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| 05 Apr 2015 09:51 PM |
I know the pressure is heavy,and I can't rap fast I know I'm not ready,who cares if I finish last Doing what's best for me is all up to my heart Ive been following that rule since the start I dislike when people doubt me I hate it I mean it's about me and how I made it Not about your issue its about mines (MF)s in here complaint about my rhymes If you hate me get out of this post Hate bad comments good comments is what I like the most I don't care if the haters call me a "white boy" I'm brown if your wondering that's right boy Success is the only key in my mind Improvement is the puzzle I'm trying to find Tired of all the unnecessary criticism that comes along my way Its some BS,drop a good rate if you enjoyed what I had to say
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| 05 Apr 2015 11:51 PM |
>Rhymed It with It >Rhymed Boy with Boy
I QUIT! *Flips Table* |
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| 06 Apr 2015 04:06 AM |
trash.
~Officaly getting high on bug poison |
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| 06 Apr 2015 06:52 AM |
| No dip it was I made this at 11 pm |
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FL1PP3D
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Wobull
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| 06 Apr 2015 06:33 PM |
| MB for the mistaken count i didn't know what I was doing |
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| 06 Apr 2015 06:51 PM |
| Made at 11pm. I wrote All Too much at like 1 am bro. |
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| 06 Apr 2015 06:53 PM |
| ^Im writing at 2 AM atm..and im doing much better then this.. |
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| 06 Apr 2015 07:39 PM |
| I get a busy day and get sleepy thanks for the criticism though |
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| 08 Apr 2015 03:10 PM |
| ^lmao nig, plz http://genius.com/Zero-the-nocturnal-divines-lyrics |
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| 08 Apr 2015 03:26 PM |
| that'd be too low fo my tasteee |
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Sxperior
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| 08 Apr 2015 03:36 PM |
| @Wobull and anyone who else said that wasnt 16 bars. 1 bar is 4 beats per measure, each one of his lines is 4 beats per measure and since there is 16 lines. Its 16 bars. |
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Sxperior
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| 08 Apr 2015 03:37 PM |
| For example, If we had a 4/4 beat (Which we have here) Every 4 beats would be 1 bar. Every line here is 4 beats which qualifies for 16 bars. #Mindblown |
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| 08 Apr 2015 03:47 PM |
| stfu dev u are the worst rapper i ever seen |
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Sxperior
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