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| 02 Apr 2015 09:44 PM |
Joey Bada$$ - Christ Conscious (Remix)
King Hurricane/jk2515/KingHurrican3
Uh, Mutha..... Mutha.....Sucka....
I'ma spit until everyone is sick of me, Until I'm at the point where I can't viciously rip a beat and get a flawless victory, The only thing in my life I spit is ether, With the ability blast yo ass like my name was frieza, Plus got b@lls bigger than the stomach on Queen Latifah. (N) I got Dragon Balls like my name was Vegeta, All I ever do is give the opposite of compliments, While trying to bring out my inner Christ consciousness, So (MF)ing violent I could k1ll a person with a pair of moccasins, Along with a sword to slice you up then hop the fence, We just a bunch of lyrical monstrous lyricist, With the strength to get rid of a dozen pyramids, We snakes like an Anaconda's, We do nothing but eat g@nja, then go out and murd(e)r someone with Tonfas, We elemental, aiming straight for ya' temple, So (MF)ing monstrous one attack could turn a mental, We're trained lyrical assassin's, We could turn a dark skin (N) into the adult Michael Jackson, This the (MF)in nuke that I'm droppin' the world in my pocket, Kick you out your continent, Always drop hot (S), k1ller flow be constant, And I won't stop I reach Christ Conscious, East Coast.
Universal/UniversalDanger
Something's been getting me aggravated Angers loose and know that it's activated I ain't showing feelings when I rap for the score Just feeling (A) whippings when I'm out of the door And I don't need to know your sob stories I'm coming up on all your territories, bringing down each your categories And spit sick, wicked and twisted wit sizzle and steam your (S) Leave you in little bits Have you committed to the job that you were given I'm re positioned, lets put you in my position so I'm your opposition Many trips and expeditions Have you behind bars as a young musician I'm in need of ammunition for what I've been spitting cause this is only written The child looking to be a king within his own decision I'm bringing great suspicion Just give me recognition and I'll lead you through conditions A fresh addition in this one edition I'm impress your crew when I'm showing my precision Cause you know that's easy when they having supervision Watch where my mind is driven, use binoculars and not your normal vision The best collision has arisen like cars with key'd ignitions I don't go by (S) only going by the rhythm That's why when I'm meeting this I'm up in this division |
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| 02 Apr 2015 09:50 PM |
| So (MF)ing monstrous one attack could turn you mental* |
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| 02 Apr 2015 09:54 PM |
| 8/10 , needs a lot of improvement if you'd like me to point them out I will. |
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| 02 Apr 2015 09:55 PM |
| I'd appreciate if you did. |
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| 02 Apr 2015 09:58 PM |
| tbh I had some struggle lines. |
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| 02 Apr 2015 10:03 PM |
"Until I'm at the point where I can't viciously rip a beat and get a flawless victory"
Very good multiple rhyming in one bar but it seemed too long , might just be me idk.
Vocabulary after that was very good but tryhardish like the last song,
"We snakes like an Anaconda's,"
This was bad and makes no sense honestly. then you follow up with
"We do nothing but eat g@nja, then go out and murd(e)r someone with Tonfas,"
Very edgy but good.
You rhymed pocket with continent
Now to universal
He was pretty basic till after the 3rd bar with nice multis but still tryhard-ish
"Watch where my mind is driven, use binoculars and not your normal vision"
This was probably the best line in the song but there wasn't enough pop-out lines and metaphors. Only 2 Universal pop-out lines and metaphors.
Half of his verse had the same flow as he always uses , that gets very boring at times
"The best collision has arisen like cars with key'd ignitions"
This bar was very bad , no offense.
And that's all.
Overall - 7.5/10 8 is too high , sorry.
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| 02 Apr 2015 10:11 PM |
"You rhymed pocket with continent"
The last 4 lines were from Joey bada$$, was from the original version of the song. |
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| 02 Apr 2015 10:14 PM |
| I don't like joey badass anyways so. |
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| 03 Apr 2015 09:59 AM |
| (I respect all opinions but I'm curious) Why is the key'd ignitions line bad? I thought it was my best bar in this verse. |
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| 03 Apr 2015 10:36 AM |
| It was fking weak imo, just cant explain it in another way. |
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| 04 Apr 2015 07:39 PM |
| How did you not let me hop on it |
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| 04 Apr 2015 07:42 PM |
| Please dont do that again that was borderline trap 5/10. |
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| 04 Apr 2015 07:45 PM |
| This wasn't trap, also don't be mad cause I told you to go away at Las Vegas. |
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| 04 Apr 2015 08:57 PM |
Being "trap" is not an insult. Being a dumbass is. |
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| 05 Apr 2015 01:07 PM |
| Actually i posted this before i went to las vagas you fking loser. |
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| 05 Apr 2015 01:23 PM |
| Lies ngga, now hop off my diq. |
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