ChanelG
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| 07 Feb 2015 04:42 PM |
A/N: This is about two people, if that wasn't clear enough.
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Instrumental: http://youtu(DOT)be/K3Jjdr7IWe0
[Verse I] (0:32 - 0:1:17)
You left a scar on my heart so I had to go and leave it on ice It's cold [A] world, so I guess you can say that I fit in nice My parents always warned about dr*gs on the streets But forgot 'bout the ones with brown eyes and a heartbeat I know that we're tryin' but what are we doin', I see the roses but I can sense the ruin, Tryna be with you feels like I missed my flight, The gates closed, came back the next night, Finally caught a plane, but the plane won't land, And the only way out is...well you understand, They say to see a rainbow, first comes the storm, But you're from New Orleans, where rain is the norm, You were there when my Abuelo was dying, Comforted me when I was crying, lying, sayin' I was fine and Implying that nothing has changed, that I'm still the same, As if my head wasn't aflame, that I hear angels when you call my name, But now that you're so far away, the memories are stuck on replay, I don't mean to be all cliche, but without you my skies are gray, That's why it's so hard for me to say
[Bridge] (1:18 - 1:33)
I can see roses but I sense the ruin, I thought you knew it... We're on the far side of the moon and, I thought you knew this... (x2)
[Hook] (1:34 - 2:04)
I'm falling apart, I can't match you It's not for long 'til I can't catch you It's never 'til I'm all alone that I wish I had you, here I see the sun, but the rain is near Prove me wrong, and make all the pain disappear (x2)
[Verse II] (2:05 - 2:52)
I want her to go to college just to hear her say that we made it And I know that with all of this [S] goin' on it can all get frustratin' Baby let's face it, all that sisterly love is outdated I hate it, you're right here but it feels like we're separated I'm always doing my thing, and you're out doing your own Every time I look at you, I think of how much you've grown Ain't even hit the double digits and you're already 'bout your business I've seen you do things most kids can't in only a couple minutes Spitting image of mama, but you act just like daddy If he could see us right now, he would take the chance gladly Know that he loves, and know that no one's above us Keep in mind that he passed his legacy to both of us Remember what mama told us back in Daytona: "Sujetar abajo tu corona" "Hold down your crown", and let none [F] around Always stand your ground, and never back down Hey, I heard you wanna be seen on the big screen Can't wait to watch you'll be flawless- pristine I know you'll get there no problem one day That's why it's so hard for me to say
[Bridge] (2:53 - 3:07)
I can see roses but I sense the ruin, I thought you knew it... We're on the far side of the moon and, I thought you knew this... (x2)
[Hook] (3:08 - 4:03)
I'm falling apart, I can't match you It's not for long 'til I can't catch you It's never 'til I'm all alone that I wish I had you, here I see the sun, but the rain is near Prove me wrong, and make all the pain disappear (x3)
[Outro] (4:04 - 4:19)
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Now that I finally got that out of the way I'm done looking for sentimental [S] to say And to many I know that these sound like fables But this is my story, this is what I bring to the table From here its only bitter truth, and soon will be proven
This is the intro to Roses and Ruin.
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| 07 Feb 2015 04:44 PM |
| I couldn't read. It was already a 10/10 without looking at it! Hit me up with a collab on your album Chanel! |
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ChanelG
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| 07 Feb 2015 04:44 PM |
| Sure will buddy! Thank you! :) |
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| 07 Feb 2015 04:47 PM |
| Mk. I wasnt feeling it tho so like Iggy/Eminem |
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ChanelG
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minniem
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| 07 Feb 2015 04:52 PM |
Thank you for sending me this, I'm gonna go ahead and rate all the songs I see while I'm here.
I'm gonna give this a 9.5/10, the Outro got me hype for the next song lol. Beautifully written, dope, deep song. Keep at it girl. |
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RandyMD
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| 07 Feb 2015 05:00 PM |
I think now I understand why you were so out of it today. Probably over thinking or contemplating on the release of this, but.. There was no need to. You poured your heart into this, and I had no idea how this was going to come out, but it came in something I've never seen before. The rise before the storm. You are the sky. Everybody else is the weather. You are in control of who You are. Don't let anybody change that. As a friend, I'm very proud of you. As a fan, I'm inspired by you. As an artist, I'm all of the above. I would quote my favorite verses but.. That would mean me outshining other parts of the song, but it the entire thing its self deserves recognition.
Sujetar abajo tu corona.
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| 07 Feb 2015 05:08 PM |
trash. you should just quit
Mixtape Nostalgia! |
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ChanelG
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| 07 Feb 2015 05:11 PM |
| Thank you very much guys, and Obey I'll take that into consideration darling. Thank you for taking time out of your day for me. c: |
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KyleRilyx
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minniem
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| 07 Feb 2015 05:15 PM |
| Yw, DON'T FORGET TO PM ME THE NEXT ONE |
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| 07 Feb 2015 05:16 PM |
This seems really simple.. But if you'd like more of constructive rate -Most of rhymes were end rhymes -Had like no wordplays..(Not really neccesary, but, some are appreciated.) -Was low on punchlines -Metaphore also. -Instrumental and lyrics dont flow well together, atleast in a way i read it. -But it was a well told story So..around 7/10. |
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KyleRilyx
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ChanelG
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| 07 Feb 2015 05:21 PM |
| Thanks Kyle :)! And THANK YOU Dev I'll work on that next time. |
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Indiella
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| 07 Feb 2015 05:39 PM |
Really nice, I like it. Not going to give a rate just because I'm not in the mood to rate anything. But it'd probably be above 6 or 7. Nice work you got here, very personal. |
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ChanelG
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| 07 Feb 2015 05:41 PM |
| Thank you very much, means alot. |
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Wobull
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| 07 Feb 2015 05:52 PM |
| OHHH SHT. Chanel G is back. The song is a 9/10, if not, higher. |
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ChanelG
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| 07 Feb 2015 06:05 PM |
Thanks Rap and Wob!
and @Universal ayee you know it! Gracias chico! <3 |
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Wobull
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