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Re: DISTANT WORLDS

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marc12267 is not online. marc12267
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28 Mar 2015 11:22 AM
TABLE OF CONTENTS (TOC)
I. NOTES
II. INTROITUS
III. BACKSTORY
IV. LOCATIONS
V. RULES

I. NOTES
I'm marc12267 and this is my 4th attempt at a MPFC-esque RP. Also, this is my rewrite of one of my older RPs, which lacked effort. Anyways, the original sucked, which is why I'm rewriting it to make it much better. Enjoy.

II. INTROITUS
July 4th, 2071. Chord Seeley was getting ready for the grand launch of the New Eden Earth. His daughter, Kimiko Seeley, who was 17 years old by that time, sat next to him.
"Dad?" Kimiko said.
"Yes, my darling?" Chord replied.
"I hope you do excellent in this." She said.
"Thank you, sweetie. Now let me deliver the speech first." Chord said, before standing up and walking to the podium. There, there were over 800,000 rich citizens waiting for him. There was a fancy waiting hut that he and his daughter were in, with the giant space station itself and the pod launcher that coordinates to the space station. A giant fence with a heavily guarded entrance has poor citizens attempting to get into the area behind. Chord arrived at the podium. He tapped on the microphone three times before clearing his throat.
Chord then said, "Hello, ladies and gentlemen. I, am Chord Seeley, but my daughter is Kimiko Seeley. She's 17 years old and is in high school. Anyways, here, what you'll see... Is what will make the extraordinary possible. It is... The New Eden Order Earth... N.E.O. Earth, or just..." He sighed. "Neo Earth!" The crowd happily clapped hands as the space station opens it's entrance.
Chord said, "It's got the latest technology unavailable to the original Earth. It's powered by 100% zero-point energy, it's got atom-based assembler machines, and all the existing technologies, improved. Plus, it'll cost $125,000 to board the N.E.O. Earth. All aboard the Neo Earth!" He then rushed into the space station, with the rich citizens following suit. Kimiko peeked out of the hut and saw that everyone is gone. She looked around and saw the giant space station. She ran to it, but it closed it's doors and prepared to launch. She screamed and ran up to the fence doors. Just then, the giant space station launched into space, leaving the pod launcher with a robot guard and Kimiko herself unfazed. As she looked at the space station ascending into space, she cried as she exited the area.

III. BACKSTORY
The date is July 4th, 2075. Earth, as we know it, has been turned into a ravaged shadow of it's former glory 3 years ago. It was thanks to our huge mistakes we would've solved in the past. Cities have become desolate and the air is thick and musty. Crime is widespread and the water supply is now 1/3 of what it had in the previous years.

However, there's a second chance for humanity's survivability. A secret government facility has built a giant spherical space station roughly the size of Jacksonville, Florida and also capable of all kinds of life. It is named the New Eden Order Station, or the N.E.O. Station or just Neo Station. There exhibits several technologies more advanced than the ones back in the original, ravaged earth. It was launched in July 4th, 2071, the same day Independence Day was established on the United States of America back in 1776, and descended from the Earth. However, the station has one problem, and that's people trying to assassinate the space station chairman named "Chord Seeley" to become the next one.

Why? Because once the space station was launched into space, it once had a government that promotes safety and freedom. Unfortunately, however, because Chord began to lose his sanity from drug overdose, he began to turn the government into a cruel-spirited police state-based totalitarian shadow of it's former self. The stable people working for the government are fired and sent back to the original, ravaged Earth devoid of peace to be replaced by people who are insane and corrupt.

But the bigger question is: WHY did the president begin to overdose on drugs? Perhaps he left his daughter back in the ravaged Earth by accident when he launched the space station.

IV. LOCATIONS
EARTH
The original, ravaged shell of it's former self. Most of the cities have become desolate, yet some people still live in them with some crudely made structures near the cities. All governments have fallen, silently legalizing all crime as it's now widespread around the Earth. There's 1/3 of water from today, deserts and sandstorms. Some people are fighting to get to the utopian space station, others prefer to stay in this Earth, preferring to try to rule what's left of the Earth. However, there's only one government re-established so far and that's the United States of America's, under the name of "Stark" yet there are still no laws there.
NEW EDEN ORDER STATION (N.E.O. Station or Neo Station)
Launched 4 years ago by Chord Seeley. Technologically and scientifically advanced stuff is everywhere. The air is clean and perfectly breathable, no radiation, few crime levels and disasters. The new-and-much-improved eco system is thankfully keeping it from falling apart like what the original Earth was. However, the government is totalitarian, having been distorted from it's original government, which results in the citizens trying to murder the president.

V. RULES
-No Godmodding/Metagaming/Powerplaying/Mary Sues/Gary Stues/Spotlighting.
-Chord Seeley can be killed, but it's highly difficult for him to die as he has armored guards surrounding him..
-I can appoint and fire admins.
-Attempt to be literate as possible, but unfortunately, I might end up breaking this rule, so try to bear with my accidental, deliberate or rushed one-lining.
-If you read the whole thing, put "Elysium" in the Other section. Also, feel free to put in extra stuff in the Other section.

CHARACTER SHEET
Name]
Age]
Gender]
Location]
Appearance]
Skills] (No OP skills.)
Inventory] (Do not be OP.)
Bio] (4 is the minimum amount of sentences.)
Other]
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28 Mar 2015 11:48 AM
Name] Peter Edelan
Age] 33

Gender] Male

Location] Washington D.C.

Appearance] 6'1, Completely shaved, Caucasian with light brown hair and eyes.

Skills] Peter is intelligent and can easily convince anyone to follow him blindly into battle against the US government. He is rather average strength and simply knows basic survival skills.

Inventory] M16A4 with two magazines, a functioning cellphone/radio, two cans of food and a metal canteen, also a picture of his wife who lives onboard NEO Earth.

Bio] Peter Edelan is an infamous political activist known for his violent attempts at starting up a new nation located on the Eastern coast. He has been doing this for years with little success but he slowly is amassing a small army of guerrillas to lay the foundation for his vision of a new America. Peter is a practicing catholic however keeps his faith private from the outside world. His Father lives on NEO Earth and abandoned his mother and Peter on earth since he could not afford the tickets for all of them. Now Peter continues his political activities in an old fallout shelter of a school.

(Other]
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28 Mar 2015 11:50 AM
Hmm... Accepted, I guess. Just had to put "Elysium" in Other. I might post my CSes very soon.
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28 Mar 2015 11:51 AM
So should we start roleplaying when there are more than 4 people online with accepted CSs
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28 Mar 2015 11:52 AM
I did read it all just forgot to put Elysium in other because I was focused on making my character.
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28 Mar 2015 11:53 AM
I know. It's going to (probably) start with 4 or more people.
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28 Mar 2015 12:25 PM
Sorry, I got the N.E.O. names confused on the RP itself. You can now try to call it "New Eden Order Earth, "New Eden Order Station", "N.E.O. Earth" or "N.E.O. Station" or just simply "Neo Earth" or "Neo Station".

CHARACTER SHEET
Name] Kimiko Seeley
Age] 21
Gender] Female
Location] TBD (To Be Determined)
Appearance] Kimiko is an American woman who is 5"5' tall. Her build is mixed, mainly a combination of 1/2 of strength and 1/2 of agility. Her hair is black and messy. Her eye color is diamond blue. She has freckles and cracked glasses. Her clothes are a faded white t-shirt. Her pants have rips in them and she has black boots. She has a crude prosthetic right arm.
Skills] Kimiko is quick in close-quarters combat and knows a bit about technology.
Inventory] Glock 21 and 3 magazines. A photograph of the now-deceased Paul Reubens as Pee-wee Herman.
Bio] (4 is the minimum amount of sentences.) Kimiko was born in the Seeley family. She lived an poor life. She was a D+ student in most of her schools. She was frequently bullied, having to put up with running away. She had only one friend, who was in her school and murdered at night by one of her bullies. She was with Chord Seeley at the launch of the N.E.O. Earth, but she was left behind. At the age of 20. Her right arm was cut off by a bandit, but she was given a crude prosthetic arm.
Other] Elysium. Also, one of you might end up with her.
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28 Mar 2015 12:32 PM
That last part is so obvious since I am the only one here.
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28 Mar 2015 12:40 PM
(Quick RP Test)

The Car stopped and Peter was pulled out of the trunk. He tried to resist once again but it was no use and they simply kicked him a couple times. He felt himself being dragged across the floor of a building, he did not know what would happen next. His blindfold was taken off and in front of him stood a man around 6'3 carrying a Chinese made Kalashnikov.

The man said, " You do know why your here.. Peter? "

Peter did not respond and simply stared at him.

The man then hit him with the stock of his Kalashnikov and everything went dark for a moment.
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28 Mar 2015 12:43 PM
Okay. The test is non-canon to the actual RP.

Also, not bad for a newbie here.
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28 Mar 2015 12:45 PM
Not really 100% a noob, my main account Agilent got banned and had all of my forum stuff.
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28 Mar 2015 12:47 PM
Oh. I'll be waiting for more people then.
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28 Mar 2015 02:08 PM
BUMP
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CHARACTER SHEET
Name] Chord Seeley
Age] 42
Gender] Male
Location] N.E.O. Earth
Appearance] Chord has black, messy hair, with his black and white beard being shown. His eyes are sunken and his eye color is dark blue. He has a horribly creased face with wrinkles on it. He looked like as if he were abusing drugs for years. His clothes are a black-and-white suit with a black tie. He has black dress pants and dark brown shoes.
Skills] Chord is quick with reactions, yet a bit.
Inventory] Chord carries around a butterfly knife.
Bio] Chord was born in Los Angeles. He was a child who was a fan of J.J. Abrams until the director died. He became emotionally depressed, which would soon have an impact on his later childhood. He didn't talk to anyone, yet was a B- student in most of his schools. He was a technology addict. After graduating college, he then went on to found a tech company under the name of "Seeley Industries", which was devoted to developing some new technologies such as wireless electricity. However, after seeing that CO2 has begun to significantly rise, Chord stopped development of new technologies and started work on a domed space station roughly the size of Jacksonville, Florida and secretly continued work on newer technologies exclusive to the to be launched space station.

He launched it under the name of the "New Eden Order Earth" or "New Eden Order Station" on July 4th, 2071, but when he and the other 800,000 rich citizens boarded it, he forgot his daughter, thus starting his overdose on drugs. Unfortunately, it had a significant change on him. The drugs had horrifically disfigured his face and his mentality along with his mind. Because of that, He began to distort the original, technology, freedom and safety-promoting government of the N.E.O. Earth (Or N.E.O. Station) into the corrupt police state-ish totalitarian shadow of it's former self. It had earned him an hatred among the space station population.
Other] Elysium
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28 Mar 2015 05:50 PM
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Name] Nathan Dorum
Age] 28

Gender] Male

Location] Travelling in the direction of N.E.O Earth

Appearance] He is of an average height for his age somewhere around 5'10 though he is slightly skinnier than most. He has blue eyes that stand out on his face which carries a couple of scars from an attack on his home. He has light brown hair which is usually quite short though it can become messy. He wears a brown jacket over a stained white shirt along with his jeans though he still looks moderately respectable in this attire.

Skills] He is atheletic and so is usually faster than those who try to chase him though he can be prone to tripping while running which can cause more trouble. He is also quite a good diplomatic speaker based on his time spent training to be a lawyer which he was quite good at. These trainings were conducted by his father and uncle who both passed down their knowledge in the field.

Inventory] He carries his trusty handgun which along with his pocket knife is his only true means of defence. He is also carrying a couple bottle of water which he refills when necessary and a few items of food.

Bio] Nathan is a lawyer of sorts born in what was the United Kingdom. Many years later he heard about the space station known as N.E.O Earth and wanted to see it for himself. He assumed that if he were to somehow gain access to the station he would gain a better life of sorts then the one that had presented itself on Earth. To get to the United States he found a group of men and women who knew how to sail a boat and together they set off across the ocean.

(Other] Elysium
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28 Mar 2015 06:39 PM
Accepted. RP will start if I post starting lines.
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28 Mar 2015 07:03 PM
RP starts now.

PETER (Fort)
You, Peter, couldn't help, but to sit in a old fallout shelter in a Washing D.C. school fiddling with your M16A4. Footsteps are heard getting louder every step.
NATHAN (Duck)
You are riding a boat with 3 men and 2 women to the United States of America. A man with a old Walkman is listening to "The Beatles - Yellow Submarine", while the other 2 are arm-wrestling with 2 women watching. Interact with anyone?
CHORD (Myself)
Chord sat in the City Hall of the N.E.O. Earth. He slouched in his presidential chair as he took a pill from a box and ate it.
KIMIKO (Myself)
Kimiko was walking up to an old fallout shelter near a Washington D.C. school. She yawned, while carrying her trusty ol' Glock 21.
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28 Mar 2015 07:11 PM
Peter heard footsteps and immediately stopped fiddling with his old M16A4. He left his small room and looked around, the only people there were two supporters who occasionally came for meetings and equipment drop offs. Peter walked towards the exit and carefully climbed the stairs to the surface. The upper floors of the school had been destroyed and everything left above the fallout shelter were ruins. As he neared the final exit he stopped as if he heard someone very close to him.
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KIMIKO (Myself)
Kimiko changed her direction to the entrance to the destroyed school. She sighed as she wanted to scavenge for food as she's hungry.
PETER (Fort)
You do so. Open door? Or naw. Oh wait. Since when did I suddenly talk like a teenager?
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28 Mar 2015 07:20 PM
Nothing suspicious around me... Peter thought
He turned and opened the doors leading to the surface. The bright light of the sun temporarily blinded him since he had been in the fallout shelter for a while now. Blindly he stepped forward, missed the step, and fell onto the dusty ground.
Stupid Peter...
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28 Mar 2015 07:21 PM
Nathan

I look around the boat with a heavy sigh having left everything that I had known and grown up with. I walk over to the two women who were watching the arm wrestling competiton. "So who do you think will win?" I ask them not really interested just making idle conversation.
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PETER (Fort)
You take minimal damage from falling onto the ground. You stood up and attempt to dust yourself. You see a woman (Kimiko) who appears to walk towards you. Interact?
KIMIKO (Myself)
Kimiko continued to walk to the ruined school. There, she can see a particular person (Peter) getting up and dusting himself. She sighed, of course.
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NATHAN (Duck)
One of the women answered your question, saying, "Ooh, I think it'd be the guy on the le-" before being interrupted by the other woman. The other woman then said, "No! It'd be the guy on the right."
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