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| 12 Apr 2015 12:10 PM |
put some criticsem, none will be taken as a insult unless they are full out hate.
after earth was abandoned after a catashrophic failure in technology causing machines to revolt agents all the species that had lived on that once peaceful planet they had launched space ships to search for a new planet to inhabit. A few humans stayd behind for unknown reasons...
Human storyline:
After finding a planet that was much larger then earth with new animals and species of human like creatures they decided to settle down and make a city. They named the city panjia, the first land form on earth. Years went by as people forgot about the horrid wars on earth that forced them to move. That had all changed when the robots on earth brung themselves together, rebuilding themselves scrap by scrap, piece by piece. Until they had developed robots that could operate like humans, nobody knew of there evolution. Once they had developed human like abilities they started to build war machines. Artillery walkers, rifle mechas, flying bombers, and much more ready to destroy the entity known as humans. After developing space ships that could travel great distances without running out of energy they had finally tracked down the humans and there new allies ready to strike.
Robot storyline:
After the humans had fought after your revolution for more rights, or atleast you thought you had revolted for more rights, you decided to finally terminate the humans for denying your "protest" and destroy you. After developing a grabbing arm and repairing yourself you get ready to finally rebuild your own and prepare for travel. After you, one of the few special robots that had developed human like abilities, movement, climbing, grabbing, intelligence, you had started to build your own war machine.
Cyborgs storyline:
After staying back and thinking destroying all these robots wrong, the robots had decided to take you in and improve your body in mysterious ways. As they finish you gain many so called improvements, rocket boots, super jump, steel body, extreme strength, increased sight, and even more. As you helped them take over your prepare for travel and assist them on there ship to track down your once own species.
Extra storyline that might get in
Robot influenced animals: (animals don't think this way, robots forced animals to think this way)
After realizing how the other superior species had been cutting themselves off to keep there high rank luxury you decided to help destroy them and resume one of the superior ranks and watch them die off. As you gain mechanical parts and incredible abilities through having robots attached and combined with you, you become a formidable beast that could withstand the firepower of the superior species you set off to destroy.
More info:
The cyborgs were sent in disguise as regular humans to observe there workings and firepower to prepare for war. They were sent in to also discover weaknesses in defenses and weaponry.
Locations:
Panjia, the main city. It's vastly populated with almost all human like species but the Ravi.
Mech factory: a closely guarded secert incase a threat appears that could eradicate the human race.
Eridthatio, the city of the foxicans. Located in the forest it is usually not seen as the trees are huge compared to the trees that once populated earth.
Eryhido mines, the mines of the foxican. They mine a special ore called drimite special to there planet to trade for food with the other cities.
Cardino, the hidden city of the Ravi
Olition, the city of the scalin. Located near a volcanic area, they sell precious stones and gems from the volcanic mines
Thiuon, another city of the scalin located inside a inactive volcano never to erupt again.
Skuion, the sky palace of the birdukon in the home tree where the sweetest fruits grow.
Skye, the picking grounds of the skio, the majestic fruit the home tree grows.
All possible species to rp with:
Humans
Cyborgs
Robots
Foxican, fox like humans
Scalion, dragon like humans
Birdukon, bird like humans
Ravi, Raven like humans.
Robot influenced animal species: Soon to come
Cs: Name: Species: Location: Talents and abilities: (no magic) Mech stats: (will come in later) One to five, you have 13 stat points. Endurance: Firepower: Speed: Recharge speed:
Mech weapons: (up to four)
Mech appearance: (include weaponry areas)
Need some help here, post suggestions.
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| 12 Apr 2015 02:01 PM |
Regular mech classes: Assult mech Wields a rifle and a huge knife to fight hand to hand combat. It also can wield a huge shield to take defense in when he's reloading the rifle, standard shield or energy beam shield.
Tank tread mech Able to hold more weight then a standard leg design it lacks speed but increases firepower an defense impressively. Usually armed with rocket boxes on the side of the tread holders and a 360 degree rotation motor that connects the treads to the mecha body.
Defense mecha A quite new mech featuring dual arm shields and thruster jump abilities to crash into combat and defend your allies. The shields are fitted with special rockets that you can fire to disable enemy fire or distract so your team can regroup
Discharge mecha Using a over drive core in both of its arms instead of one in its chest for power it causes some serious energy discharge when in hand to hand combat. It can shock and sap all energy from a vulnerable point in a war machine and discharge that energy too cause a electrical explosion.
Rocket mech Armed with special legs that can take pressurized explosions this mech puts the M In mobility. Having a extremely strong rocket you can rocket jump into action and disable even the mightiest war machines. (These are if you can't think of a personal mech class) More coming
Robo war machine classes:
Walker artillery. Featuring four extremely strong walking legs connected to a artillery turret even the mightiest mecha's can fall under this war machines wraith. Featuring a quad barrel cannon you can cause some serious damage in combat.
Juger wolf A four legged wolf with razor sharp claws that could tear any mech apart this is a force to be reckoned with. Even without it this has twin turrets that include electrical stun shots so you can get close and tear anything apart. With that you have titanium reinforced feet so you can do bomb jumps.
Mobility bot This special mecha has wheels for feet so he can speed into combat and surprise even the most alert mecha. You speed into combat with special jump thrusters on your back to flip through the air and destroy the enemy with your twin Uzis. Even if you lose the Uzis there are blades that can replace your hands for hand to hand oblideration.
More coming
Robot commanders.
Arachno mk1
For a six legged artillery bot nobody would expect it would have such a fast fire rate. It fires special green orbs that stick to objects and explode with astounding force, most mech pilots tremble at the idea of being shot by it. Since it can climb walls and scale buildings it is one of the most feared robots. It even has twin rocket boxes incase it has to reload awhile in combat.
Cerberon
A juger wolf with a Ancient Greek twist. With triple heads that means triple the trouble. That's a lot of T's. Each head has a special purpose, the first one breaths fire, the next one had titanium teeth, and the third has huge horns. Each one can cause some serious trouble by themselves but together there something that is of nightmares. With thruster feet like the defender mecha they can jump in behind you and before you know it, pule you out and have human for dinner.
Silver bullet This mecha has a unexpected ability to backflip, barrel roll, summersault, and so much more in grace as they completely destroy your robot. One bullet at a time. Armed with two mini rifles this robot can bash and thrash any robot that dares fight it in the air. Incase anything goes wrong a energy shield can be produced from the right arm. Lastly it can send out up to fourteen drones that can track and destroy. Most people don't know the real name of this acrobatic destroyer, so they name it the silver bullet because of its grace in acrobatics and ripping your mech to pieces.
Rules: Obey ROBLOX rules What I say is law You can die so don't fight eight arachnos solo expecting to run away gracefully. I can make somebody admin to check if there's any sort of player conflict so don't try and fight awhile im offline. no perfect mechas No perfect war machines No percent cyborgs You can't control, others I decide outcomes in fights
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| 12 Apr 2015 02:35 PM |
More robot classes: Bomber mecha This mech is able to call down a air strike when needed whenever there's a huge group of mechas coming. Armed with land mines, a pulse rifle, and a air strike signaler this is one robot ready for anything. Considering the fact the pulse rifle uses energy it takes energy from the overdrive core which is quite risky incase you have to go overdrive and get to somewhere quick. |
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| 12 Apr 2015 02:36 PM |
| Fourm, I require assistance! |
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| 12 Apr 2015 02:37 PM |
| Seems pretty good, just needs a plot (I'm too lazy right now to check through after the storylines), and need to make sure you have good grammar. |
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| 12 Apr 2015 02:40 PM |
| I do have a plot, humans escape earth after destroying robots, robots rebuild and come back to terminate, humans find a new planet to inhabit, robots track down and destroy, humans and other species use mechas to fight back, etc. |
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| 12 Apr 2015 02:45 PM |
| I require uber charge fourm! |
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kitrain
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| 12 Apr 2015 03:06 PM |
| When I try and develope a fourm nobody pays attention, and once I make one people complain.. |
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| 12 Apr 2015 05:02 PM |
| No suggestions, intrest, or ideas. Either people haven't seen this or its already good. |
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kitrain
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| 12 Apr 2015 08:54 PM |
New cs: Name Species Appearence Starting location Talents and abilities (no magic) Mech stats: (one to five, you have ten points) Endurance Firepower Speed Recharge speed
Mech class: (select one of the pre-made or make up your own, do not make too op)
Mech cs:
Mech Weapons (up to four) Appearance Size
Robot cs:
Name Appearance War machine stats, (one to five and you have ten points) Endurance Firepower Speed Recharge speed
War machine class: (pick one of the pre-made ones or make up your own, don't make too op)
War machine cs: Weapons (up to four) Appearance Size
Suggest things on this for three extra points for your war machine slash mech.
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