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Re: Embers - RandyMD.

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RandyMD is not online. RandyMD
Joined: 30 Mar 2011
Total Posts: 699
15 Feb 2015 06:21 PM
This is a song off of my new upcoming Self-titled EP, RandyMD.
This is an R&B song, so don't read it as a rap, excluding the Intro.
Let me know how you feel about this song in the comments below!


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[Intro]
Lift off
Now here we are
Being with you, left me in the dark
Salt on my wounds, open my heart
They say we were doomed, straight from the start
Follow my head with all of my hate
Can't move on, too much weight on my plate
No more new friends till my head is on straight
Till I'm gunnin' on aim, no more running away
Find my way out the darkness, I am not heartless
Get lost in the music, I will not lose it
Love is for stupids, love is for cupids
Love ain't for people who burn roses and tulips
Uh
Why can't we be together..?


[Verse 1]
I think I'm afraid of it
So all this love, I'm saving it
Cause they say you aren't the one
Think it's a game, stop playing it
There's more to love than just saying it
I've learned my lesson, now I'm done
You said,

[Pre-Chorus]
"You got it wrong, My heart sings out to you, just listen"
You'd pick me up saying we could shine and glisten
But all along, from the start, you wanted me as your vixen

[Chorus]x2
Let the Embers die slow
No more trust, I thought we
Were meant for each other
Oh, you were just a lying bastard
Oh, please let them Embers die, faster


[Post-Chorus]
Let the Embers die slow, Let the Embers die
Let the Embers die slow, Let the Embers die


[Verse 2]
It's shame that we would meet at night
It seemed like you would treat me right
I said you weren't like the others
Why'd you have to lie to me
All these Embers left inside of me
Can't believe you had another
You said,


[Pre-Chorus]


[Chorus]x2
Let the embers die slow
No more trust, I thought we
Were meant for each other
Oh, you were just a lying b@stard
Oh, please let them Embers die, faster


[Post-Chorus]
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drake17dude is not online. drake17dude
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15 Feb 2015 06:45 PM
8.5/10
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Indiella is not online. Indiella
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15 Feb 2015 07:01 PM
6.8/10

Intro was way too long, verses were pretty short. Rhyme scheme was eh.
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Wobull is not online. Wobull
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15 Feb 2015 07:04 PM
5.5/10
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RandyMD is not online. RandyMD
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15 Feb 2015 07:08 PM
>Intro was way too long, verses were pretty short. Rhyme scheme was eh.

Intro was fine, thank you very much.

The verses were fine, thank you very much.

The rhyme scheme was something you wouldn't be able to understand because you're too much of a HATER and FAKE person, to know what a song is worth.

Thank you c:
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TruH4WK13 is not online. TruH4WK13
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15 Feb 2015 07:18 PM
All these "songs" on roblox are worthless unless they're recorded.
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RandyMD is not online. RandyMD
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15 Feb 2015 07:22 PM
Truhawk you shouldn't be talking at ALL seeing YOU used to be a ro-rapper.

#CheckYourSelf
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Wobull is not online. Wobull
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15 Feb 2015 07:25 PM
"The rhyme scheme was something you wouldn't be able to understand because you're too much of a HATER and FAKE person, to know what a song is worth."


stop getting emotional and accept criticism
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Indiella is not online. Indiella
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15 Feb 2015 07:28 PM
"Intro was fine, thank you very much."

You clearly don't understand what an intro is considering intros are an >introduction< to a song. They are shorter than the verse, like in essays when the introduction paragraph is shorter than the body, same with the outro.

"The verses were fine, thank you very much."

I'm giving constructive criticism yet you're not taking it...You get mad if anyone says ANYTHING wrong about one of your songs.

"The rhyme scheme was something you wouldn't be able to understand because you're too much of a HATER and FAKE person, to know what a song is worth."

How does me being "fake" or a "hater" mean I don't understand a rhyme scheme...I'm a writer myself so obviously I know a thing or two about rhyme scheme. Stop being butthurt and accept that just because we're "friends" does not mean I automatically have to give your songs a 10/10 rating. Not all of your songs are good and I personally don't think this was your best. The intro was the best part but it was too long to be an intro.
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TruH4WK13 is not online. TruH4WK13
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15 Feb 2015 07:34 PM
Yes i was and STILL am a ro rapper but i started recording on soundcloud











Don't forget to take them pills bruh
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TruH4WK13 is not online. TruH4WK13
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15 Feb 2015 07:37 PM
Randy is anyways butthurt


From opposing to rappers





















And from taking dck
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RandyMD is not online. RandyMD
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15 Feb 2015 07:42 PM
>You clearly don't understand what an intro is considering intros are an >introduction< to a song. They are shorter than the verse, like in essays when the introduction paragraph is shorter than the body, same with the outro.

Not all intros have to be shorter than the verses. Who EVER informed you of that lied to you oh so severely.



You need to reevaluate yourself. You are BLINDLY mistaken if you think im tripping over YOU rating my song bad. I know my songs worth. I know my lyrical worth. It's something you wont ever be able to achieve because you're too busy following a crowd of people who are ahead of you. You are the most fakest person I've ever met on ROBLOX. Now, we can either keep the beef on ROBLOX, or deal with it on skype. Chose carefully -.-
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RandyMD is not online. RandyMD
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15 Feb 2015 07:43 PM
FYI, this was an emotional song. Don't think I'm emotional becaus eof it. It's called standing up for what you know deserves its props.
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Wobull is not online. Wobull
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15 Feb 2015 07:47 PM
this song has close to zero worth though
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Indiella is not online. Indiella
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15 Feb 2015 07:52 PM
If you didn't care about my rating then why reply..tf. Who am I following..? Tell me how I'm fake. This was never on ROBLOX, so why bring it here. You're the one who brought it here in the first place.
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llPreston9911ll is not online. llPreston9911ll
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15 Feb 2015 08:06 PM
god.

randy fell off harder than anybody
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ChanelG is not online. ChanelG
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15 Feb 2015 08:12 PM
"Love is for stupids, love is for cupids
Love ain't for people who burn roses and tulips"

I really liked that line, but I did find it kinda awkward that the intro was longer than the verses itself. Like maybe the first verse could've been the intro instead.

Now I ALSO enjoyed the chorus, but this caught me off guard:

"Let the Embers die slow
...Oh, please let them Embers die, faster" It just contradicted each other, that's all. But that might've been your point, correct me if I'm wrong.

I genuinely enjoyed this, altogether I rate this a...7/10. Nice work. :)

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RandyMD is not online. RandyMD
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15 Feb 2015 08:22 PM
>"Let the Embers die slow
...Oh, please let them Embers die, faster" It just contradicted each other, that's all. But that might've been your point, correct me if I'm wrong.

The song is a Love Story. Its about Person A. and Person B having a fling and sparked a flame between the two, but Person B does something that hurts Person A, and Person A wants nothing to do them. Hence, "Let The Embers die slow" as much as Person A was hurt, they don't the feelings to go away, but they still are hurt and want nothing to do with Person B, hence "Oh, please let them Embers die, faster."

I'll try to work more on explaining the songs.

This song was a very close song to me, and I'm proud of it. So as much as I appreciate your rates, I don't care for them if you don't see it the way I do.
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Wobull is not online. Wobull
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15 Feb 2015 08:44 PM
lmao randy fails to realize that if you publish a thread it's for the readers and not for you. maybe try writing better because there is obviously no deeper meaning to any of your lines here.
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Rapt0rzLmAd is not online. Rapt0rzLmAd
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16 Feb 2015 09:42 AM
6.5/10
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ChaoticPath is not online. ChaoticPath
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16 Feb 2015 09:56 AM
3/10. Verses were super short and the intro was super long. Also was borin and the same crap you always write about.
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KinqSupremeVI is not online. KinqSupremeVI
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16 Feb 2015 06:55 PM
Oo kill em. 7-8/10 depending on my day.
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UndeadOverload is not online. UndeadOverload
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16 Feb 2015 06:58 PM
I love how Randy here is always talking crap yet he'd get bodied by even the worst rookie.


The Rebirth is over, now it's time for the Virus...
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KinqSupremeVI is not online. KinqSupremeVI
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16 Feb 2015 06:59 PM
So would you legacy.
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ChaoticPath is not online. ChaoticPath
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16 Feb 2015 07:01 PM
Who is KingSupreme
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