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Re: RSF - Adventures of Private Carmel

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Grifey is not online. Grifey
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09 Feb 2015 03:00 AM
.....The sun rose over RSF's headquarters...Dead soldiers lying all over, blood splattered on the beach and blood washing up on the beach, Ripped pieces of RSF uniform and the flag hanging on the top of the headquarters torn in half with rips on it.


A bunch of RSF transport ships fly ahead, They all land and Blackrushflash and his battalion rush out to secure the beach and find survivors, xypersparky hops out from another with his battalion to check inside.
"All clear...No surviviors..." Reports black to xyper
"Nothing hear either..." reports Xyper.

They all get back into the transport ships and are about to take off as a private crawls up the shores.
"DON'T FLY!" shouts black and jumps out rushing to help the privates
"GET A MEDIC!" he shouts and medic's rush out.

They pick up the soldier and put him on a stretcher. He is brought back to the hidden Eagle Base inside the mountains.

All the HR's gather around the table to discuss what has happened
"Bring in the private..The only one that survived, I believe his name is carmel..." says black

Fruitbox calls the soldiers and 2 guys help him in, He is missing half of his arm and it is bandaged up

He walks in looking shocked and sit down

"What happened?" fruit asks

"T-t-they attacked...T-t-they killed us all...W-w-we couldn't do anything..." Carmel says

"Who attacked..?" fruit asks
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TheLegendEmperor is not online. TheLegendEmperor
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09 Feb 2015 03:05 AM
Keep going..
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Grifey is not online. Grifey
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09 Feb 2015 03:35 AM
Oh I will continue in second story ;3

da cliff hanger....ish...
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bluefredy is not online. bluefredy
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09 Feb 2015 03:35 AM
11/10 would read again without mtn dew
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Grifey is not online. Grifey
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09 Feb 2015 04:20 AM
thx bud :P
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Sencu is not online. Sencu
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09 Feb 2015 04:28 AM
If I crapped in a bucket, it'd be a better story than this.
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Klivax is online. Klivax
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09 Feb 2015 05:07 AM
nice job :)

"Nothing hear either..." reports Xyper.

wrong here doe :P
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devLiams is not online. devLiams
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09 Feb 2015 05:09 AM
and then david gets shot and dies. and a new leader of rsf is wip
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Grifey is not online. Grifey
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09 Feb 2015 05:10 AM
ohsht sorry I didn't realise xD My english isn't the best so yeah :P
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Grifey is not online. Grifey
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09 Feb 2015 05:12 AM
UAF gotta hate on RSF, haha sure. Whatever floats your boat my friend, whatever floats your boat.
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xypersparky is not online. xypersparky
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09 Feb 2015 05:51 AM
Gud story love to see this thing started again after months
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trainyay is online. trainyay
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09 Feb 2015 05:53 AM
VAK attacked and got RSF rekted
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trainyay is online. trainyay
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09 Feb 2015 05:53 AM
rekt*
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Scorpiosis is not online. Scorpiosis
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09 Feb 2015 05:54 AM
UAF don't gotta hate on RSF. Love the start!
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Sencu is not online. Sencu
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09 Feb 2015 05:57 AM
Stop assuming I'm representing UAF, and speaking on behalf of UAF the second I say anything.

I'm entitled to my own opinion.

Idiot.
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Grifey is not online. Grifey
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09 Feb 2015 06:16 AM
Wow he mad.
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Grifey is not online. Grifey
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09 Feb 2015 06:17 AM
Next time you call someone an idiot, realise there is an "I" in idiot. :-)
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Bahll is not online. Bahll
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09 Feb 2015 06:22 AM
"Who attacked?"


GREEN GODS
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Sencu is not online. Sencu
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09 Feb 2015 06:25 AM
Yeah and next time you make assumptions realize that you're an idiot for doing so.
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Grifey is not online. Grifey
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09 Feb 2015 06:36 AM
How is making assumptions being an idiot? xD
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greensoldier500 is not online. greensoldier500
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09 Feb 2015 07:37 AM
Can i be in the next story? Idc if i die or get blown up, i just wanna be in it.
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Grifey is not online. Grifey
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09 Feb 2015 07:39 AM
A'ight m8 you can be the green toilet seat in fruitbox's office. :)

Jk I'll add you, PM me what kind of part you want. :D
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Blamingo is not online. Blamingo
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09 Feb 2015 08:32 AM
Cool
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DrInfuscate is not online. DrInfuscate
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09 Feb 2015 08:48 AM
Looks like black is giving fruit an order. Those names should be switched, on the part where they're saying to bring him in

Over all, not horrible. I've seen many far worse then this.

I'm not a rapper
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Grifey is not online. Grifey
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09 Feb 2015 08:51 AM
He was suggesting, he didn't give him an order, he was just saying it out of order, not directed at anyone, then Fruit brought him in. Maybe some grammar mistakes that made it sound otherwise, Meant to adda question mark to the end :P
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