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| 23 Oct 2009 09:00 PM |
(In the hovercraft, the leader sighed.)
Leader: It has taken you years to find the location of the hideout. So...WHERE IS IT!!!!!!
Bob Noob: W-w-w-W-w-ell sir....
Leader: Yes??
Bob: We were u-unable to locate it.....
Leader: Raaahhhh!...
Bob: B-b-b-b-b-b-but!!!
Leader: ??
Bob: We did get the identity of one of their newest recruits.
Leader: Who, exactly?
Bob: W-well sir, his name is...umm.......
Leader: WHO!!!?!?
Bob: TECH PLOX SIR!!! PLEASE DON"T BLOX MEH!!!
Leader: So....Tech Plox...eh....well, I guess that works.
(Bob begins to slip away.)
Leader: Oh, bob? Your fired.
Bob: NOO!
Leader: K.O, please take Bob here to his cell.
K.O: Heheeheheh, with pleasure, boss.
(When they had all left.)
Leader: They don't make stupid henchmen like they used to. (Sigh)
(At the Agency)
Boss: Hey Plox!!
(Plox looked up from the vortex generator he was constructing.
Plox: Sir yes sir? (Plox saluted.
Boss: At ease, Plox. I've come to introduce you to our top agent.
(Plox, who had been distracted with the Bosses arrival, had failed to notice the person standing right behind him.)
Boss: Plox, meet Agent Blox.
Plox: A pleasure to meet you, Blox. Where's Shock and Brick?
Blox: Brick is shining up his new plane. You should meet him some time. He'd appriciate some upgrades to his planes. And Shock is in the virtual combat room, fighting hundreds of armed enemys like always.
Plox: Cool.
Blox: But we've got more important matters at hand.
Plox: What is it?
Blox: Their's been some odd activity in the skys above N.Y.C.
Plox: Why are you telling me? Your the agent.
Blox: Yes, but we'd like to take you along, just in case.
Plox: We?
Blox: Brick is going to fly his sleek jet over there. It's the only way to get up and he's our best pilot. And we need Shock for fighting if it's required.
Plox: Ok. So when do we leave?
(Brick and Shock were standing at the frame of the doorway.)
Brick: Right now.
Plox: Awesome.
Tech Plox: Chapter one: Battle over N.Y.C |
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| 23 Oct 2009 09:12 PM |
(The sleek black jet, marked with the insignia of the agency, was flying straight into the leaders trap.)
Brick: We should be there any minute, and the radars aren't picking up anything at all.
Blox: Yeah, but this seems a little...too easy.
Shock: I agree.
Brick: Hold on...I see an enemy fighter on the radar!! It uncloaked and is just above us!!!
(Suddenly their were two loud thumps on the roof, like something had just landed there.)
Shock: C'mon Blox.
(They climbed through the hatch onto the roof, and met the gaze of two warriors, one armed with a swift katana, the other, preferring his fists.)
Shock: Gee, these guys look like pro's....I'll take on the sword dude.
Blox: I'll cover the martial artist...
(Down in the jet's interior.)
(Plox noticed a snoring sound coming from Brick at the controls.)
Plox: BRICK!!!
Brick: Huh!?!? Wazza??! Leave me alone, mom....
(The sounds of snoring continued.)
Plox: BRIIIICKKK!!!!!!
Brick: CAN"T YOU SEE I"M TRYING TO NAP HE--
(His eyes opened.)
Brick: Oh hey Plox.
Plox: Aren't you the least bit worried?
(Plox was referring from the sounds of who knows what coming from the roof.)
Brick: It's Shock and Blox. Nothing to worry about.
Plox: Still, sleeping while flying isn't normal. Carefully manuvering us past those air currents and passenger planes looked tough.
Brick: What passenger planes? I was sleeping then too.
Plox: O_O |
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| 23 Oct 2009 09:16 PM |
| Going to take a short break. Feel free to reply and tell me if you think it was good or horrible. Feel free to tell me i'm the worst thread making in the universe. I'm sure i'm not the best. |
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| 23 Oct 2009 09:17 PM |
| Maker* Sorry for the double post, just felt I should correct that. |
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| 23 Oct 2009 10:22 PM |
(Brick looked at the radar.)
Brick: Great, a swarm of fighter jet's incoming
Plox: WHAT!?!?!?!
(Up on the roof)
(Shock prepared, seeing his opponent about to strike. And he did. He sidestepped to the left and did a heavy, fast, and deadly right sweep, intending to take out Shock's legs. However, Shock dodged by jumping upwards, and throwing a roundhouse into his opponents face.)
Shock: Hah, you can't beat the sword master.
(Meanwhile, Blox was defending from a flurry of blows, when suddenly he saw his chance. His opponent did a large, powerful punch that would have hit him in the face if Blox hadn't moved his head. Blox-Fu also taught many forms of judo, so Blox flipped his oponnent over his shoulder, and his opponent landed right next to Shocks. Both unconsious.)
Blox: Hah!
Shock: Good throw, Blox.
(They bound the two in rope and attached them to the ships outer hull.)
Shock: They'll be fine there for the time being.
(They jumped back through the hatch into the plane.)
Blox: Guys, what's going on?
Brick: We've got a problem. They have fighters swarming all around.
Blox: Well, at least it can't get worse.
Shock: Yes it can. I see a guy with a jetpack flying right at us.
Plox: I'll deal with him.
(Plox takes out a small square box out of his pocket, and presses a button on it. It decompacts into a jetpack.)
Plox: I'll be right back. You guys deal with the planes.
Brick, Blox, and Shock: Right!
(Back outside the plane)
(Plox jumped off and activated his jetpack, coming face to face to the person with the other one.)
K.O: Your going down!
Plox: Your the famous K.O Wipeout!
K.O: You've heard of me?
Plox: Yep, your the most famous idiot in the world.
K.O: Your going to pay for that, kid.
Plox: If you can catch me!!
(Plox jets away full speed, dodging the varyious fighter jet's swooping around them. K.O was hot on his tail.)
K.O: COME BACK HERE!!!
Plox: Very well.
(Plox suddenly turned around and jet full speed towards K.O.)
K.O: O_O
(K.O took out his gun, and shot Plox's jetpack.)
Plox: Uh oh!!!!
(Plox slammed into K.O)
K.O: AHH!
(Plox threw a punch at K.O, but he grabbed it and threw Plox off of him.)
Plox: AHHHHHHH!!! |
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| 23 Oct 2009 11:31 PM |
(Plox felt Blox's grappling hook fall in right next to his leg as he fell. It kept unwinding as it slowly circled around his leg.)
Blox: Come on...
(Blox was sweating. He was running out of line.)
Blox: I can do this....
(Plox felt the hook finally circle fully. And just as it did, the line snapped to a halt, almost tearing off Plox's leg, but saving him.)
Plox: Whew....
(Blox felt relieved too.)
Blox: That was a close one....
(Blox reeled Plox back ontop of the jet, which was in hover mode.)
Plox: You almost tore my leg off.
Blox: It was that, or fall all the way to N.Y.C, and your doom.
Plox: Good point.
Blox: We've got to take down K.O.
Plox: :), I've got just the plan.
(K.O was happy, he had taken down Plox, and now he could find his old agent nemesis's.)
K.O: Blox, where areeee you?? Heheh.
Blox: RIGHT HERE!
(K.O looked into the sky to see Blox's kick slam into him.)
Blox: Long time no see.
(K.O began spiraling down, and Blox hopped off him and onto Plox's quickly built hoverboard.)
Plox: Will he live?
Blox: Somehow he always lives. No doubt we'll fight him again one day. |
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| 23 Oct 2009 11:34 PM |
| So I guess everyone hates my fanfic? No one seems to be posting. |
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| 23 Oct 2009 11:40 PM |
(The Leader frowned.)
Leader: WHAT!?!?!?!
K.O: I swear sir, it wasn't my fault!!!!
Leader: I know the perfect torture for you.
K.O: PLEASE SIR!!!
Leader: You will be eternally stuck in a cell...with....
K.O: O_o
Leader: BOB!!!! MUWHAWAHAWAHWAHHA *Cough* HAHAH *Cough*.
K.O: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
(At the HQ, ten citys away.)
Boss: Hey Plox?
Plox: Yes sir?
Boss: Do you here someone screaming "No"?
Plox: Yes indeed sir.
Boss: Odd.....
END OF CHAPTER ONE. |
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| 23 Oct 2009 11:41 PM |
| Well, thats the end of the first chapter. I'll make the second chapter in this thread soon. Dunno when, but still, soon. |
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| 23 Oct 2009 11:43 PM |
| Excellent. Keep up the good work. |
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| 23 Oct 2009 11:52 PM |
| I remember the one with james bondy |
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| 24 Oct 2009 12:20 AM |
| Yeah, you posted comments on my first Agency one ever, Agent Blox. |
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| 24 Oct 2009 12:19 PM |
(The Leader smiled.)
Leader: Heheh....
(The fool K.O did something right. As Agent Blox was about to slam into him, he planted a tracking beacon. Still, the Leader was tired of him, and put him in a cell with Bob anyways.)
Leader: He deserved it for his countless failures. But now, I will finally get my revenge.....I KNOW WHERE THE AGENCY IS!!! MUWWAHAWHAHAWHAHAHWA *Cough* HAHA *Cough*.
(The Leader spent a second catching his breath.)
Leader: Stupid evil laugh.
Tech Plox: Chapter 2: Infiltration
(At the Agency.)
Plox: Ah, finally, the last card to make my twelve billion card empire state building. Good thing I have a tall room, and good thing there's nothing to screw this up.
(Plox is about to put the last card ontop when the missile hits, destroying his entire card tower.)
Plox: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
(At the hovercraft, ten citys away.)
K.O: Hey Bob?
Bob: Cake?
K.O: Do you hear that person screaming "No"?
Bob: Cake.
K.O: Is that all you say? Are you mad now?
Bob: Pie.
K.O: O_o
(At the agency.)
(Havok was all about. The facility was invaded, and all the while being bombarded by missiles.)
Plox: What the....
(Suddenly, the wall next to Plox explodes open, a person walking through it.)
Plox: WHO ARE YOU!!?!?!?
Leader: PLOX, I AM YOU FATHAH!!!!
Plox:....norly..............who are you?
Leader: Stupid agency....can't take a joke. Hpmh.
Plox: Who are you?
Leader: I am the grand leader, your bosses worst nemesis.
Plox: I can't say that was unexpected............ |
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| 24 Oct 2009 12:37 PM |
| Well, I'm done with this series. The moment I make a post it's just thrown off the front page and nobody see's it. And when I'm finally finished with the series, it'll just be thrown off then too. It's not worth continuing it. |
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| 24 Oct 2009 12:55 PM |
Aww... It was just getting intresting... |
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| 24 Oct 2009 12:57 PM |
| Yeah, but most people just look at a bit and leave. Not many people like it, anyway. |
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| 24 Oct 2009 01:39 PM |
| Fine, I might make one or two more later. |
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| 24 Oct 2009 02:36 PM |
Leader: Now, DIE FOOL!
(The leader took out his pistol.)
Plox: O_O
(Plox threw the mini vortex generator in his pocket towards the gun.)
Leader: O_o
(The leader fired his gun.)
Plox: Uh oh...
(The vortex generator exploded, creating a miniture black hole that sucked the Leader and Plox in, before it disappeared.)
Leader: AHHhhHHH
(Plox activated his hoverboard, and grabbed the leader.)
Plox: HANG ON!!!
(They were flying through the black hole, and dark tunnel.)
Leader: AHHHHHhHH! MOMMY!
Plox: Get a hold of yourself man.
Leader: Oh, um...yeah....I'm manly.....shut up.
Plox: -_-
Leader: Heh...
(They came out of the black hole.)
Leader: Where...are...we.....
Plox: I think we are in another dimension.
Leader: WHAT?!?!!?
(The place looked like a techno-city....complete chrome, futuristic hovercraft..it was then when Plox realized where they are.)
Plox: We're in NYC.....in the future.
(The Leader was shocked.)
Leader: How is this possible?
Plox: Well, the shot to the vortex generator must have damaged it, and also, it was still a prototype.
(Suddenly, their hoverboard got hit by an E.M.P (Electro magnetic pulse. disables mechanical devices.))
Plox: WE"RE GOING DOWWWN!!!!
Leader: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEK
Plox: I'll remember that one.
Leader: Never speak of that...grr...
(That was the last thing he could say before the slammed into the ground, creating a huge hole and a big explosion.)
Plox: Errugg.....
(Plox could see the darkness moving in. He was falling unconsious. Not surprising. That crash should have killed him. He looked up to see a tall man step infront of him.)
Man: Hahah. Foolish time travellers...........
(His voice trailed off, and the darkness closed in. Plox fell unconsious.)
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| 24 Oct 2009 03:03 PM |
(Plox awoke.)
Plox: Uuhh....
(Where was I..how did I get here....)
Plox: Huh...
(Plox then remembered. Forgetting for a second is a commen side effect of falling unconsious. So are headaches, but luckily he didn't seem to have one.)
Plox: Leader? <_< >_>
Leader: Over here....
(Over to Plox's left, the leader was chained to a wall. Now seeing him, Plox realized he was chained in the same manner.)
Plox: What's going on?
(The door opened.)
Man: Oh, I think I can answer that.
Leader: Grrr...
Man: You see, I am the emperor, the "King", so to speak, of this future world. Hahah. The measly fools here are at my grasp, and taxes and everything else is in my control. My empire contols most of the current world. We conqueur, and enslave all the ones who try to fight.
Plox: And here I thought mankind would become more civilized in the future.
Man: Quiet, fool!!! As I was saying, the world is mine. But I need more. I want to control more then this present.
Leader: ??
Man: I want to control YOUR present!!!!! Mwhahaahah!!!
Plox: How would you do that?!
Man: Well, I have been constructing a vortex generator. But we studyed the portal you came through, and it will only take a matter of weeks to finish our massive one that we shall move our armys through.
Leader: You'll never win!!
Man: SILENCE. Foolish cavemen, I have more important things to do. I have an army to prepare, engineers to check on, and slaves to drive.
(The man walked out of the room, and the door closed behind him.)
Plox: Well this is bad.
Leader: What are we going to do!?!?
Plox: Don't worry, my belt has a built it laser. Laser, fry my chains.
(The laser fired and cut the chains.)
Plox: :) I'll have you out in a jif.
(Once the Leader was free, they made their escape plan.)
(In the hallways outside the prison cell.)
(Guest Noob was a slave, and it was his duty currently to bring lunch to the prisoners.)
Guest: Hpmh, why do they always make me do the boring jobs.
(The guest entered the code and entered the room. That's the last thing he remembered when he woke up lying on the floor of the prison room.)
(Outside the prison ward, Plox and the Leader heard the alarm bells going off.)
Plox: Whew.
(It was too late for them to be recaptured. They were already up on a skyscraper, watching over the facility. The moment they had escaped, they climbed up the chrome/techno fire escape onto the roof.
Leader: Well that was close.
Plox: We need a plan.
Leader: What's that?
Plox: I dunno L---whats your real name anyway?
Leader: You can call me SDW.
Plox: What does that stand for?
Leader: I'd rather not tell.
Plox: Ok.
(Plox looked over the edge of the skyscraper.)
Plox: Look out, "King". Here we come.
Chapter three: The Future. |
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| 24 Oct 2009 03:29 PM |
(SDW and Plox looked on in dispair.)
(The King's army was already moving through the portal. They could see because they were on a catwalk, veiwing the scene.)
(Whats worse was that the King was in a giant robot and was walking through the portal right now!!!!)
Plox: We're too late!!!
SDW: We've got to head after them. It's our duty. We sped up his process. And so we'll have to fix our mistake.
Plox: Team?
SDW: Team.
Plox: :)
(They jumped to the ground and ran toward the portal, when they noticed something. Time was slowly...slowing down. They started moving slower, and slower. Thats when Plox noticed what was going on.)
Plox: Uh oh....RUN HARDER!!!
SDW: I"M TRYING!!
(Time was changing, and since it was, the future Plox and SDW were in was changing too, so time would slow intil it froze, thus making the opponent victorious.)
SDW: We're never going to make it.
Plox: YES......WE.....ARE!!! DIVE!!!!
(The two dived, and just before time froze, they entered the portal.)
(The present.)
Blox: Well, we beat those guys.
(They were outside on a field after beating the Leaders men.)
Shock: They weren't pro's, that's for sure.
Brick: I can agree with you there.
(Suddenly, Plox and the Leader himself burst through a portal next to them.)
Blox: O_o Plox watch out.
Plox: Don't worry, SDW is on our side. But they....aren't.
Brick: Who's they?
(Plox pointed. Everyone gasped in awe.)
(The army was across the field, charging. And the huge robot was just behind them.)
SDW: Mommy. |
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| 24 Oct 2009 03:44 PM |
(A sleek black car rode up.)
(Blox gasped. He remembered that car, and so did everyone else. Out stepped...)
Blox: 1337 Ace!!!! (Aka Spy 1337)
1337: Hi, my old friends.
Blox: But you were dead!!! (Flashback)
(Past)
(1337 notices the building, which is extremly tall and wide, was tipping toward them.)
1337: BRICK! GO FASTERRR!
Brick: FAST AS I CAN!
Blox: We aren't going to make it!
Shock: I WANT MY MOMMY!
All: O_o
Brick: Guys, see the turret?
1337: Yes!
Brick: It shoots an escape pod! It could get us out of range!
1337: Perfect!
Brick: One of us will have to stay behind to fire it!
Shock: WE WON"T LEAVE ANYONE BEHIND!
Brick: I'll stay! Go!
(Blox and Shock were forced in by Brick and 1337.)
1337: I'll stay, get in the hatch, theres still room.
Brick: No, you go!
1337: Ok!
(1337 throws Brick into the hatch and closes it, then fires the turret.)
1337: Goodbye, friends.
(The building hits the helicopter full force, and the building and the heli fall and eventually hit the ground with a massive breaking of metal and glass.)
(Present)
1337: I was half dead. It has taken me this long, but now I am fully recovered. I'll have to fill you in later. Right now...there's work to do.
Blox: Yeah. Glad to have you back, pal. :)
(And so there they stood, Agent Blox, Agent Shock, Pilot Brick, Spy 1337, Tech Plox, Leader SDW. The sign of good in the world. Each of them had stopped countless evil, millions of plans, and now, it was time for them to come together to stop one more.)
Blox: Team, time to win this battle.
(They charged.) |
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