Chichland
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| 16 Apr 2015 03:15 PM |
Verse:
What the heck does this (MF) not get Dropped your a** harder than a (f)king pipette You're probably the worst grammar user I've met Watch me take this (f)king bish out to the vet I'm writing this parody but you're the actual clown Everyone who reads your (f)king lyrics always has a frown Why is this battle still going on, I already bought you down Bodied you twice now get the he** outta my town Dummy How much effort does it take to write a rhyme of your own I'm calling you and you're grammar out, don't even need a phone Running this mafia killing like my name was Capone Your rhymes as cold as ice cream, bish where's your cone Last two disses wasn't even my best Looks like you're a bit drowsy, do you need a rest You have a brain of a bird, where's your nest Lack of intelligence pilgrim now go out West Did you even attend school, how about Geography class Always getting sht wrong, did you even pass Get off your computer and go look at a map Get Dev's country right before you get a slap I'm the newest in the game and I'm beating your a** I've shattered your dreams like it was nothing but glass Lawnmow your body because it (f)king looks like grass Called you hairier than a Wookie, make you swim like bass Your first diss was nothing, it (f)king made me laugh I'm annihilating your function like it was a graph Trying to start beef with everybody like you was a calf You've just gotten schooled boy, better call the staff
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| 16 Apr 2015 03:52 PM |
| I liked this because of the Capone and Star Wars references, and the rhymes are more clever than what I usually see. 7/10. |
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Chichland
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| 16 Apr 2015 03:59 PM |
| Thanks dude. I tried more metaphors, and in the end, it was pretty successful. |
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Chichland
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| 16 Apr 2015 04:01 PM |
| And guys, please excuse the poor grammar. As I said, this was written in Galaxy's style, but all of the lyrics were mine. |
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Chichland
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| 16 Apr 2015 04:23 PM |
| To Galaxy: LMFAOOOOO LIKE IT? |
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Chichland
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Chichland
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| 16 Apr 2015 05:14 PM |
| Open to criticism, leave rates |
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| 16 Apr 2015 05:36 PM |
| I bodied you already and stfu with your weak ass rhymes |
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Chichland
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| 16 Apr 2015 05:44 PM |
Ok, so heres' the tally:
Me- 3 good disses
Tyga- 2 less than average disses
So I think I win. |
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| 16 Apr 2015 05:55 PM |
| All you disses were some sht little ngga I beat you even a fan that doesn't like me said it my ngga |
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| 16 Apr 2015 05:58 PM |
| Orange crush LOL! This kid thinks he's good |
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Chichland
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Chichland
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| 16 Apr 2015 06:19 PM |
@Galaxy
I am pretty good actually compared to you |
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| 16 Apr 2015 06:21 PM |
| What ethnic language is this song about |
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Chichland
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| 16 Apr 2015 06:22 PM |
Galaxy's "rapping".
It was a parody |
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| 16 Apr 2015 06:24 PM |
| Your aren't even my level boy don't make me get on you |
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Chichland
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| 16 Apr 2015 06:26 PM |
| I think you already tried to.. |
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| 16 Apr 2015 06:26 PM |
@chich Is it a parody, or your actual song? |
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Chichland
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| 16 Apr 2015 06:28 PM |
It's my diss toward Galaxy. I wrote it with loads of curse words, because I made a bet with Galaxy that he couldn't, and of course he failed. And so, incorporating my own lyrics into it along with Galaxy's cursing, I created the above. It's awesome if you think about it
Rates? |
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| 16 Apr 2015 06:28 PM |
| Are you sure it's a parody, because your real lyrics compare to this |
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| 16 Apr 2015 06:29 PM |
| Do you steal galaxies lyrics? |
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Chichland
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| 16 Apr 2015 06:31 PM |
NO. I don't curse in my songs. In this song, I did because I wanted to make fun of Galaxy's tendency to not go a single line without saying "MF" or "GTFO". So I made this song.
Also, I don't steal lyrics, he steals mine in a diss towards me. |
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