Vaul
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| 31 Mar 2015 10:37 AM |
I lifted my head off my stone pillow. I glanced out the square hole of a window in my wood wall. I looked around, same as always; posters of Vaktovian warriors covered them. I looked at the glass case holding the Vaktovian Uniform that my dad had once worn. "One day" I told myself. I pulled back the sheets that were covered with Vaktus' helm. I stood and got on my white t-shirt and my torn black pants. Same as always. I went into the kitchen, my mother was already eating her Vakkie-os, I pulled out a bowl to pour myself some. We couldn't afford the milk, so I helped myself to the dry cereal. "I need you out of the house, inspections are today" my mom mumbled. I replied, "OK". As I was walking down the streets looking for Tom I noticed a crowd had gathered in a circle, circling something on the wall. I walked over to join, I couldn't believe my eyes. There was a poster with a Vaktovian warriors in the middle with letters in Comic Sans that read "For the 100 year anniversary, we are accepting 10 new VACCINE into our forces". My stomach jumped, the Vaktovian forces hadn't accepted anyone in over 30 years. They hadn't a need to, with over 2,000 warriors only 7 had died in the past 30 years. I noticed someone running out of a house, pulling up their pants as they ran up to the circle. "NO WAY! VAK IS ACCEPTING AGAIN?!". It was my friend Tom. The circle was disbanding by now, everyone chatting amongst each other about the poster. "We have to try out", said Tom. I looked at him and nodded. Try outs were at the Main Circle in two hours. We started to head over talking about how we were going to make it in together. We got there and the two hours passed by slowly, my excitement never died down. Two hours had passed, nothing yet. Suddenly a hole was opening up at the center of the Main Circle, several people fell through. And three Vaktovian soldiers had appeared. I couldn't believe my eyes, Gannex himself had shown up! "ALL CADETS! SINGLE LINE RIGHT INFRONT OF ME, HORIZONTALLY! 10 SECONDS!". Tom and I sprinted to be in the first line. We were. Thirty or forty kids followed suite. Gannex walked up to the newly formed lines, with a holographic clipboard. As he walked along the line he was saying "Now I know we haven't done this in several ye-" he paused, right in front of me. It was only a few seconds pause, he continued, "years. But it has been 100 years and we shall celebrate that. Only ten of you will make it into the VACCINE program, and only one of you will probably make it to VAK." He stuck his hand towards the hole that was in the center. "Jump". Only a few paused, Tom and I did not. We sprinted towards the hole and jumped without thinking. --- I landed in water, freezing water. A couple dozen landed in the water seconds after I did. I heard a voice, "Find your way out" and then nothing. I looked around at the walls, there were small bricks sticking out. I assumed we had to climb our way out. I didn't hesitate a second longer, I swam towards the closest brick. I looked back and saw many other kids look around in confusion, I started up. Halfway up some other kids started to follow suite. I made it out first. Gannex saw me, and pushed me back into the hole. When I made my way out again he looked at me, "You're last...disappointing." He wrote something on his clipboard. I looked down on the ground. "Something you want to say, cadet?", he said. "No, I slipped at the top like a fool". "Good", he replied. Follow me, I'll show you your bunks. --- That night, as I slept on my stone pad with a stone. I heard a creak at the door. "Tom?" I mumbled. "No, it is Gannex. You may be surprised, but I came to see you. I have taken a particular interest in you, if you hadn't noticed by now", a deep voice exclaimed at the door. I spun my head towards the door, it was him. But....he was only wearing a ragged t-shirt and a thong. He stepped closer. "W-W-What are you doing...sir?" I whispered. "I'm going to make you a vaccine" he whispered in my face. It smelled of spearmint. "O-O-Okay sir, I'm ready." --- The next morning when Tom told me that he was worried, because the bed shook. I only slightly smiled, and I noticed Gannex quickly glance at me and he smiled. |
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Palawin
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| 31 Mar 2015 10:39 AM |
Wrong subforum,
#PalinForPresident2016 |
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| 31 Mar 2015 10:40 AM |
| did you really write this? |
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Vaul
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| 31 Mar 2015 10:41 AM |
It's text written on stone, Astro. One of the first ever discovered written down texts. |
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Vaul
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| 31 Mar 2015 10:42 AM |
This is only a part one, Astro.
There were many more stones with these similar texts. |
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oik0985
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| 31 Mar 2015 01:56 PM |
Damn.
Rekt them all, the SFers. | Eat your Power and your Nachos, you're need 'em. |
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Irrelius
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| 31 Mar 2015 01:57 PM |
"For the 100 year anniversary, we are accepting 10 new VACCINE into our forces". My stomach jumped, the Vaktovian forces hadn't accepted anyone in over 30 years. They hadn't a need to, with over 2,000 warriors only 7 had died in the past 30 years."
pre-void war |
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Vaul
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| 31 Mar 2015 01:58 PM |
No, VAK obviously won that war.
VOID can't score on a base that isn't open. |
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Irrelius
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| 31 Mar 2015 01:59 PM |
| Neither side won, but considering it would've been a fairly even war (if the VAK HC could make a more fair version of SMO with fair weapons and LABs wasn't so stupidly biased to VOID) there would be immense casualties if this was like a real war, as it would be in your story. |
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| 31 Mar 2015 02:00 PM |
but vaul, void won at the vak base 5 times before it shutdown
RIP TheLittleGoomba 2012-2014 (Account deleted) |
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BGSB
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lionbaita
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| 31 Mar 2015 02:06 PM |
| You ruinef it at the end. [2] |
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Vaul
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| 31 Mar 2015 02:09 PM |
Jokes on you.
It's not over. |
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Vaul
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FaZeR41n
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| 02 Apr 2015 09:34 PM |
| tl;dr they did it on a stone bed with the supreme general |
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