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| 13 Feb 2015 08:49 PM |
Feedback? I put a little bit of my rhyme scheme in this!
That moment when you realize you have the most wonderful girlfriend in the world! Our relationship might not be perfect , we fight and make each other cry (For me inside). We even want to kill each other once in a while, But I wouldn't trade you for anything in the world. You're like family to me, You amaze me everyday with your personality. You brighten up my day , and your always there for me. I honestly don't know if us meeting was luck or just meant to be. But all my friends , and everyone who knows me could all see. I love Brianna forever and for eternity! |
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| 13 Feb 2015 08:53 PM |
| You should title it "Mai Waifu". |
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| 13 Feb 2015 08:59 PM |
Dude, she's gonna love it. If she doesn't, then she has no eyes.
The Rebirth is over, now it's time for the Virus... |
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| 13 Feb 2015 08:59 PM |
| xD I'd put that it consideration |
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| 13 Feb 2015 09:03 PM |
| I support the idea for titling it "Mai Waifu". |
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| 13 Feb 2015 09:03 PM |
| Damn your lucky Im single for VD. |
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| 13 Feb 2015 09:05 PM |
xD
I'm calling it that. Who else has plans for tomorrow's day of love? |
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| 13 Feb 2015 09:05 PM |
Petition to title possibly useless valentine poem "Mai Waifu": deathmaniac6738 3Dwolf11 |
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Finn102
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| 13 Feb 2015 09:35 PM |
Petition to title possibly useless valentine poem "Mai Waifu": deathmaniac6738 3Dwolf11 Finn102 |
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Finn102
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| 13 Feb 2015 09:38 PM |
"You're like family to me," wincest? |
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Finn102
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| 13 Feb 2015 09:44 PM |
here I wrote a poem too: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/DarkestStoryline/1486885/ |
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| 13 Feb 2015 10:28 PM |
| That was actually pretty nice. |
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Finn102
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| 13 Feb 2015 10:29 PM |
@Dr mine is pretty nice too |
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| 13 Feb 2015 10:36 PM |
your mom is gonna love you for this
Mixtape Nostalgia! |
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| 14 Feb 2015 12:30 AM |
Damn, Wonderflow's gonna put out for you with this. Goodjob. |
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| 14 Feb 2015 08:19 AM |
Petition to title possibly useless valentine poem "Mai Waifu": deathmaniac6738 3Dwolf11 Finn102 Kisila |
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| 14 Feb 2015 08:30 AM |
I think it's pretty good. Unless, say, she's delusional, then she'll take it.
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