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| 18 Feb 2015 04:16 PM |
http://www.roblox.com/Forgotten-Memories-WIP-place?id=131762656
Still working on expanding the city. Please leave feedback if possible. |
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Briarroze
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| 18 Feb 2015 07:32 PM |
| Very cool! Lots of nice details. I liked also that you can go into some buildings and look around with your flashlight. |
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| 18 Feb 2015 10:17 PM |
| It really has that apocalyptic feel to it. The music fits in very well. Well done |
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| 19 Feb 2015 12:58 PM |
| Thanks a lot! I hope to add some more buildings today and work a bit more with the foliage. |
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| 19 Feb 2015 01:01 PM |
| its really good and detailed |
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| 19 Feb 2015 04:21 PM |
| Thanks! Any suggestions as to what I can add for better immersion and detail? |
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| 19 Feb 2015 04:35 PM |
this place is so good that it gave me cancer
G3T F0R3MED || oops you got rekt |
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coolcal1
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| 19 Feb 2015 04:55 PM |
| It looks neat, i'd love to see it implemented into a game of some sort relevant to it's building genre! :) |
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| 19 Feb 2015 10:14 PM |
| I've thought of doing that, but I just enjoy building on to rather than managing it in some kind of game. |
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| 20 Feb 2015 02:55 PM |
| Still looking for some more feedback. Thanks |
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Zyliox
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| 20 Feb 2015 03:43 PM |
Really, really good!
one for the liar, one for the cheat - one for the man that you never meet |
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| 20 Feb 2015 03:57 PM |
| Awesome! In my opinion a darker, more cloudy skybox would do it justice. Still great though! |
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| 21 Feb 2015 12:00 PM |
| I'll definitely play around with some new skyboxes to see what fits. Thanks for the feedback |
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| 22 Feb 2015 12:43 PM |
| Thanks mineshafter! Any more feedback would be awesome |
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Surgo
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| 22 Feb 2015 01:00 PM |
What you have created here is fantastic. What really makes or breaks a game like what you're developing is the environment a player is put through. You've established that the world is sick. The music within the game is just amazing.
Things to consider:
-Have a soundtrack. After one song plays, have a script where another song will play. Therefor, players won't hear the same song over again, and it'll keep their attention while they discover new things among your place.
-An intro gui that also connects to the emotion to the place. This way, it'll look more elegant. If you need help on creating this, just message me and I can create you one, free of charge.
-The world is in ruin, living creatures died from a disease. So, where are the remains of those who past? Although creating human remains is pretty hard in ROBLOX without making it look like squarish bones, you can use solid modeling to make the bones appear more round.
Keep up the good work! You're doing an amazing job with everything you have created so far. |
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iLGB
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| 22 Feb 2015 02:18 PM |
extremely nice, I really like it.
Well done. ^^ |
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| 22 Feb 2015 06:08 PM |
Amazing feedback, Surgo--greatly appreciated!
I will add in more music for players to hear, thanks for suggesting that. I think I had that idea run across my mind months ago, but never got around to doing it. Also, what do you mean by intro GUI? Feel free to elaborate.
I can also easily add some small remains throughout the debris. Shouldn't be a problem |
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| 22 Feb 2015 07:12 PM |
| Looks really great, and I know you said you like building and not so much implementing it into a game, but just take out some of the detail (For people with narbish PC's) and come up with a game idea and I could see it doing well. |
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| 22 Feb 2015 07:20 PM |
| Amazing man! Enter this into the EBR! Maybe some rain will add to that lonely, sad feeling. |
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| 23 Feb 2015 12:58 PM |
| Thanks for the feedback! I'm not too sure if I want to turn it into a game. I like the detail it has; it really carries the atmosphere. |
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| 23 Feb 2015 01:31 PM |
| Add places where the music changes to match the environment, that would make it more interesting. |
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| 23 Feb 2015 02:58 PM |
| try joining my group and you can get some of the results that you get on forum, plus some new ideas given by members of the group! |
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| 24 Feb 2015 09:49 PM |
| I have music transition at the end of each song. There's not really several environments to have songs transitioning as you move around |
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