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| 22 Mar 2015 04:59 PM |
[Hook - Charlie Puth] It's been a long day without you my friend And I'll tell you all about it when I see you again We've come a long way from where we began Oh I'll tell you all about it when I see you again When I see you again
[Verse 1 - Metrix] Any road you take will always lead you home, A good friend cares for you , and has a heart of chrome, The way you could tell if this isn't the one, When you're in trouble , they don't do anything but stand stiff as a gnome, See you again , please don't leave - not today, To god I pray , please show my friend how to return , please the right way, I got lots to say , putting all these feelings in a verse, It's like my past is colliding with the present, Lay out a simple message , back in the day when black's were slaves, Back in the day when they were simple peasants , that could all change today, Don't look back onto the past , Like a fishing rod , It'll hook you like bait - call that a cast, Believe in the ones you love the most , They may leave , but they'll come back , In our current generation we feed off greed , and kindness we all lack, If you hear - me please come back my friend, Remember those days , playing around - Promise to have my back til the end, If I cry with tears I really mean it , Ever had one of those special ones that you always stick with, Know you love them the most , Even if you were both misfits (Aye)
[Hook - Charlie Puth] It's been a long day without you my friend And I'll tell you all about it when I see you again We've come a long way from where we began Oh I'll tell you all about it when I see you again When I see you again
[Verse 2 - Metrix] It's ride a die , we always go out together , No matter how you changed , I'll always be here forever, We reign as one , never leave each other , Grew up in a desolated land together , full of clutter, You're the one that I trust the most , no doubt about it, What will it take you to come back , - You're a great person , I'd even shout it, Long way from were we have begun , Me and you taking on the world, I think we have already won, Those peaceful times , when I used to come right over by the rise of the sun, All the things we have been through , through thick or thin, You will always be the best friend , even if you're gone , Count on I'll still miss you within , Through every sin you were there for me, Now you're gone - No way I could take you back, I'll see you in that better place - You could even count on that, All the people that tried to hold us down , we came out on top, Even if they killed us , kicked us out to rot, Now I'm really missing you , please just send me a sign, Because even if you're gone , I know you still remember those good times, Care about you so much , I had to express my emotions in a rhyme, I should of been there when your life was on the line, Should of been there to help stop that crime, I'm sorry that I put you down , But for your brave acts through your life, Those criminals should of died once they stabbed you with that knife, Ups or downs , forever will be with me , One day I will join you - You will see.
[Hook - Charlie Puth] It's been a long day without you my friend And I'll tell you all about it when I see you again We've come a long way from where we began Oh I'll tell you all about it when I see you again When I see you again
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| 22 Mar 2015 05:00 PM |
This song really made me think hard about life , I hope this also inspired you to not forget that person that you lost..
Original : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lzVqwbCrSsQ
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| 22 Mar 2015 07:33 PM |
| Good job taking the advice on line spacing :) Looks much better buddy! 10/10, No errors found. |
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| 22 Mar 2015 07:34 PM |
| @Chanel , thank you. Means a lot coming from you , oh and you almost done with your half of that song? |
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| 22 Mar 2015 07:40 PM |
| is this your track to pleasure snoop or Galaxy |
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| 22 Mar 2015 07:42 PM |
| You do realize you're making fun of my cousins death , right? |
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| 22 Mar 2015 07:44 PM |
| And you cannot be talking because the only collaborations you could obtain are from your brother and/or from WSA. |
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| 22 Mar 2015 07:54 PM |
first off
1. RIP your cousins
2. You talk smack about relatives, why shouldn't I go all out on your cousins? Oh, right, I'm not a...
3. I get alot of collaborations from outside WSA, I got from alot of people but denied alot
4. You're just mad your rejected from Baltimore vs. Everybody
5. I haven't had a collaboration in a while, so... |
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| 22 Mar 2015 07:58 PM |
Lmao , Baltimore vs. Everybody will fail I could promise you that. And by the way , that just proves you only get collaborations from your brother and/or WSA. "Young Solja is hook and Sub Zero is Verse 4". And their is a reason you get denied-
1. You're ass.
2. You don't switch your collaborations up and spam Young Solja on the hook for your songs.
Oh and by the way , it's funny how you're Young Solja's brother yet you let him only do the hook for your songs. Proving he's ass and he cannot write a proper verse. I want you to reply back to this with your little boy ass. |
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| 22 Mar 2015 08:02 PM |
And it's hilarious how you rank yourself as "legendary status" when you haven't met the requirements to become one. And before you respond to this one , I don't care if I lost to Miller. At least he has a better rhyme scheme then you , in your songs all I see is "I'm a ro-rap gladiator" and "I'm a ro-rap god".
The reason why I dissed you is because of that cocky reason. You act to coy and your an illiterate child that uses "Dictionary.com" as a source for your synonyms and antonyms. |
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| 22 Mar 2015 08:04 PM |
And you cannot be talking because I whooped your ass in that beef.
1 - You never responded
2 - Three sentences don't go crap
3 - You claim "I reported your diss track" even though it was weak like your metaphors. |
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| 22 Mar 2015 08:04 PM |
| In conclusion , I hope when you and your brother drop the soap in hell you bend over and pick it up. |
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| 22 Mar 2015 08:05 PM |
"Lmao , Baltimore vs. Everybody will fail I could promise you that. And by the way , that just proves you only get collaborations from your brother and/or WSA. "Young Solja is hook and Sub Zero is Verse 4". And their is a reason you get denied-"
And we got KH, Randy, and possibly KendrickSultan. Is that the same reason whenever you get dissed you report it?
"1. You're ass."
*asks me to collaborate on all of his tracks*
2. You don't switch your collaborations up and spam Young Solja on the hook for your songs.
lol you always ask me to make him make a hook for you, you ain't slick
"Oh and by the way , it's funny how you're Young Solja's brother yet you let him only do the hook for your songs. Proving he's ass and he cannot write a proper verse. I want you to reply back to this with your little boy ass."
Because he used to make verses, then he stopped.
I have writers block, and plus you'd probably report my diss. But, [F] it, I'll make a reply. |
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| 22 Mar 2015 08:12 PM |
@Dx , LMAO. You've only collaborated on about three of my tracks. And Young Solja has not yet made a hook for me. And just because your forum gets CD'd means it had inappropriare comments on the comment section that passed ROBLOX rules or aggresive language contained in it.
- "Baltimore Vs. Everybody" -
1. Randy might not even deliver a hard verse because that song is not his style.
2. King Hurricane would take over your own track.
3. The reason why Young Solja stopped writing verses is because he's a lazy ass that always gets bad ratings on them - Wait , I forgot he hasn't posted a single song on this forum section YET.
4. Until you have proof about me Reporting your forum thread , nobody will believe you judging on the ROBLOX rules and regulations.
5. Young Solja hasn't made one song yet by himself , meaning you only put him on here to write your suck ass hooks.
6. It's funny how you get writers block from 3-5 sentence verses while I lay out a 60 and up bar'd verse almost everyday. Proving you stick to one subject and get writers block off of that situation
7. I dare you to write another diss to me , I'll answer it after school tomorrow WITHOUT Young Solja on the hook.
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| 22 Mar 2015 08:13 PM |
| And Enormity wouldn't work with a child such as you. #Facts |
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| 22 Mar 2015 11:28 PM |
I stopped taking this seriously. Once i saw u collab with a dude nane Charlie
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| 23 Mar 2015 04:58 AM |
| @Shady , this was a remix of Wiz Khalifa ft. Charlie Puth - See you again. It was a good hook so I kept it. |
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| 23 Mar 2015 02:51 PM |
| You disrespecting my city? "It will fail". |
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| 23 Mar 2015 02:54 PM |
| @Tyga , I only say the truth. |
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| 23 Mar 2015 02:57 PM |
| @Metrix never know the song might not fail. |
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