Indiella
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| 16 Feb 2015 07:29 PM |
idc how you rate this, I'm not pleased with it myself. idc if you like it or not, this is just how I feel. This is not a threat or a sympathy plea, and no I will not do the following things in the song so don't even worry (if you even cared, that is). this song is a metaphor so hopefully you catch that. -----------------------------------
[Verse 1] It hasn't been til now that I've considered su[ic]ide Used to say "It's the easy way out," but now I can't decide If it wasn't for y'all asking for [s] and actin' juvenile I wouldn't be having these thoughts on how I'd say goodbye I wake up in the morning thinking every day will get better But now I'm waking up asking "What would I put in my letter?" They always acting as if they're some big [s], belong in the center He's saying she's the sky, well I've been under the weather They say they handed me the food, I'm on a diet I know they would expose me, so I kept quiet But they thought I had nothing to say, [b]es I'm a riot They low enough to do this [s] yet they still thinking they the highest..? They're saying what my grandma said to my mom, that I'm worthless When I'm working so hard to achieve, that's my purpose But if no body sees how hard I've tried, what's the point? Cause right now I'm living for my mom, I hope I don't disappoint.. When I said I was leaving, I'm gone, I'm like Pluto Walked away without going back, tell 'em hoes #Kudos If words could kill I'd be dead, they so brutal So have "Rest In Peace, Indiella" engraved on my tombstone
[Hook] I was here from the rise, now I'm here for my fall I don't know why I'm surprised, I knew it when I joined that call I never should've answered the phone the very first day, Because now they got me wondering if I'll see my next birthday
[Verse 2] They think I'm lying on purpose, but I won't allow it They made me feel so worthless that it's sad I've even thought about it The past few days I have noticed, I've been getting more pale Got pains in my neck and my arms are getting more frail Been sick for a good week, there's a pain in my chest You sayin' you don't hold grudges, so put this to rest Every day that I come home I ask God why I'm so stressed They say God quizzes everyone, but I'm getting test after test These [b]es so hypocritical, they're naming off who they hate But then they go and play some games the next day They say I sneak expose when what did she do yesterday? "You asking, "Did he talk about me? What did he say!"" Apparently being friends with guys makes me a thot When she walks into a game and everyone thinkin she hot They saying they'll drop me, so stop picking up my name And if you look to your left, you'll see everybody's the same You're so over emotional, yet when I cry it's bad Complaining about FIRE, [n] I hope them embers burn your hand So you can see what you've all done to me, all the pain you've caused I don't know why they think they can push me around, they are not the boss Only a few things holding me back, my ma is one of 'em I know if she saw me, she'd blame herself instead of 'em And I wanna grow up and finally move to Massa I want to get married and then have children soon after But at this rate with how I've been down for the past few months, I don't know what I'll do but I know I'll only live once.
[Hook x2] I was here from the rise, now I'm here for my fall I don't know why I'm surprised, I knew it when I joined that call I never should've answered the phone the very first day, Because now they got me wondering if I'll see my next birthday |
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| 16 Feb 2015 07:34 PM |
Can you feature on me and KingJoe's Next track on our Collaboration EP?
This was impressive , hook was the best part. All in all , 9.3/10 |
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Indiella
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| 16 Feb 2015 07:35 PM |
| thanks, and idk. I'm thinking about quitting ro-rap after I release my album soon, but maybe. |
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KyleRilyx
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| 16 Feb 2015 07:40 PM |
I don't care what you say or what has happened. I liked the song and the lines put together.
Good metaphors and rhyming.
RIP and stay well.
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Indiella
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KyleRilyx
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| 16 Feb 2015 07:45 PM |
The line that stood out the most was;
"But now I'm waking up asking "What would I put in my letter?" They always acting as if they're some big [s], belong in the center"
I know we're not on speaking terms, but if you need someone to talk to I'm here. ;-; |
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| 16 Feb 2015 07:46 PM |
I don't care what you say or what has happened. I liked the song and the lines put together.
Good metaphors and rhyming. [2] |
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ChanelG
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| 16 Feb 2015 07:47 PM |
I don't care what you say or what has happened. I liked the song and the lines put together.
Good metaphors and rhyming. [3]
I'm sorry. Feel better soon. |
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| 16 Feb 2015 07:49 PM |
| This is the Indiella I know and respect. I wasn't digging that stuff you was working on with Randy. You're deep into your feelings with this. |
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| 16 Feb 2015 08:01 PM |
| 10/10. This song is really meaningful. :D |
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| 16 Feb 2015 08:08 PM |
| 10/10,REALLY Good.This Is EXCELLENT! |
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RandyMD
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| 16 Feb 2015 08:17 PM |
I don't care what you say or what has happened. I liked the song and the lines put together.
Good metaphors and rhyming. [3]
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Indiella
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| 16 Feb 2015 09:16 PM |
| Thanks for the ratings guys. |
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Fraximus
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| 17 Feb 2015 01:58 PM |
I read the first two lines
ok |
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| 17 Feb 2015 04:56 PM |
| almost everyone goes through some stage of depression just keep ur cool and ur good |
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Indiella
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| 17 Feb 2015 06:31 PM |
| Thanks jay & kh, and yeah I know shady. I'll try to keep my cool. :) |
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| 17 Feb 2015 09:38 PM |
| I just noticed how much Shady, Aetion, and Aristios D ride eachother to all have Sultan in their name. |
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| 17 Feb 2015 10:02 PM |
@Chaotic
Sultan means king
they are not kings
9/10 though, we should collab sometime
Also, just a reccomendation, you could try having 2 rhymes in one bar. |
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| 17 Feb 2015 10:06 PM |
you finally said something I agree with
1+ point to earn my respect |
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Indiella
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| 18 Feb 2015 03:50 PM |
| Thanks DX! I'll definitely consider having 2 words that rhyme per bar. :) |
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iiLxuren
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| 18 Feb 2015 05:06 PM |
| HOLY SHT 10/10 bruh fr im gonna quote some lines from this af - Ya Boy Xponent. |
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