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IdentityShift is not online. IdentityShift
Joined: 09 Apr 2009
Total Posts: 48
18 Mar 2015 04:05 PM
Since I started making Animation videos I haven't really shared them with others on Roblox except other animators so... I've posted here on the forums to see what you guys think of my videos.

My channel:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCTrch3LkVj12PW78MfY-xUQ

My newest video:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rWyIEJYHLsU&list=UUTrch3LkVj12PW78MfY-xUQ&index=1

Let me know what you think!
Are they good? Bad? What do I need to improve one? What should I add? Etc


-IdentityShift
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greykell is not online. greykell
Joined: 08 Feb 2013
Total Posts: 4195
18 Mar 2015 05:22 PM
it was good animation, but i expected a bit more than just a Thug Life joke.


(ORIGINAL JOKE)
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MisterObvious is not online. MisterObvious
Joined: 23 Jun 2007
Total Posts: 5933
19 Mar 2015 08:53 AM
I think it's a great concept except it was mediocre-ly executed.

The camera is zoomed too far for it to be funny.

See rule of thirds
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Eadon is not online. Eadon
Joined: 25 Oct 2013
Total Posts: 7911
19 Mar 2015 08:57 AM
I agree with Mr.Obvious
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joeani is not online. joeani
Joined: 17 Mar 2013
Total Posts: 2995
19 Mar 2015 02:34 PM
The running animation could improve, you could add gun flash when the shotgun fires, try making the body that got basted by the shotgun go much faster, it looks like a slowmo to me, but overall nice work.
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RandomRobloxTV is not online. RandomRobloxTV
Joined: 23 Mar 2014
Total Posts: 632
19 Mar 2015 07:11 PM
I love the animation
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ObliviousHD is not online. ObliviousHD
Joined: 28 Jul 2013
Total Posts: 508
20 Mar 2015 03:24 AM
Nice animation.
It would be even better if you added in the footsteps of them running and also a punch sounds effect.

Good job tho
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MisterObvious is not online. MisterObvious
Joined: 23 Jun 2007
Total Posts: 5933
20 Mar 2015 08:46 AM
After watching full video, I'd find it more amusing if it was short and sweet.
You've already performed the skit, and ending it on Thug Life freeze frame would have been great.
Adding those little "oh behind the scene" bits really killed the bits
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