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| 12 Apr 2015 09:29 PM |
Recently, I made the choice to put all the chapters I complete here so you can track now and view later. So, when I finish a part, it'll be easier to find.
Basically, this is where I put all the chapters. |
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| 12 Apr 2015 10:21 PM |
Chapter 2: Early New Earth (also known as "I kind of got lazy on this chapter")
An Eevee and a man wearing a fez were sitting on a rock together, doing what was probably talking. "So, Eevee, after Mcgood revived us, what do you think we should do?" The man wearing the fez, named Joife, asked. "I saw the person who wanted to destroy the Earth. I believe his name was Pitch. He's the one responsible for all this." The Eevee responded. "What does that have to do with anything?" Joife asked. The Eevee shook her head. "I mean that we should go find Pitch." Joife was shocked. "HE DESTROYED THE EARTH!" Joife shouted. "DO YOU THINK WE'LL BE ABLE TO ACTUALLY FIGHT HIM?" Eevee stared at Joife. "You're right. Maybe I'm just thinking about this too hard..."
A few yards away was another forest, brought back by Mcgood. It was similar to the one that Luffy and Pitch had fought in. Two other beings lay in one of the bushes, listening to the conversation. Their names were Zultra and Tail. "They think it was Pitch's fault. What idiots..." Tail began. "Luffy could have easily threw the sphere with the strength he had. Yet they blame Pitch." Tail continued. Zultra nodded. "Should we go and change their minds?" Zultra asked, his wings unfolding. "Oh, yes we should." Tail said. "One's wearing a fez and another's a simple Eevee. This should be easy." They both came out of the bush, shouting, "HEY! YOU TWO!"
Eevee's ears perked up. "YOU THINK IT WAS PITCH'S FAULT, DON'T YOU?" Tail shouted. "YOU GUYS WOULDN'T KNOW HOW TO FIGHT IF YOU TRAINED FOR I-" He was cut off by Eevee's Tackle. Of course, usually, Tackles aren't that powerful, but Eevee was by far more powerful than any other Pokemon, despite not being in an evolved form. Tail flew back, hitting the ground multiple times. Joife jumped off the rock as well, landing in front of Zultra. Joife kicked him backwards, sending Zultra backwards a few feet. "Tail, this is going to be a huge waste of time. I guess we should just take the cliche 'I'll get you next time!' way." Zultra said, running into the forest. Tail followed suit reluctantly. They seemed to not want to fight at all, anyways. Just then, both Joife and Eevee heard a voice behind them. "Looks like they wanted to be a bit more prepared next time, didn't they?"
Eevee and Joife spun around quickly to find Mcgood and a Typhlosion in front of them. |
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| 12 Apr 2015 10:28 PM |
"why am i a bad guy :("
well, there's really no bad or good in this story
just contradicting thoughts |
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| 12 Apr 2015 10:29 PM |
| Oh, ugh hello there eevee and joife |
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| 12 Apr 2015 10:29 PM |
@succ but my character is weak and annoying
i'll write a 1d fanfic brb |
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| 12 Apr 2015 10:30 PM |
"Oh, ugh hello there eevee and joife"
be glad bruh
you're pretty much the most powerful being in this story |
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| 12 Apr 2015 10:31 PM |
| damn man why am i not the most powerful this is very bad |
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| 12 Apr 2015 10:33 PM |
"but my character is weak and annoying"
oh no, you just were sensible to possibly watch eevee and joife's power
it doesn't make you any less powerful than they are, most of the characters in this story are on the same level of power
"damn man why am i not the most powerful this is very bad"
due to that request, you may be near mcgood's power
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| 12 Apr 2015 10:33 PM |
| I can't wait to be in the story |
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miles94
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| 12 Apr 2015 10:33 PM |
| so later i'll be introduced? |
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| 12 Apr 2015 10:33 PM |
| oh boy, i'm the next character who's going to get introduced!!!!!! |
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| 12 Apr 2015 10:34 PM |
"due to that request, you may be near mcgood's power"
thanks man |
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| 12 Apr 2015 10:35 PM |
@miles
soon, yes
@odd
just a fun fact (this doesn't affect the story in any way): in the ot hunger games today i poisoned your drink
@random
oh ye |
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| 12 Apr 2015 10:38 PM |
| I didn't enter the OT hunger games today |
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| 12 Apr 2015 10:39 PM |
| sweet im already in the story |
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| 12 Apr 2015 10:56 PM |
Chapter 3:
Mcgood smiled. "Sorry if I startled you two. You guys having fun since being revived?" He asked. Eevee smiled. "Of course we are. Yet, I'm afraid there may be a war upon us." She said, worried. "Why do you think that?" Mcgood asked, adding a head tilt. "Two people just attacked us because we thought it was because of Pitch that the Earth was destroyed in the first place. If it wasn't for you, we would still be dead by now." Just then, the Typhlosion spoke. "It was both of their faults. Why start a fight over power, anyway?" He asked. Mcgood looked back at him, then at Joife and Eevee. "Perhaps Succes is right. Why would those two possibly start fighting?" Joife shrugged. "Not even I know that." He said. Just then, Random and Majestic came out of the forest, arguing about that same subject. Succes sighed. "Here we go again..." He walked up to them both.
Random and Majestic had been arguing about the fact of who was guilty for the destruction of Old Earth. "Luffy obviously could've done something better!" Majestic said. "It was Pitch who shot the energy!" Random retaliated. "Girls, girls!" Succes intervened. "Please, you're starting to sound like first graders." He said with a slight grin. "What do you mean by that?!" Random shouted, angry at what Succes had said. "I mean, uh, you guys are way more mature than that! I know it!" Succes quickly said, hoping it would calm Random down. "Now, why don't we-" Succes couldn't finish the sentence as Random had grabbed Majestic and threw her, making Majestic land two hundred yards away. "Girls, don't be like th-" Succes attempted to say, until Majestic suddenly appeared in front of Random, kicking her back into the forest. Succes looked back at Mcgood, who shrugged. Majestic chased after Random into the forest, and Succes followed.
By the tame Succes got there, Majestic and Random were fighting at high speeds, which Succes could barely follow. Shockwaves, not as powerful as the ones Luffy and Pitch had generated, but still enough to shake the ground, were being generated as the two attacked each other. Majestic disappeared and reappeared behind Random, who repeated the act and smacked Majestic away. Majestic retaliated by running towards Random and throwing a punch, which Random dodged and kicked her again, sending her flipping backwards. Random ran towards Majestic, only to get stopped by Succes, who threw his paws outwards and forced the both attackers away from each other. "I told you, you won't get anywhere by doing this!" Succes said to the both of them. Just then, Tail teleported behind Majestic, grabbing her. "This lady is the one who is the most sane out of all of you." He said. Majestic looked back at him. "What do you mean?!" She asked him. "You do believe that Luffy is the one who is guilty, right?" Tail asked her. "...Yeah." Majestic confirmed. She then smiled and waved to Succes and Random before Tail teleported the both of them away. Mcgood, Eevee and Joife ran towards a shocked Random and a pondering Succes. "Succes! What happened?" Mcgood asked. "Eevee was right." Succes replied, looking at Eevee. The Typhlosion looked upwards to the clouds before continuing.
"There will be a war." |
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| 12 Apr 2015 11:02 PM |
"I'M TRACKING THIS THREAD"
you'll be introduced soon m8 as well |
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miles94
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| 12 Apr 2015 11:03 PM |
"this is cool"
thanks
i nearly lost interest when paper said that the story was bad
but now im hyped to continue |
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| 12 Apr 2015 11:04 PM |
| I tracked it because it was cool |
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