lChasel
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| 09 Apr 2015 09:37 PM |
If these walls could talk [x6]
[Chorus] Rap, I just wanna write this line this way Said, I’m a go to a place where the bass sounds thicker Slow the beat down because the pace a little quicker Everyday a real man die, and fake man get richer These walls
[Hook] If these walls could talk I can feel your reign when it cries gold lives inside of you If these walls could talk I love it when I'm spitting it, when I'm spitting it..
[Verse One] If these walls could talk they’d tell me to swim good No boat, I float better than he would No life jacket, I’m not the guard in Nazareth But your flood can be misunderstood Wall telling me they full of pain, resentment Need someone to live in them just to relieve tension Me? I’m just a tenant My lord said these walls vacant more than a minute Yeah, the ladder, it leads to the window of the industry Climbing non-stop and I still got a lot of energy Infiltrating the residence of all my enemies Assassinating everybody, call them kids Kennedys These walls are vulnerable, exclamation Interior pink, color coordinated I interrogated every nook and cranny I mean its still amazing before they couldn’t stand me These walls want to cry tears These walls happier when I’m here These walls never could hold up Every time I come around demolition might crush
[Hook] If these walls could talk I can feel your reign when it cries gold lives inside of you If these walls could talk I love it when I'm spitting it, when I'm spitting it..
[Verse Two]
If these walls could talk they’d tell me to go deep Yelling at me continuously I can see Your defense mechanism is my decision Knock these walls down that’s my religion Walls feeling like they ready to close in I suffocate then catch my second wind I resonate in these walls I don’t know how long I can wait in these walls I’ve been on these streets too long looking at you from the outside in I do my daily service just to see the gates of afterlife And understand that everything I've earned come from sacrifice They sing the same old song about how they walls are always the cleanest I beg to differ, I must’ve missed them I’m not involved I’d rather diss them I’d rather call all you put your wall up Cause when I come around demolition gon’ crush
[Hook] If these walls could talk I can feel your reign when it cries gold lives inside of you If these walls could talk I love it when I'm spitting it, when I'm spitting it..
[Verse Three]
If your walls could talk they’d tell you it’s too late Your destiny accepted your fate Burn accessories and stash them where they are Take the recipe, the bible and god Wall telling you that commissary is low Race wars happening no calling CO No calling your mother to save you Homies say to you, you're reputable, not acceptable Your behavior is sociopathic like a killer that turned snitc\h Walls is telling me you a [B] Only tears you see is from [N]s with tattoos, [On their face] Only thing you could do is say grace And the only thing your mom could do is tell her son to stay safe You pray for appeals hoping the warden could afford them That sentence so important Walls telling you to listen to "Traveled Roads" by me Retaliation is strong you even dream about me Killed my homeboy and God spared your life Dumb criminal got indicted the same night So when you play this song re-read the first verse About me abusing my power so you can hurt About me and her in the shower whenever she [hor]ny About me and her in the after hours of the morning About her baby daddy currently serving life And how she think about you until we meet up at night About the only girl that cared about you when you asked her And how she [F]ing on a ro-rapper If these walls could talk
[Hook] If these walls could talk I can feel your reign when it cries gold lives inside of you If these walls could talk I love it when I'm spitting it, when I'm spitting it..
[Chorus] Rap, I just wanna write this line this way Said, I’m a go to a place where the bass sounds thicker Slow the beat down because the pace a little quicker Everyday a real man die, and fake man get richer These walls
If these walls could talk [6x]
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| 09 Apr 2015 11:26 PM |
| 10/10 amazing, this is the first song ive ever rated a 10/10. perfectly constructed, well written, rhymes on point. |
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| 10 Apr 2015 10:00 AM |
8/10, The verses are quite good. The hook is good too but it does feel as if the hook could be repeated 2 or 3 times. Other than that i like this c: good work chasel! |
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lChasel
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lChasel
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lChasel
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Chichland
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| 15 Apr 2015 04:45 PM |
This is an actual song... I don't get the above posts about "the lyrics", because it's really Kendrick Lamar who wrote this...
These Walls- Kendrick Lamar |
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KidVigi
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| 15 Apr 2015 04:46 PM |
| It's a remix, that's why it says "[Remix]" in the title...Some people can be so oblivious. |
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Chichland
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| 15 Apr 2015 04:50 PM |
| I don;t understand what you remixed... |
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Chichland
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| 15 Apr 2015 04:51 PM |
| And I'm not oblivious, I can freaking read unlike KingofWhack lol. I saw it said remix, but seeing as there is no beat and just lyrics, I didn't see how a ro-rap can be "remixed". Lol care to explain? |
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KidVigi
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| 15 Apr 2015 04:52 PM |
| Well to explain, I changed alot of the lryics, hook, and chorus. and that's how it's remixed. |
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Chichland
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| 15 Apr 2015 04:53 PM |
| Ohh ok gotchu. Lol sorry about that |
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