Cybertro
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| 20 Apr 2015 10:11 PM |
[Hook] It’s been awhile since I, been here, but I, Wanna make sure, this is, sincere, Hiatus, yeah, yeah, Hiatus
Haven’t written in what feels like a year, But you better buckle your seatbelts cause I’m changin’ gears, Throwing away an old image, in with the new, Focusing on my currency, drop an album or two, Two for two, how would that look to you? Homeboy from the west coast puttin’ a waste to his talents, Signed a few contracts now I’m in financial balance, Forget a home I got me a palace, but maybe I should think temples, Because why be a king if you feel like a God in your temple, thoughts clouding your mental, And I don’t try to be gentle, where is that gonna get you? Like all Gods, you need to strike fear because it’s essential, So I strive to the top, underrated for days, I’ve been studying english to change my ways, How to get a message across, how to be lyrically stable, Make sure I never have another have a failure like Untitled, Because I’m a blank canvas, and my future is untitled, yeah.
[Hook] It’s been awhile since I, been here, but I, Wanna make sure, this is, sincere, Hiatus, yeah, yeah, Hiatus
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KidVigi
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| 20 Apr 2015 10:13 PM |
Some rhymes seem forced to me. Other than that is was good
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Cybertro
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Cybertro
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Cybertro
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Cybertro
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| 20 Apr 2015 10:27 PM |
every1 will be like dza
wtf name stealer
thrs only 1 dza
not fake wanna be |
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Cybertro
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calirolls
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| 20 Apr 2015 10:37 PM |
dammit i thought this song meant ro rappers were going on hiatus
permanently
-1/17.57 ruined my dreams
-i had hobbies until the RT nation attacked- |
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Cybertro
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| 20 Apr 2015 11:01 PM |
@cali
illegitimate criticism, but thanks! |
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Cybertro
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| 22 Apr 2015 06:56 PM |
| Focused way to hard on trying to spit rhymes but you're claiming to be lyrically stable, tyr to add more of a vocab to your raps, don't be afriad to research words and add them to your verses 6.5/10 |
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Cybertro
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| 22 Apr 2015 07:46 PM |
| High vocabulary n isn't being lyrical lmaoooo |
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Cybertro
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| 22 Apr 2015 08:51 PM |
@ken
is that directed to toledo? |
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| 22 Apr 2015 10:31 PM |
Both of you, being lyrical is like multis, metaphors, word play, punchlines and flow.
high vocab is cool and all but you dont need it... not everyone gotta be like AZ |
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Cybertro
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| 22 Apr 2015 11:14 PM |
@kenzi
I never said I wanted high vocab lololololololol. |
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Erened
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| 23 Apr 2015 07:25 AM |
| I use vocabulary in my songs with rhyme |
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| 23 Apr 2015 08:34 AM |
| ^You don't have to... It makes you look stupid,tryhard (who would try hard ona kids site?), makes you have poor delivery if you ask me |
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