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Re: 16 Bar Verse?

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XYoungTygaX is not online. XYoungTygaX
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05 Apr 2015 09:51 PM
I know the pressure is heavy,and I can't rap fast
I know I'm not ready,who cares if I finish last
Doing what's best for me is all up to my heart
Ive been following that rule since the start
I dislike when people doubt me I hate it
I mean it's about me and how I made it
Not about your issue its about mines
(MF)s in here complaint about my rhymes
If you hate me get out of this post
Hate bad comments good comments is what I like the most
I don't care if the haters call me a "white boy"
I'm brown if your wondering that's right boy
Success is the only key in my mind
Improvement is the puzzle I'm trying to find
Tired of all the unnecessary criticism that comes along my way
Its some BS,drop a good rate if you enjoyed what I had to say



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XYoungTygaX is not online. XYoungTygaX
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05 Apr 2015 09:52 PM
Rates/feedback?
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LonelyTree is not online. LonelyTree
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05 Apr 2015 09:54 PM
weak
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OsirinKing is not online. OsirinKing
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05 Apr 2015 09:57 PM
Maximum cringe overload.
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BigHomieDxpe is not online. BigHomieDxpe
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05 Apr 2015 10:46 PM
trash
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megatron23123 is not online. megatron23123
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05 Apr 2015 11:51 PM
>Rhymed It with It
>Rhymed Boy with Boy

I QUIT! *Flips Table*
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DevilishFilip is not online. DevilishFilip
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06 Apr 2015 04:06 AM
trash.


~Officaly getting high on bug poison
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XYoungTygaX is not online. XYoungTygaX
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06 Apr 2015 06:52 AM
No dip it was I made this at 11 pm
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Specializinq is not online. Specializinq
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06 Apr 2015 07:18 AM
Good.
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JordanRaptor is not online. JordanRaptor
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06 Apr 2015 09:38 AM
Really, really bad.
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FL1PP3D is not online. FL1PP3D
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06 Apr 2015 09:58 AM
That was 8 bars.
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Wobull is not online. Wobull
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06 Apr 2015 10:01 AM
1 bar = 2 lines
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GrimReaperOfChiraq is not online. GrimReaperOfChiraq
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06 Apr 2015 10:47 AM
this sh..t is fire
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XYoungTygaX is not online. XYoungTygaX
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06 Apr 2015 06:33 PM
MB for the mistaken count i didn't know what I was doing
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UniversalDanger is not online. UniversalDanger
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06 Apr 2015 06:51 PM
Made at 11pm. I wrote All Too much at like 1 am bro.
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DevilishFilip is not online. DevilishFilip
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06 Apr 2015 06:53 PM
^Im writing at 2 AM atm..and im doing much better then this..
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XYoungTygaX is not online. XYoungTygaX
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06 Apr 2015 07:39 PM
I get a busy day and get sleepy thanks for the criticism though
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GrimReaperOfChiraq is not online. GrimReaperOfChiraq
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08 Apr 2015 03:05 PM
dev stfu ur sh..t weak
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DevilishFilip is not online. DevilishFilip
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08 Apr 2015 03:10 PM
^lmao nig, plz http://genius.com/Zero-the-nocturnal-divines-lyrics
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GrimReaperOfChiraq is not online. GrimReaperOfChiraq
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08 Apr 2015 03:20 PM
weak af get on my level
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DevilishFilip is not online. DevilishFilip
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08 Apr 2015 03:26 PM
that'd be too low fo my tasteee
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Sxperior is not online. Sxperior
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08 Apr 2015 03:36 PM
@Wobull and anyone who else said that wasnt 16 bars. 1 bar is 4 beats per measure, each one of his lines is 4 beats per measure and since there is 16 lines. Its 16 bars.
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Sxperior is not online. Sxperior
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08 Apr 2015 03:37 PM
For example, If we had a 4/4 beat (Which we have here) Every 4 beats would be 1 bar. Every line here is 4 beats which qualifies for 16 bars. #Mindblown
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GrimReaperOfChiraq is not online. GrimReaperOfChiraq
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08 Apr 2015 03:47 PM
stfu dev u are the worst rapper i ever seen
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Sxperior is not online. Sxperior
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08 Apr 2015 03:48 PM
"That wasn't 16 bars"
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