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| 18 Mar 2015 04:05 PM |
Since I started making Animation videos I haven't really shared them with others on Roblox except other animators so... I've posted here on the forums to see what you guys think of my videos.
My channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCTrch3LkVj12PW78MfY-xUQ
My newest video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rWyIEJYHLsU&list=UUTrch3LkVj12PW78MfY-xUQ&index=1
Let me know what you think! Are they good? Bad? What do I need to improve one? What should I add? Etc
-IdentityShift |
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greykell
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| 18 Mar 2015 05:22 PM |
it was good animation, but i expected a bit more than just a Thug Life joke.
(ORIGINAL JOKE) |
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| 19 Mar 2015 08:53 AM |
I think it's a great concept except it was mediocre-ly executed.
The camera is zoomed too far for it to be funny.
See rule of thirds |
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Eadon
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joeani
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| 19 Mar 2015 02:34 PM |
| The running animation could improve, you could add gun flash when the shotgun fires, try making the body that got basted by the shotgun go much faster, it looks like a slowmo to me, but overall nice work. |
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| 20 Mar 2015 03:24 AM |
Nice animation. It would be even better if you added in the footsteps of them running and also a punch sounds effect.
Good job tho |
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| 20 Mar 2015 08:46 AM |
After watching full video, I'd find it more amusing if it was short and sweet. You've already performed the skit, and ending it on Thug Life freeze frame would have been great. Adding those little "oh behind the scene" bits really killed the bits |
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