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Indiella is not online. Indiella
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29 Mar 2015 11:55 AM
DISCLAIMER: The genre of this song is pop, so if you could, please read and rate it as a pop song. Thank you.
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[Intro *mult. people talking*]
"Be yourself."
"You're so ugly."
"Be unique!"
"Look at yourself, you'll never be as beautiful as I am!"
"Every body type, skin color, and ethnicity is perfect!"
"She's so fat! Look at her acne, what a loser."

[Verse 1]
Every step I take, feels like I'm walking a runway
So stressed about my curls, I'm out of hairspray
Life's a competition, don't want to be in this relay
They have me thinking, "Maybe I'll be pretty someday..."
They tell me to be myself, but that's not good enough
So I be someone else, I put powder on a brush
Cover my blemishes, take away my scars
Put on fake lashes, not eat until I starve
I lose the weight until I'm a 100 pounds
Look away, I don't look my best right now!

[Chorus]
Tattoo, a barcode!
Make me like everyone else
Build me, beautiful!
Because pretty sells
Watch the, boys scan me!
It's all looks, nothing else
Pageant in front of me, I know I gotta be,
I know I gotta be beautiful

[Post-Chorus]
Tattoo a barcode on me,
So I can be scanned
Studied up and down,
Call me an exam
Build me beautiful,
Because pretty sells,
Pageant in front of me,
Nod your head and bow

[Verse 2]
Every move I make, feels like I'm in a crowd
Tilt my head and smile, would this make mama proud?
Can't speak a word, thoughts left in the cloud
Oh no, the judges coming, I want to run right now
They tell me to be myself, but that's not good enough
So I be someone else, I put powder on a brush
Cover my blemishes, take away my scars
Put on fake lashes, not eat until I starve
I lose the weight until I'm a 100 pounds
Look away, I don't look my best right now!

[Bridge]
Tattoo a barcode, come and scan me now
I think I'm ready, come and judge me now
Build me beautiful, because pretty sells
Put makeup on me, so I am not myself
They tell me to myself, but when I am,
They tell me what to do, I say "Yes, Ma'am."
Build me beautiful, because pretty sells
Put makeup on me so I am not myself

[Chorus & Post-Chorus at same time]
Tattoo, a barcode! (Tattoo a barcode on me)
Make me like everyone else (So I can be scanned)
Build me, beautiful! (Studied up and down)
Because pretty sells (Call me an exam)
Watch the, boys scan me! (Build me beautiful)
It's all looks, nothing else (Because pretty sells)
Pageant in front of me, I know I gotta be, (Pageant in front of me)
I know I gotta be beautiful (Nod your head and bow)

[Outro (fading out)]
"She's so shy...It's as if she has no friends."
"You're beautiful just the way you are!"
"Drink bleach for all I care!"
"Every body type should be accepted..."
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Jinglehasse is not online. Jinglehasse
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29 Mar 2015 12:00 PM
Gross pop
Why couldn't it be derth mertl
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XYoungTygaX is not online. XYoungTygaX
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29 Mar 2015 12:00 PM
Oo I like the chorus but fr nice job 9/10
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Indiella is not online. Indiella
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29 Mar 2015 12:54 PM
Thank you! :)
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zanderich is not online. zanderich
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29 Mar 2015 01:46 PM
DON'T CUT YOURSELF ON THAT EDGE, BRO!!!

Raiden, turn the game console off right now!
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lunafanplace is not online. lunafanplace
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29 Mar 2015 01:54 PM
Pop isn't a genre.
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zanderich is not online. zanderich
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29 Mar 2015 01:56 PM
then what the hell is one direction

ARE YOU RE@DY
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lunafanplace is not online. lunafanplace
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29 Mar 2015 01:56 PM
and even "pop" songs are a 16 and a hook, this is like a 6 and a hook.
Rhymes are way too simple, chorus is, what the hell even is the chorus?
Off brand God Loves Ugly "pop" song here.
4/10
I won't give constructive criticism because what is "pop", seriously, how do I rate something that doesn't exist?
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lunafanplace is not online. lunafanplace
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29 Mar 2015 01:57 PM
"then what the hell is one direction" some type of Beatles replica?
So I'm assuming they're the popular trend of rock music.
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lunafanplace is not online. lunafanplace
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29 Mar 2015 01:58 PM
The subject matter expressed in this could of been made into a great song
but, I don't think you pulled that off here.
No offense.
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zanderich is not online. zanderich
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29 Mar 2015 02:01 PM
there's pretty much zero rock influence in one direction's music

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Indiella is not online. Indiella
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29 Mar 2015 02:07 PM
Pop is a genre.
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master0691 is not online. master0691
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29 Mar 2015 03:34 PM
8/10
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JubrilMD is not online. JubrilMD
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30 Mar 2015 12:05 PM
I liked the 2nd verse and bridge. Could tell this was your way of express yourself into a musical format, and I appreciate the fact that someone would put their emotion into their song instead of making it dull and boring.

8/10
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30 Mar 2015 12:07 PM
"Pop is a genre." - Indiella
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