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| 06 Oct 2014 04:31 PM |
The Skelecore Solar System(SSS) is a thriving interplanetary coalition, consisting of four planets: * Skel (Skel) * Etal (E-tawl) * Jori(J-or-ee) * Gin(G-ine)
First off, Skel; the quarter of ancient beliefs. Skel has festivals celebrating the deceased of the past such as great leaders and commanders. Other festivals include, Sacrificing Nóson, an ungodly beast with three horns, albino fur, and beaver-like tails. They are sacred and believed to be deities trapped in mortal bodies, so they must be freed to finally be with the spirits. There is also the famous "Marrow Marathon" where youths ranging from ages 10 to 20 run through a course in the Skel jungles.
Secondly, Etal; the technological quarter of the SSS. Etal recently produced highly advanced exoskeleton suits. These suits enhance performance, jump height, speed and health, but only one at a certain time can be activated, this allows the military to mould into tactical fighting machines, from a tank to an assassin.
Thirdly, Jori; the medical quarter. Jori is producing all kinds of medical advances to help protect the inhabitants of the SSS from all kinds of infections and diseases. They have currently produced a cure for kebl(keb-el), a deadly disease which eats out your innards and leaves your body via excretion of human faeces.
Finally, Gin; the warfare and military quarter. Gin, is run by a strict militarised government. All warriors of Skelcore reside here, a squad of fifty Jori medics also reside here to heal the injured warriors of Skelcore. This quarter has several military barracks and strongholds, the command centre, the pride and joy of Gin, this is where all communications are carried out, attacks, breaches and advances on warfare are all controlled and planned right through this very building, if a planet within the Skelecore Solar System is breached, the commander with highest rank sends all military personnel to the breached planet, if more than one, they are split up into, halves, thirds, or even quarters.
The planet Gin, could be considered the most important of all planets because of it's high status of authority and control of all other planets.
[[More to be added; work in progress; can be updated]] [[Feedback is appreciated on the first draft]] |
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| 06 Oct 2014 04:40 PM |
first time writing lore heh. a friend did help with some things but it aight we worked on it together yo
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| 06 Oct 2014 05:00 PM |
b1
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| 06 Oct 2014 05:01 PM |
| I plan on making a dev group with the "-core" at the end. So please don't think that I stole the name from you. ;^). |
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| 06 Oct 2014 05:08 PM |
| Don't worry noël I told my friend the name of the group and he was like "hey isn't there a group called Syndicore" an I was like "ffffaaakkkkkkk" |
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| 07 Oct 2014 10:52 AM |
Skeletal Orgees; Best Orgees |
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| 10 Oct 2014 12:10 PM |
heh
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| 18 Jan 2015 02:50 AM |
bump for early morning / late night c&g
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| 21 Feb 2015 09:31 AM |
I think this is pretty cool but I have to have you fix something if you can because it's killing me:
"All warriors of Skelcore reside here, a squad of fifty Jori medics also reside here to heal the injured warriors of Skelcore."
Skelecore is spelled wrong twice in this sentence. Otherwise, this is really interesting. |
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| 30 May 2015 07:48 AM |
lost this. hail google docs so i can get this back on my top of tracked threads (whew).
#LosingThreadsSince2k15
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| 30 May 2015 07:50 AM |
cool
VAK is like North Korea
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