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Intro: Lies: By Sara Nightingale 4/17/2034 In a land far in the past, everything was the same. Still video games. Still cars. Well... What they say about that is... It's nonsense! History is a lie. Which means... I think... The government is a lie! The farther into the future we are, the faster we die!
When Archeology Goes Wrong: By Sara Nightingale 4/17/2034 My my my! Now that's over, I should head to my office. Now... There is a book with hieroglyphics. I found it over at a dig site at Roseland, the place they thought of the incorrect history. It appears to be covered in some strange re OH GOSH BURN THE BOOK!? BURN BURN BURN! WHAT W I must not speak of it... Sorry.
Darkness: By Jasmine White 12/2/124 The streets are lonely at night. People say that they hear... Whispers. Whispers about death and blood and revenge. It's pretty bogus actually. I truly love walking out at night. It's quiet... Peaceful. The only lights are my watch and some street lights. Out in the the night it is a paradise. Just me... The street... And the darkness.
Story: You are a person in a town called Roseland. It is located on the far south-west of Mesopotamia. You know not of the dark secret of the village but there is. Not much to say... uh... Just keep RPing and the story will progress.
Rules: 1: The setting is 124 and in a town called Roseland, this will not change. 2: This may take place in the past, but it it still modern-like. 3: Be kind to each other. 4: Make creative characters. 5: Humor is great, but don't turn the RP into one big joke. 6: Don't pester me so I can spoil the story. 7: I can give and take away admin. 8: Be realistic. 9: Obey the laws of physics. 10: TEH TURTLEZ R COMIN
C.S. Name: Age: (Must have family if under 18)(Must be at least 8 years old): Gender: Job(Don't do if you put age under 16)(You don't have to have a job): Appearance: Clothing: Personality: Inventory(If you have a gun, It must be a type of pistol unless in military): Brief Bio: Other: |
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| 02 Mar 2015 07:15 PM |
Not trying to spark a flamewar but have you ever heard of a hunter or home defense or just shooting for target practice/fun |
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| 02 Mar 2015 07:20 PM |
Target practice... Shooting animals with lead bullets so when vultures eat the dead bodies, they die? Vultures are a #1 source for cleaning up the desert floor.
Enough with the guns, Mr. Trigger-Happy |
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| 02 Mar 2015 07:27 PM |
Hunters don't leave animals to die in the middle of the forest. They take it and usually eat it. I have no idea what you mean by vultures. There's no mention of vultures in the OP. |
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| 02 Mar 2015 07:34 PM |
| Uh huh... I'll wait and see if someone takes the bait for, I think, a well written RP. |
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| 02 Mar 2015 07:42 PM |
"Well written" ... You think 3 diary entries explaining random things is well written? |
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| 02 Mar 2015 07:51 PM |
Wow... MYSTERY...MYSTERY Do you understand English? Also, you aren't giving constructive criticism, you are giving snarky remarks. |
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| 02 Mar 2015 07:57 PM |
Mystery at least gives you an idea if what's going on. This is just: "Dur dur games things are in the future thingz arent changing" You don't seem to respond well to constructive criticism anyway, you almost always, rather, resent it. And not to mention this statement: "Everything I say is usually true." really ticks me off. |
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Craxian
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| 02 Mar 2015 07:58 PM |
The plot gives me no semblance of an idea what is going on. It seems that is an attempt to convey mystery, however, I was more bewildered and confused rather than curious.
The first one sounds like some crazy conspiracy + craze conspiracy theorist The random outburst of screaming in the second entry is just strange. The third entry has absolutely nothing to do with the first two, and just seems like an effort to make it more mysterious/edgy or something.
I'd say it's not horrible, but the plot seemed kinda strange.
[sorry, i just wanted to share my opinion]
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| 02 Mar 2015 07:59 PM |
| It seems like a never-ending meandering river of mind numbing confusion. |
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| 02 Mar 2015 08:07 PM |
(Okay Craxian... Look at the times and names in the diary things)
(Actually, let me explain the things: The First One: Your right, the person is a crazy conspiracy theorist The Second One: The person comes home to study an ancient book and then 'something' happens. The Third One: The date changes and she is explaining that she love the darkness and... Well... It's hard to explain this one actually) |
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| 02 Mar 2015 08:09 PM |
| (Also, you aren't supposed to get it. It's supposed to be confusing so nobody figures it out and it remains a mystery.) |
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| 02 Mar 2015 08:09 PM |
What? This... You aren't even trying to make sense anymore. |
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| 02 Mar 2015 08:16 PM |
| Who me? I don't even know you! |
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Pruz
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| Joined: 11 Nov 2009 |
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| 02 Mar 2015 08:26 PM |
| Oh my god. It's always Rockmax that makes an RP, unusable. |
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| 02 Mar 2015 08:28 PM |
"Unusable" Like a candy bar? |
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| 02 Mar 2015 09:15 PM |
| True. If it is a person who makes an RP unusable, its a 100% chance of it being rock. |
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| 02 Mar 2015 09:17 PM |
Sassy, please shut up. You're not funny and It's making you look dumber. It's the choice of the people who decide whether I ruin it. So far, people are. |
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| 02 Mar 2015 09:19 PM |
| Actually, it is funny that you are trying to be funny by saying I am trying to be funny. I'm being serious, there is a difference between constructive criticism and just saying bad things about something. |
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| 02 Mar 2015 09:22 PM |
| You seem to act most of the time you don't need it, that you're fine. Even if one of us gave it, you wouldn't take it. |
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| 02 Mar 2015 09:26 PM |
| Yet it is not like anyone has given it anyways! Can't you stop bombarding my threads with rude comments. I'm not getting anyone in my RPs because of you. I shall respectfully ask you to stop. |
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| 02 Mar 2015 09:34 PM |
| You aren't getting anyone because these topics are rather bland and mind numbingly confusing. |
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