Indiella
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| 10 Mar 2015 09:47 PM |
2nd song off of my new album, Lights Out. Instrumental: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dstzr-VtmB8&t=213 (The song laps again, so you'll have to rewind on the 3rd verse). --------------------------
[Hook x2] 0:13 Baby, spend the nights with me, All day you can be free, But darling stay the nights with me, Oh!
[Verse 1] 0:39 7 PM and I'm all alone in this cheap [a] motel Chipped paint on the walls and a musty ci[gare]tte smell A small dent in the roof from where the ceiling had fell The only other place to go on this road is to gas up at Shell Green vines crawling up the walls, you'd think it's vacant Only 4 cars in the lot, the silver one I plan on takin' I'd do anything to get outta this place, [b]es, I'm breakin' At least it was only 5 Lincoln's, that was my payment Was suppose to have such a good weekend, we was on vacation But we got into a fight, man we was drag racin' So you took your keys then ran boy, left us both in frustration Walked a couple miles and saw this [s]y gas station But across the street I saw this place on the route A dingy motel with a neon sign reading, "We're open now!" So now I'm stuck here thinking what this whole mess was about I guess this is where I'm sleeping tonight, lights out
[Hook x2] 1:32 Baby, spend the nights with me All day you can be free, But darling stay the nights with me
[Verse 2] 1:57 Texted you a couple times and tried calling your phone, Only got the voicemail saying "Leave your message at the tone" I said, "Please baby come and get me, I'm all alone, I know that you're angry, but can we please go home?" 3 hours later, a black and yellow taxi pulls up I looked into your eyes, was red and glossy close up You crying was a sight I hated to ever have thought of, But I saw you stumblin' and slipping, -sigh- "You're drunk." Started lying and fussin', while I was crying and cussin' Our relationship had went from everything to nothing Our relationship was good but we went to hating from loving But if I said I didn't want you to say, I'd be bluffin' I hate you so much right now, but I want you to stay Even the simplest of questions could make you drive away You was tip-toeing 'round subjects, you was doing ballet So I was trying to keep my tone at bay
[Hook x2] 2:50 Baby, spend the nights with me All day you can be free, But darling stay the nights with me
[Verse 3] 1:57 Half hour later, you was sobering up But you still had your guards, you was soldiering up Ready to go drag racin', you was motoring up Ready to let out your feelings, you was opening up But instead of yelling at me, you apologized You were almost at your knees, I was so surprised I thought I was at fault, I mean, I said all the lies I swear this was some play [s], practice all the lines So I said "I'm sorry, too, for when I smashed all your flowers To when I tore your notes, to when I called you a coward" The list went on and on, I felt like I was speaking for hours The tears kept coming, felt like my eyes was takin' a shower At least the fighting was over, chewed off more than I could bite His drunk, tear-stained eyes turned from red to white I'm just so happy that we ended up alright So I asked you, "Can you stay the night?"
[Hook x2] 2:50 Baby, spend the nights with me All day you can be free, But darling stay the nights with me
[Outro - Instrumental] 3:15 - end. |
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Kisila
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| 11 Mar 2015 10:26 AM |
| this is dope and all but why do you rap about stuff that did happen |
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| 11 Mar 2015 01:41 PM |
| I have a question and I'm not trying to be rude or anything , but nobody told me about this. Are you Le[][]ian or Bi by any chance? |
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| 11 Mar 2015 03:40 PM |
It was good written and everything but..
is this real?[2] |
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Indiella
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| 11 Mar 2015 07:03 PM |
Thanks, and to answer your questions,
1. No, I'm straight. 2. I like to tell stories in my songs, whether they happened or not. 3. No this is not real. |
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| 11 Mar 2015 07:04 PM |
well dam
tell them about that time you smoked crack with willie nelson |
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| 11 Mar 2015 07:05 PM |
| Okay , I knew you were. But I was still debating if you were or not after I read that hook , fam. |
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Indiella
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| 11 Mar 2015 08:22 PM |
| Lol, I just used the hook because it was already in the instrumental. |
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| 12 Mar 2015 05:32 AM |
| @Preston Kek, cracked up on that. :33 |
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| 12 Mar 2015 09:08 AM |
| you musta been smoking crack with willie nelson aswell |
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| 12 Mar 2015 05:12 PM |
| good, u got my crack pun. good. |
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| 12 Mar 2015 05:18 PM |
Guess Who's Back II http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=157696485#157696792 |
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Indiella
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| 12 Mar 2015 05:23 PM |
| Please don't advertise your songs on mine, thanks. |
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Indiella
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| 12 Mar 2015 05:27 PM |
| I know lol I mean for future reference. :) |
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JubrilMD
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| 30 Mar 2015 12:18 PM |
Can't believe I just now saw this. While reading this I was thinking of your game with the run down hotel. I love the way you crafted your style and made this into a story. Everyone can easily see the song in their head play out. Very catchy too, few metaphors
8/10 |
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