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| 04 Apr 2015 02:40 PM |
Yo, i'm the king, i'm the ruler, everybody who disagrees is a loser. I steal everything , no one is more stupid--ER! Heres advice, i'm trying to be nice, but I have a knife, beg for jesus christ. Get ready to figure out, to find out the plan.. to shout. I'm thinking how? But heres the answer: shut up NOW! Watch out for trap doors, before you fall on the floor, are you bothered to listen for more? I'm going hardcore, nobody gets any gold to store, get ready for the horror, i'm about to bring a big wave, to pull you down to the shore, what's this for? You can't beg for respect. Nor. Get ready, for checkers, you feather pecker, I have a death letter, if I ever disappear, you have to tell her. I'm ready for lunch, of a blood sandwich, I need a crunch, the wood cracks, like "BRUNCH!" Have you heard much? Now that i had my munch. Now it's time to end this song, with a punch. |
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| 04 Apr 2015 05:47 PM |
| Extent your bars. Work on the flow. Be a bit more complex with your rhyming. |
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| 04 Apr 2015 05:49 PM |
lol noob its obv a copy-pasta you just changed the name |
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| 06 Apr 2015 02:45 PM |
yes you did scrub go to your crappy ''rapping'' group |
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| 06 Apr 2015 02:46 PM |
| WILL THE REAL GREEN EMPIRE PLEASE STAND UP |
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| 06 Apr 2015 02:47 PM |
| even a piece of dust could do better |
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jjj344
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| 06 Apr 2015 02:52 PM |
I bet you though of the Murder games on ROBLOX and decided, hmm ... Murder + Rap = What? so you posted this.
And then, the fire nation attacked. Btw, send me trades! ツ |
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| 06 Apr 2015 04:17 PM |
| BlackSmith you are acting so g@y I did not copy-paste. |
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| 06 Apr 2015 04:18 PM |
| Was kind of too silly for my taste. Seemed like you forced some silly stuff in there. |
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| 06 Apr 2015 04:18 PM |
| Wait, so you guys are saying I did good? |
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| 06 Apr 2015 04:19 PM |
| Well, it's not my fault for making a bad rap, I don't have rap skills anymore.. |
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| 06 Apr 2015 04:22 PM |
"it's not my fault for making a bad rap, I don't have rap skills anymore" it is it's because you weren't practicing |
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