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Re: Greensteel Municipal Detention Center

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problox720 is not online. problox720
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08 Jan 2015 07:22 PM
You're somewhere in the United States, being driven through a rural community in the backseat of a white van. The windows are bulletproof, there's a metal grate between you and the front seat, and a thin black line of text along the outside of the van reads, "Enderwood County Department of Corrections". Metal handcuffs grip your wrists and link you to the floor of the vehicle. A man in a black police uniform sits across from you, holding a shotgun and watching you closely. Two more just like him are in the front seat, laughingly chatting about your perdicament. Just an hour ago, you sat in a courtroom, hoping to convince the judge and jury that you're innocent. Unfortunately, their verdicts were direct and unambiguous.

Guilty.

You were then accordingly sentenced to an amount of time in the county's local prison, Greensteel Municipal Detention Center, then sent away to the holding cells to await prisoner transport. Now, here you are, with three cops in a mobile jail cell, coming up on your destination.

A chain link fence gate rolls out of the way, and the van drives through the entrance and up to the prison itself. The officer in front of you opens the sliding door, and the two up front get out to escort you. Your handcuffs are disconnected from the floor chain, and the driver of the van gesturingly invites you towards the building. As the four of you walk towards the brick structure, a metal sign reading "Welcome, Convicts" taunts you.

Inside is a rather degradeous room, poorly lit, made of old concrete, and full of leaky overhead water pipes. A table with a chair is in the center of the room, and one of the officers instruct you to sit in it. Three other officers, wearing dark green uniforms in place of the black, stand in front of the table. As you take a seat with your handcuffed arms atop the table, the three black-clothed police officers start to leave.

"We'll let you take it from here." One of them says as they return to their van. As soon as the door closes, a green-clothed officer wearing a peaked cap steps forward to deliver his introductory orientation.

"Welcome to Greensteel Municipal Detention Center, an institution aimed at facilitating rehabilitation to raise convicts from distraught criminal activity to appropriate and lawful behaviour in the general public. My name is Captain Berkley, and this is my prison.

"This institution will be your home for the duration of your sentence, and as with any home, there are a set of rules that you must abide by. First off, any blatant disobedience towards authority or lack of regard for established rules will be swiftly met with stern punishment. Do not act disrespectful to the guards, do not conspire amongst inmates, do not start fights with other inmates, do not obtain contraband, and do not go where you are not supposed to be. These are simple rules for simple minds, so following 'em should be easy.

"Now, as for prisoner uniform, you may select any combination of clothing. However, individual pieces must be white or light or dark green, no decals, no patterns, no fancy trim, no exotic fabrics, no excessive features, no formal or semi-formal attire, and absolutely no ridiculousness. For your own wellbeing, do NOT waste my time with pointless requests.

"Onto the building's layout. Beyond two sets of steel gates on the other side of this room is the actual detention center. The areas connected to the main hallway in order from left to right and up are as follows. Administration, visitation, solitary confinement, infirmary, guard office, showers, canteen, and cell area. At the end of the hallway is an exit to the yard. The yard contains exercise equipment and phone booths, but be mindful that all outgoing calls are monitored. There are also two sets of twenty-foot barbed wire fences encasing the yard and two manned watch towers looking over it at all times. Also, there is NO soliciting in the main hallway, even during free time, and especially when there are no guards around. If you're in the hallway, you're moving from point A to point B, and neither of those points are in the hallway. This coincides heavily with the fifth rule.

"Next, the daily schedule. The schedule does not change on weekends or holidays, and it applies to all inmates equally, unless of course you're in solitary or the infirmary. If you lose track of time, a buzzer is sounded over the loudspeaker to indicate a changeover in the current scheduled activity. You are then to transition quickly and efficiently through the main hallway - NO dilly-dallying! The schedule is as follows:

7:30 AM: Lights On - Wake up and get ready for the day.
8:00 AM: Morning Roll Call - Exit your cell and wait for attendance to be taken down.
8:15 AM: Breakfast - Move to the canteen and have some grub. No third servings.
9:00 AM: Shower - Move to the showers for your daily hygiene.
10:00 AM: Yard - Move to the yard area for a few hours of fresh air, phone calls, and exercise.
2:00 PM: Lunch - Move to the canteen for a midday meal. No third servings.
3:00 PM: Visitation/Afternoon Free Time - Move to visitation to talk to your family through bulletproof glass. If you don't have any visitors, move to the cell area to chat, nap, read, or whatever else you want to do.
5:00 PM: Visitation is over. Move to the cell area to join in free time.
6:00 PM: Dinner - Move to the canteen for a final meal. No third servings.
7:00 PM: Evening Roll Call - Move to the cell area for nightly attendance.
7:15 PM: Evening Free Time - Remain in the cell area to kill time however you want.
8:30 PM: Lock up - All prisoners return to their cells for their nightly routine.
9:00 PM: Lights Out - Go to bed. If you can't sleep, try harder.

"You don't have to memorize this schedule at the moment, but you will eventually. Along with the buzzer at every transition period, a speaker reminds you where you need to be. That means there is no excuse for getting lost.

"Finally, Greensteel Detention Center is a small facility, understandable as we cater to a population of no more than 1,000 people. There are eight cells, and they will be shared if necessary. There are also five guards besides myself, who are armed with everything you'd find on a police officer, besides the firearm and taser. If you make them feel in danger, their use of lethal force instantly becomes unrestricted, so make friends with 'em. If you have any questions, they're there to help.

"Okay, now that the introduction is out of the way, we have a mandatory information sheet for you to fill out. Put any stupid jokes in there and you'll spend your first night in solitary. As soon as you're done, hand it in and we'll escort you to the cell area to assign you to your cell."

One of the guards behind him walk up and drop a sheet of paper and a pencil onto the table.

Character Sheet
•Name:
•Gender:
•Age:
•Appearence (Include Clothing):
•Personality:
•Crime Committed:
•Length of Sentence:
•Other:

Rules
•No godmodding or metagaming.
•No "dropping the soap".
•No excessive disobedience, unless justified.
•Please, adequately familiarize yourself with the map.

Notes
•I control all guards.
•Guards don't godmod or metagame either.
•Escaping is condoned, but I'm not sure how it would work if you made it outside.
•I control the timescale, and I swap between periods of the day only when it is justifiably appropriate.
•Yes, you may start a gang. However, recruitment and hierarchy are your own business.

•The irrelevant conveyance of your blatantly uneducated and biased opinionation is tremendously ignorant and widely unappreciated•
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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08 Jan 2015 07:29 PM
One issue, the "You tried to convince the judge and jury you were innocent" does seem a bit restricting. We can't have plead guilty in our backstory?

Besides that I may join. I don't see any other obvious issues.
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problox720 is not online. problox720
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08 Jan 2015 07:38 PM
Damn. I didn't actually mean to add that, it's just a fault that slipped passed me. Yeah, just disregard that and make your backstory a plea bargain if you want to.
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halocrazy6444 is not online. halocrazy6444
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08 Jan 2015 07:45 PM
Ello, pro. Off to your second attempt, I see?
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problox720 is not online. problox720
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08 Jan 2015 07:47 PM
Jeez, halo, I thought you were dead. Here to make a CS?
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halocrazy6444 is not online. halocrazy6444
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08 Jan 2015 07:49 PM
Yeah, later. I'm just gonna see how well this does first.
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problox720 is not online. problox720
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08 Jan 2015 07:51 PM
Ah, okay. I'll talk to you later, then.
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AxelAirashii is not online. AxelAirashii
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08 Jan 2015 07:57 PM
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StarFire289 is not online. StarFire289
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08 Jan 2015 08:24 PM
This looks awesome.

ALSO I WROTE A REALLY GOOD ONE THEN ROBLOX LOGGED ME OFF BEFORE I COULD POST IT. ;-;
So this probably won't be as good.
Sorry.

Character Sheet
•Name: Avi Keirstan
•Gender: Non-binary, prefers they, them, etc. pronouns
•Age: 19
•Appearence (Include Clothing): Avi has tanned Caucasian skin. They also have heterochromia, with the right eye being an icy blue and the left being a light hazel. Their hair is medium brown, cut short on the left and back, with a long bang to about jaw level on the left. The tips are dyed green. In the facility, Avi wears a white sweatshirt with dark green sweatpants and wears only socks in the cells, but will put on shoes if leaving cell or told to put them on. They also have small silver hoop earrings.
•Personality: Avi is quiet and obedient. However, they are easily manipulated and can be twisted to do what other people want; though they have gotten better about not giving in. Avi is very loyal and trusting. They will obey commands well, and try not to push people's patience.
•Crime Committed: They stole $10,000 from a major supermarket and shot five people (none deeead)
•Length of Sentence: Seven years
•Other: Avi gets slightly annoyed when people call them he or she, but can shrug it off easily.
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problox720 is not online. problox720
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08 Jan 2015 08:40 PM
Non-binary? Do they not have 'parts'?
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StarFire289 is not online. StarFire289
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08 Jan 2015 08:46 PM
en.wikipedia(dot)org/wiki/Gender_binary

It's like a mix, from what I understand.
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problox720 is not online. problox720
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08 Jan 2015 09:07 PM
Ewwh, I regret asking. Either way, accepted.
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AxelAirashii is not online. AxelAirashii
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08 Jan 2015 09:32 PM
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problox720 is not online. problox720
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08 Jan 2015 10:08 PM
(Accepted. Gonna start roleplaying now. Also, I apologize for taking control of characters, it's kinda necessary for the prisoner escort.)

Avi is lead out first by Berkley's two guards. The metal gates entering the detention center seem to open automatically as they step through. They walk down the dirty concrete hallway, their footsteps echoey and loud amongst the quiet hum of fluorescent light fixtures. At the end of the hallway, they make a right turn into a set of metal double doors labeled "CELLS".

The room is made of as much concrete as the hallways, except for a design of dark green paint covering two feet of the wall from the floor. There are four jail cells on either side, as well as a barred skylight in the ceiling surrounded by lights, and a big mechanical clock on the far end of the room currently showing 5:03 PM.

"You're in cell one. On the left, closest to the door." One of the guards says as Avi is escorted inside. They remove Avi's handcuffs to let them get settled in, then one of the guards leaves the area as the other proceeds to stand next to the door in a professional stance.
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AxelAirashii is not online. AxelAirashii
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09 Jan 2015 06:04 AM
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North1233 is not online. North1233
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09 Jan 2015 06:51 AM
•Name: Alexander Graven
•Gender: Male ;I
•Age: 18
•Appearence (Include Clothing): Alexander has blue eyes with hair curved up at tbe front. (Like this: http://web.roblox.com/Charming-Brown-haired-Fellow-item?id=83013207) He wears a dark green prison uniform and has sneakers. (change if wrong.)
•Personality: He isn't very talkative, and will argue with prison guards. He doesn't like to be treated like a dog, and often tries to fake injury to get out of his cell.
•Crime Committed: Commited 7 cases of first degree murder and assaulted a woman and her kids armed. He also attempted to rob a U.S. Mint.
•Length of Sentence: Lifetime sentence.
•Other: N/A

¿ızzɐɹǝʞɐɔuɐd ǝɥʇ noʎ ǝʞɐɯ sǝʞɐɔuɐd buıʞɐɯ sǝop 'ızzɐɹɐdɐd ǝɥʇ noʎ sǝʞɐɯ ɐzzıd buıʞɐɯ ɟı #friedbutterfingerftw
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problox720 is not online. problox720
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09 Jan 2015 07:44 AM
(@Axel Right. Please wait for your introduction to the cell area before you start. That goes for everyone.)

Axel is directed to the cell area, his handcuffs are removed like the inmate before him, and he's assigned to cell number two across from Avi's.
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halocrazy6444 is not online. halocrazy6444
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09 Jan 2015 10:56 AM
Character Sheet
•Name: Steve Henderson
•Gender: Male
•Age: 34
•Appearence (Include Clothing): Caucasian, strong build, 5'11", brown buzzcut hair, serious brown eyes, wears a plain white t-shirt with an open dark green button up, dark green uniform pants, black running shoes and sometimes a dark green baseball cap
•Personality: Stupid, cocky, proud, disobedient
•Crime Committed: Assault, grand theft auto, and malicious damage to property
•Length of Sentence: Four years
•Other: He was tasked with stealing a car as an initiation job for a vehicle trafficking ring. He carjacked a sedan, nearly beat the driver to death, and crashed into a convenience store while being pursued by that police. He refused to offer any information on his employers, thus earning him a slightly lengthier sentence.
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problox720 is not online. problox720
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09 Jan 2015 11:13 AM
(You never cease to amaze me. Both accepted.)

Alexander is escorted to the cell area, his handcuffs are removed, and he's assigned to cell three, next to Avi's.

Steve is then escorted in, restraints removed, and assigned to cell four, neighboring Axel's.

The clock now shows 5:22 PM as the current time.
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halocrazy6444 is not online. halocrazy6444
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09 Jan 2015 05:05 PM
"Woo!" Steve exclaims loudly and obnoxiously, making his way towards his cell.

"Greensteel Municipal! Home sweet home!" He grabs a steel bar on his cell door, puts his foot on the door's base, and flamboyantly swings himself inside as he speaks. He removes the baseball cap from his head and sets it on the bedpost, then walks to the crisscross rods of his cell, puts his arm through two holes and coolly leans his body against the metal.

"Y'all excited?" He says with sarcastic enthusiasm, looking at the three others inmates.
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GoldenDaffodils is not online. GoldenDaffodils
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09 Jan 2015 05:10 PM
Marked
But I was sure I would make Marina drop the soap once :3
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problox720 is not online. problox720
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09 Jan 2015 05:22 PM
The guard near the cell area's entrance is distracted by his radio coming to life. A crackly, obscure, yet strangely familiar voice comes out of it. "All units to guard office, over." The guard glances at his radio, then briefly looks over the inmates. "Play nice," he states simply, before leaving through the thick metal doors and audibly locking them from outside.
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North1233 is not online. North1233
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09 Jan 2015 05:30 PM
I looked at the man, shocked. I was not excited to be in prison.

#friedbutterfingerftw Potato™
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Zalchire is not online. Zalchire
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09 Jan 2015 05:59 PM
Character Sheet
•Name: Paul Kalkrovitch
•Gender: M
•Age: 38
•Appearence (Include Clothing): Generic prison jumpsuit, nothing fancy or special.
•Personality: Rebellious, self centered egotist who could care less about what the punishments are. Though he's violent, he is still pretty smart, but he can't sneak for life.
•Crime Committed: Possession of unregistered firearms, two counts of murder, three counts of DUI, and armed robbery.
•Length of Sentence: About as long as it gets.
•Other: too bad ppl cant drop soap


Add ~650 to my post count.
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problox720 is not online. problox720
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09 Jan 2015 06:55 PM
(Accepted)

A fifth prisoner is introduced, unrestrained, and assigned to cell five.
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