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| 24 Mar 2015 07:22 PM |
Story: There is an excellent alliance of armies... One is R.A.I.N, Respected.Alliance.of Intelligent.Normalities. (I guess normalities means people) Unfortunately...some were wiped out or taken to places,an enemy watching agents of R.A.I.N scramble to find their army. Now barely are left...but the rookies...it is their turn to protect. (Classes: Sniper (Has a rifle and katanas) Swordsman (has sword and hammer) Fighter (uses anything at their disposal) Chief (Has AK-47 and sniper rifle) Stealth (has knife and sword) Name: Julan Mariano Gender: Female Class: Stealth Personality: Serious, but nice, funny and takes missions seriously |
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| 24 Mar 2015 07:33 PM |
"AK-47" Did you mean: AKM, AK-101 Series, AK-12, or the AK-74? |
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MrStilts
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| 25 Mar 2015 03:10 AM |
| Putting rock's gun fetish aside, this RP is just horrendous. The OP's writing is just god awful, while the lore section explains close to nothing about the world. The classes section is just a strewn together mess with no consideration for readability, and even the character sheet was made for her own character (which, I might add, is a shameless Mary Sue). |
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