so well put together... I dunno how to describe it. Could be used in a movie mantra. |
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ascensio
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| 20 Apr 2015 10:32 PM |
wow hella edgy and so now i cringe so much because you're angsty
ez haiku |
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| 20 Apr 2015 10:32 PM |
@grounds no i wanted it to be bad like angsty teen bad :(
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shysun
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| 20 Apr 2015 10:33 PM |
| someone give the OP a Oscar! |
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| 20 Apr 2015 10:34 PM |
@shy an oscar one of the only grammar thing i always have to correct
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shysun
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| 20 Apr 2015 10:35 PM |
| sorry I wasnt aware of that |
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| 20 Apr 2015 10:36 PM |
"@grounds no i wanted it to be bad like angsty teen bad :("
It was good though. You paired "darkness" with "incarnate". Props. |
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| 20 Apr 2015 10:37 PM |
@grounds wait i thought that was cliche i've seen it used tons of times lol
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