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| 27 Feb 2015 02:09 PM |
Beat:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UyiMU5UkYcU Note: This is old, just never published it
Hard sh[]t on my mind, Shearching my world, but no one to find, Its destroying me mentally, but im healing myself instrumentally, Sentimentally attached to my lyrics, Even when no one feels it, Gently lay my soul down to sleep, And people are wondering why everytime i rap they hear a beep, I hear a creak, and i don't hear the beat, Try walking in my shoes, well, there's too much sh[]t in them, I don't think your feet would fit, So, now sit down, listen to the story im telling, My brain is nocturnal, Killing innocent thoughts, like it led a collonel, Slowly i rot, can't describe what im feeling, I adore it, yet i hate it, My head full of contamination, Gazing through your head, I feel like everytime i wake up, im dead, My situation isn't the best, so im giving you this simulation, Everytime people see me, they run in interrogation, Observation is what's killing me, I can see what you can't I can feel what you don't I can hear what you won't, You wanna be me?No, trust me you don't.. [Chorus x2] Inner demons, You see nothing, but inside im screamin', Inner demons, You see nothing, but in bad thoughts im swimmin' Inner demons.. You can see the demons im fighting in my eyes, You can see there is somthing holding me down from reaching skys, You know that i wouldn't cry for no reason, But im trapped in that demon's prison, I lost my vision, I started making bad decisions, And i have no time for examination, My head like a nation, getting ruined, Destroyed, no narration, demon invasion.. They get me scared, they got me mentally aware, They got me going dementedly, They're like diseases, they broke out of quarentine, Leave my mind cut in pieces, they're aware that they're seen, They help me create masterpieces, But they destroy me with their telekenisis, Bloody shadows everywhere, all i see, Shallow mind, but my thoughts still have to paddle, This f[]cking inner demons riding me, like im an saddle A whole cadlle of them Blood all over the wall, raddle, Solving my mind like its a scrabble. [Chorus x2] Inner demons, You see nothing, but inside im screamin', Inner demons, You see nothing, but in bad thoughts im swimmin' Inner demons..x2 |
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ducky980
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| 27 Feb 2015 02:11 PM |
this has given me hope for lyricism on this forum,
message me for improvements |
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| 27 Feb 2015 02:34 PM |
I thought you left.
but anyways
10/10 this is your best song. |
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Icyclez
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| 27 Feb 2015 02:43 PM |
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Wobull
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| 27 Feb 2015 02:56 PM |
finally a good ro rap after all these other rubbish people
8.5/10 |
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| 27 Feb 2015 03:11 PM |
Sorry for dissing you, you're actually really good!
If only you'd say the same for me... |
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3rdalty
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| 27 Feb 2015 03:31 PM |
this is just like me right now. i like it.
9.9/10 |
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| 28 Feb 2015 05:05 AM |
| The bump of epic struggle proportions! |
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RandyMD
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| 28 Feb 2015 09:40 AM |
>Its destroying me mentally, but im healing myself instrumentally, Sentimentally attached to my lyrics, Even when no one feels it,
8/10 |
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| 08 Mar 2015 06:48 AM |
| I might need to make another one. But this is not bad a bit. |
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MeatSan
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| 08 Mar 2015 07:05 AM |
| start ro-rapping again and i'll join in and drop some sht too, dev. |
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| 08 Mar 2015 08:02 AM |
| ^Im working on some sh[]t that im gonna record, i'll pm you. |
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