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Re: ot heres a poem i wrote

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vanillolita is not online. vanillolita
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20 Apr 2015 10:25 PM
inspired by groundskeeper

i am darkness incarnate;
a raven black color without a shred of light
i am a demon formed by satan himself
a warrior of the dead, a prisoner of the living
i am bound by these chains that hold me,
my hands are locked,
my feet are tied,
darkness is the key to my freedom
but my freedom is made of light

*silent snapping and awkward coughs*


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shysun is not online. shysun
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20 Apr 2015 10:25 PM
/tear drop
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monyman9988 is not online. monyman9988
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20 Apr 2015 10:27 PM
I almost cried
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vanillolita is not online. vanillolita
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20 Apr 2015 10:28 PM
thanks guys, it really helps me get through this depression that lasted for like an hour


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AFartInTheForest is not online. AFartInTheForest
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20 Apr 2015 10:29 PM
the angst is strong with this one
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oddblooger is not online. oddblooger
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20 Apr 2015 10:29 PM
here's attention, money, and sympathy
now gtfo of my house
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Groundskeeper is not online. Groundskeeper
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20 Apr 2015 10:31 PM
I like it, actually. It's so well put together... I dunno how to describe it. Could be used in a movie mantra.
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ascensio is not online. ascensio
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20 Apr 2015 10:32 PM
wow hella edgy
and so now i cringe so much
because you're angsty

ez haiku
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vanillolita is not online. vanillolita
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20 Apr 2015 10:32 PM
@grounds
no i wanted it to be bad
like
angsty teen bad :(


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shysun is not online. shysun
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20 Apr 2015 10:33 PM
someone give the OP a Oscar!
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vanillolita is not online. vanillolita
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20 Apr 2015 10:34 PM
@shy
an oscar
one of the only grammar thing i always have to correct


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shysun is not online. shysun
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20 Apr 2015 10:35 PM
sorry I wasnt aware of that
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Groundskeeper is not online. Groundskeeper
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20 Apr 2015 10:36 PM
"@grounds
no i wanted it to be bad
like
angsty teen bad :("

It was good though. You paired "darkness" with "incarnate". Props.
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vanillolita is not online. vanillolita
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20 Apr 2015 10:37 PM
@grounds
wait i thought that was cliche
i've seen it used tons of times lol


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