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Re: Rise & Fall - Indiella

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Indiella is not online. Indiella
Joined: 15 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 2603
16 Feb 2015 07:29 PM
idc how you rate this, I'm not pleased with it myself. idc if you like it or not, this is just how I feel. This is not a threat or a sympathy plea, and no I will not do the following things in the song so don't even worry (if you even cared, that is). this song is a metaphor so hopefully you catch that.
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[Verse 1]
It hasn't been til now that I've considered su[ic]ide
Used to say "It's the easy way out," but now I can't decide
If it wasn't for y'all asking for [s] and actin' juvenile
I wouldn't be having these thoughts on how I'd say goodbye
I wake up in the morning thinking every day will get better
But now I'm waking up asking "What would I put in my letter?"
They always acting as if they're some big [s], belong in the center
He's saying she's the sky, well I've been under the weather
They say they handed me the food, I'm on a diet
I know they would expose me, so I kept quiet
But they thought I had nothing to say, [b]es I'm a riot
They low enough to do this [s] yet they still thinking they the highest..?
They're saying what my grandma said to my mom, that I'm worthless
When I'm working so hard to achieve, that's my purpose
But if no body sees how hard I've tried, what's the point?
Cause right now I'm living for my mom, I hope I don't disappoint..
When I said I was leaving, I'm gone, I'm like Pluto
Walked away without going back, tell 'em hoes #Kudos
If words could kill I'd be dead, they so brutal
So have "Rest In Peace, Indiella" engraved on my tombstone

[Hook]
I was here from the rise, now I'm here for my fall
I don't know why I'm surprised, I knew it when I joined that call
I never should've answered the phone the very first day,
Because now they got me wondering if I'll see my next birthday

[Verse 2]
They think I'm lying on purpose, but I won't allow it
They made me feel so worthless that it's sad I've even thought about it
The past few days I have noticed, I've been getting more pale
Got pains in my neck and my arms are getting more frail
Been sick for a good week, there's a pain in my chest
You sayin' you don't hold grudges, so put this to rest
Every day that I come home I ask God why I'm so stressed
They say God quizzes everyone, but I'm getting test after test
These [b]es so hypocritical, they're naming off who they hate
But then they go and play some games the next day
They say I sneak expose when what did she do yesterday?
"You asking, "Did he talk about me? What did he say!""
Apparently being friends with guys makes me a thot
When she walks into a game and everyone thinkin she hot
They saying they'll drop me, so stop picking up my name
And if you look to your left, you'll see everybody's the same
You're so over emotional, yet when I cry it's bad
Complaining about FIRE, [n] I hope them embers burn your hand
So you can see what you've all done to me, all the pain you've caused
I don't know why they think they can push me around, they are not the boss
Only a few things holding me back, my ma is one of 'em
I know if she saw me, she'd blame herself instead of 'em
And I wanna grow up and finally move to Massa
I want to get married and then have children soon after
But at this rate with how I've been down for the past few months,
I don't know what I'll do but I know I'll only live once.

[Hook x2]
I was here from the rise, now I'm here for my fall
I don't know why I'm surprised, I knew it when I joined that call
I never should've answered the phone the very first day,
Because now they got me wondering if I'll see my next birthday
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OsirinKing is not online. OsirinKing
Joined: 23 Oct 2014
Total Posts: 2906
16 Feb 2015 07:34 PM
Can you feature on me and KingJoe's Next track on our Collaboration EP?

This was impressive , hook was the best part. All in all , 9.3/10
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Indiella is not online. Indiella
Joined: 15 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 2603
16 Feb 2015 07:35 PM
thanks, and idk. I'm thinking about quitting ro-rap after I release my album soon, but maybe.
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KyleRilyx is not online. KyleRilyx
Joined: 06 Jul 2009
Total Posts: 409
16 Feb 2015 07:40 PM
I don't care what you say or what has happened. I liked the song and the lines put together.

Good metaphors and rhyming.

RIP and stay well.

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Indiella is not online. Indiella
Joined: 15 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 2603
16 Feb 2015 07:42 PM
thanks @kyle
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KyleRilyx is not online. KyleRilyx
Joined: 06 Jul 2009
Total Posts: 409
16 Feb 2015 07:45 PM
The line that stood out the most was;

"But now I'm waking up asking "What would I put in my letter?"
They always acting as if they're some big [s], belong in the center"

I know we're not on speaking terms, but if you need someone to talk to I'm here. ;-;
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drake17dude is not online. drake17dude
Joined: 27 Oct 2011
Total Posts: 1842
16 Feb 2015 07:46 PM
I don't care what you say or what has happened. I liked the song and the lines put together.

Good metaphors and rhyming.
[2]
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ChanelG is not online. ChanelG
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16 Feb 2015 07:47 PM
I don't care what you say or what has happened. I liked the song and the lines put together.

Good metaphors and rhyming.
[3]

I'm sorry. Feel better soon.
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ChaoticPath is not online. ChaoticPath
Joined: 29 Apr 2011
Total Posts: 8695
16 Feb 2015 07:49 PM
This is the Indiella I know and respect. I wasn't digging that stuff you was working on with Randy. You're deep into your feelings with this.
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xXElasticHeartxDD is not online. xXElasticHeartxDD
Joined: 05 Apr 2012
Total Posts: 95
16 Feb 2015 08:01 PM
10/10. This song is really meaningful. :D
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IIIYoungMillerIII is not online. IIIYoungMillerIII
Joined: 26 Nov 2011
Total Posts: 319
16 Feb 2015 08:08 PM
10/10,REALLY Good.This Is EXCELLENT!
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RandyMD is not online. RandyMD
Joined: 30 Mar 2011
Total Posts: 699
16 Feb 2015 08:17 PM
I don't care what you say or what has happened. I liked the song and the lines put together.

Good metaphors and rhyming.
[3]

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Indiella is not online. Indiella
Joined: 15 Jul 2011
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16 Feb 2015 09:16 PM
Thanks for the ratings guys.
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KingHurrican3 is not online. KingHurrican3
Joined: 29 Jan 2014
Total Posts: 1862
17 Feb 2015 03:05 AM
8/10

I loved it.
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jaylenjohnson2 is not online. jaylenjohnson2
Joined: 05 Apr 2010
Total Posts: 1585
17 Feb 2015 01:57 PM
I love this
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Fraximus is not online. Fraximus
Joined: 19 Aug 2012
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17 Feb 2015 01:58 PM
I read the first two lines

ok
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AlexandroSultan is not online. AlexandroSultan
Joined: 02 Aug 2011
Total Posts: 1774
17 Feb 2015 04:56 PM
almost everyone goes through some stage of depression just keep ur cool and ur good
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Indiella is not online. Indiella
Joined: 15 Jul 2011
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17 Feb 2015 06:31 PM
Thanks jay & kh, and yeah I know shady. I'll try to keep my cool. :)
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ChaoticPath is not online. ChaoticPath
Joined: 29 Apr 2011
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17 Feb 2015 09:38 PM
I just noticed how much Shady, Aetion, and Aristios D ride eachother to all have Sultan in their name.
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DXZ0MBI3117 is not online. DXZ0MBI3117
Joined: 04 Oct 2012
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17 Feb 2015 10:02 PM
@Chaotic

Sultan means king

they are not kings

9/10 though, we should collab sometime

Also, just a reccomendation, you could try having 2 rhymes in one bar.
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ChaoticPath is not online. ChaoticPath
Joined: 29 Apr 2011
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17 Feb 2015 10:05 PM
they are peasants
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DXZ0MBI3117 is not online. DXZ0MBI3117
Joined: 04 Oct 2012
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17 Feb 2015 10:06 PM
you finally said something I agree with

1+ point to earn my respect
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Indiella is not online. Indiella
Joined: 15 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 2603
18 Feb 2015 03:50 PM
Thanks DX! I'll definitely consider having 2 words that rhyme per bar. :)
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DrAwsomeMonkey is not online. DrAwsomeMonkey
Joined: 22 Aug 2011
Total Posts: 15766
18 Feb 2015 05:04 PM
why aren't you gone yet
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iiLxuren is not online. iiLxuren
Joined: 03 Jul 2012
Total Posts: 34
18 Feb 2015 05:06 PM
HOLY SHT 10/10 bruh fr im gonna quote some lines from this af - Ya Boy Xponent.
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