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Re: The Truth-Jakemastermind (FreeStyle)

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JAKEMASTERMIND is not online. JAKEMASTERMIND
Joined: 02 Jan 2012
Total Posts: 71
23 Feb 2015 07:53 PM
Alright check it. I tried puttin in some work as some (f) hopsin eminem tyler the creator combination yet the rap nation didnt wanna listen when I tried to put my (S) across so now listen to me and you'll see my rhymes are the rocks. I tried talking about the mainstream (s) it was easy so why you got a bunch of these (n) actin like gifts makin their hit's when have their (s) aint even like this or close ok, I have a awoke I've realized its gonna take longer for me spittin real because im a true Mc (n) aint never seen (s) like me I slivered in poo before I spit on the mic and I also got in a fight talkin about human rights maybe i aint like mlk or malcom X (s) I still put up a fight I know my rights speak free even when im wrong I know im right You too so why dont we go watch youtube or use a noob tube and relax sit and eat we burn somein learn somein U been kinda stressed so im a hypocrite for burnin some green but remember (n) aint nothin like me my mindset my big chest is made for things I condemn and cry when my mom left me just like my dad boy I was raised by myself real made man never asked noone for help. Yet,Thats where I fall I need it I truly do takes tips from her,him,and you as for now ima sit here and gloom stare at the clouds as im high and play a lil one two on my flute (short C flat flute plays) I do this too support my little brother he two so do you or you know what to do next time I spit on the mic I might include you be king on top like tupac two packs of fans east and west if you listend thats the truth. ( I know its short its just somethin I did to start and have for now nothing big songs will be longer if you seen some of my GOOD ones old ones then you'llsee the average lengh)
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UniversalDanger is not online. UniversalDanger
Joined: 28 Jun 2012
Total Posts: 447
24 Feb 2015 10:45 AM
It's not short, do you know how many bars this could be if you just pressed enter at the end?
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3rdalty is not online. 3rdalty
Joined: 22 Dec 2014
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24 Feb 2015 01:54 PM
this is a god damn run- on sentence.

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JAKEMASTERMIND is not online. JAKEMASTERMIND
Joined: 02 Jan 2012
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24 Feb 2015 02:02 PM
I know its a run on and im not sure why put verses in a feestyle i mentioned nothing big
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JAKEMASTERMIND is not online. JAKEMASTERMIND
Joined: 02 Jan 2012
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24 Feb 2015 02:04 PM
IT was late at night so i didnt do it long other stuff i put out will defintley be better
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