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| 12 Feb 2015 08:35 PM |
Intro: Edward Barns: Doctor's Log: Project Reunion: Test #1: Before Notes: I am Doctor Edward Barns, A scientist in the field of medicine. Me and my pals are really revolutionizing medicine I've been studying effects of medicine for a long time so I know what most medicines do. So as I was looking at the medicines I was like "I think I have an idea... Preventing death!" I know! Prevention of death. Me and my pals agreed to work together on this little project... I call it "project reunion".
Edward Barns: Doctor's Log: Project Reunion: Test #369: After Notes: I've been testing for a year now... It has been a success! Kind of... The medicines I've used may have gotten the people That agreed to test... a little crazy. They only speak gibberish, they try to bite people, and they always seem to limp slowly to get places. I'll be sending them to a hospital so their side effects can wear off. I'll also start shipping the medicine to hospitals and pharmacies. Now to the point... We are going to start going to start going bigger than before... We are gonna bring people back to life! I know! Amazing! I'll call it "Project Reborn"! Anyways... I just wanted to point that out! Goodbye!
Edward Barns: Doctors Log: Project Reborn: Test #1: Before Notes: I am about to experiment on my first dead person... Looks like she died of major burns... Burning building perhaps? I will be using chlorophyll, chloroplast, water, natural sugar from apples, vitamin D, vitamin C, and some blood and DNA samples and hope this mixure of chemicals and other stuff will help keep it's life up. I doubt it... first tries never work. Anyways before I start the experiment I want to say that "Project Reunion" was a fail... All who were given the medicine... died. I wouldn't want to discuss the gory details so I'll just go on with the experiment... goodbye!
Edward Barns: Doctors Log: Project Reborn: Test #692: After Notes: It took so long... I finally did it... It took years but I made someone come back from the dead! They said it couldn't be done but I did it... I am a hero... The side effects from "Project Reunion" happened again though... ugh... And they really want to bite now... and they don't seem so be dying like in "Project Reunion"... Well... I guess I need a "little" more time.
*All Of Edward Barns' Logs Mysteriously Stop There*
Story: To set a long story short, you are in the town of Glasgow,Scotland and you are trying to survive zombies. You don't know how it started or how to stop it. You are just trying to survive and hoping. There are walking corpses everywhere... They are coming to eat you. You know that if you get one bite... You must survive... Die... Or stop the walking corpses. And this takes place in year 2047 :3
Rules: 1: Follow the rules that Roblox give you. 2: Please don't make things to gory. 3: Give respect to eachother. 4: In this RP, I and the admins are gods and godesses 5: Don't complain if you get killed off, you can make another C.S. 6: Limit to 5 characters. 7: Obey the laws of physics. 8: No Godmoding 8: Notice that 3 of the rules are numbered "8" 8: Put "zombiez" in other. 9: I have the power to give away and take admin. 10: HAVE FUN (Most of you won't though D=)
C.S. Name: Gender: Age: Appearence: Clothing: Intelligence (put a number 1-10, 1 being stupid, 10 being a mastermind): Temper (put a number 1-10, 1 being always happy, 10 being always angry): Personality (optional, if you think this progresses though the story): Good Or Evil: Bio (if you don't want to bother, at least put down what is going on with your life in the apocalapse) Other: |
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| 12 Feb 2015 08:42 PM |
| Bumpy Bumpy Bumpy Bumpy Bumpy BUMP |
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| 12 Feb 2015 08:47 PM |
5.7/10 Considerately better than the original
+Intro +Story detail +Rules
-Grammar -Hello?! Weapon list?! |
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| 12 Feb 2015 08:53 PM |
Marc pls pls don't become twisted version of me You'll be unfavorable in life later on just just don't do it I only put weapon lists in my rps sometimes bcause I liek shop system n stuff im not thinking |
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| 12 Feb 2015 08:54 PM |
im trying not to i left in wepon list by mistake im sorry |
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| 12 Feb 2015 08:56 PM |
[Hello! You don't randomly have the weapon! And Hello! You can have any weapon as long as it makes sense for you to have it and it is real!] |
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| 12 Feb 2015 08:56 PM |
(Edited review to correct mistake...) 5.7/10 Considerately better than the original
+Intro +Story detail +Rules
-Grammar -Spacing between words |
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| 12 Feb 2015 08:57 PM |
| [Also... This is a survival game.... Not a shooting/war game] |
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| 12 Feb 2015 08:58 PM |
| [So the only bad this I have is spelling errors?] |
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| 12 Feb 2015 08:59 PM |
I know, Sassy. Oh yeah, and it's RP, not game. |
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| 12 Feb 2015 09:00 PM |
| Because of course sassy, it's obvious we shouldn't or can't defend our selves, so obviously the rp can not end real quickly because everyone doesn't have a gun. And to like, have a gun, you absolutely must be in military111! Or poleez! |
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| 12 Feb 2015 09:02 PM |
| [Rock... the military is basically dead... Go to a military base ou- oh wait... This takes place at a town... You can have any weapon you might regularly find at a town... like at a store or something.] |
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| 12 Feb 2015 09:05 PM |
| [It isn't that bad... It's RP material now atleast... So please let me get RPers PWEAZE] |
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| 12 Feb 2015 09:05 PM |
| Oh, bcause like, it's not like the military has CARS or TANKS or TRUCKS or HELICOPTERS or JETS or anything. And it's like, obviously, the militury is stoopid11 they wouldn't make a SHELTER |
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| 12 Feb 2015 09:07 PM |
| [Rock... Stop acting like your RP make sense and not mine -_-] |
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| 12 Feb 2015 09:09 PM |
| [Also... Have you NEVER seen a zombie show/movie? Might as well yell at the people who made those things] |
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| 12 Feb 2015 09:13 PM |
No, I don't waste my time mostly watching tv. I at least use actual logic other than
"Guys Guiz hay hay military is dead cause and government exploded" |
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| 12 Feb 2015 09:14 PM |
DURPY DURPOLOL YEH BRO ZOMBIE SHOWMVIES R SO REEL LOL
Sassygirl770 you grammar need to learn & better at writing ohk? and no1 is yeling @ any1 okay u cant evn shout thru th65e monitr @ ppl u lil girl lol
Tardigrades don't give a floppy chicken! |
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| 12 Feb 2015 09:15 PM |
gg prec gg Sassy, at least use some form of common sense, rather than "Guiz, i made drug but it makes zombiez! Won!" |
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| 12 Feb 2015 09:16 PM |
I agree rock.
You can't accept sht like "OH NOEZ TEH MILLYTERRY IS DIED N TEH GOVRNMENT EXPLOD" in a zombie RP. |
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| 12 Feb 2015 09:17 PM |
| [Well... In "The Walking Dead" the government mysteriously dies... and "Shaun Of The Dead"... and "Zombiland"... actually every single one besides "World War Z"... So I think it's fine. Now please try to be nicer] |
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| 12 Feb 2015 09:20 PM |
Sassy, just because every zombie movie has the same exact plot doesn't mean you absolutely must follow it. Governments don't suddenly "Collapse", there is usually traces or attempts at forming one.
It's like saying if your best friend jumped off a cliff, would you do the same? |
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| 12 Feb 2015 09:20 PM |
mfg FMG AFG AJGAMGFP;HAGAG AYEAH BCUZ WALKING DAD AND SHAUN OF THE DEAD AND ZOMBILAND AND STUF IS TOTALY A RP YEAH NOT 4 MEDIA AND HYPE AND HELP AND STUF AND YOLO LAOALOFLAOFAOLFA
YOULO? LOLLOLOLOLOLOLOL NICER -WLCOME 2 THE INTRNET YOULO!?
MOVESANDSHOWXRTOTLYNOTJUST4PPLHYPE&THIRST4RATIGNS&STUFFYOULO!?THEYRTOTLYNOTLIK4PPL2WATCHANDGETMONIERITE
RITE?!?@!??! CHINA WOOOOOOOOOOO MURICA UK TYRONE
Tardigrades don't give a floppy chicken! |
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| 12 Feb 2015 09:20 PM |
| are you ok prec did you take your stuff |
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