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Re: Chanel G - Roses and Ruin

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ChanelG is not online. ChanelG
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07 Feb 2015 04:42 PM

A/N: This is about two people, if that wasn't clear enough.

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Instrumental: http://youtu(DOT)be/K3Jjdr7IWe0

[Verse I] (0:32 - 0:1:17)

You left a scar on my heart so I had to go and leave it on ice
It's cold [A] world, so I guess you can say that I fit in nice
My parents always warned about dr*gs on the streets
But forgot 'bout the ones with brown eyes and a heartbeat
I know that we're tryin' but what are we doin',
I see the roses but I can sense the ruin,
Tryna be with you feels like I missed my flight,
The gates closed, came back the next night,
Finally caught a plane, but the plane won't land,
And the only way out is...well you understand,
They say to see a rainbow, first comes the storm,
But you're from New Orleans, where rain is the norm,
You were there when my Abuelo was dying,
Comforted me when I was crying, lying, sayin' I was fine and
Implying that nothing has changed, that I'm still the same,
As if my head wasn't aflame, that I hear angels when you call my name,
But now that you're so far away, the memories are stuck on replay,
I don't mean to be all cliche, but without you my skies are gray,
That's why it's so hard for me to say

[Bridge] (1:18 - 1:33)

I can see roses but I sense the ruin,
I thought you knew it...
We're on the far side of the moon and,
I thought you knew this... (x2)

[Hook] (1:34 - 2:04)

I'm falling apart, I can't match you
It's not for long 'til I can't catch you
It's never 'til I'm all alone that I wish I had you, here
I see the sun, but the rain is near
Prove me wrong, and make all the pain disappear (x2)

[Verse II] (2:05 - 2:52)

I want her to go to college just to hear her say that we made it
And I know that with all of this [S] goin' on it can all get frustratin'
Baby let's face it, all that sisterly love is outdated
I hate it, you're right here but it feels like we're separated
I'm always doing my thing, and you're out doing your own
Every time I look at you, I think of how much you've grown
Ain't even hit the double digits and you're already 'bout your business
I've seen you do things most kids can't in only a couple minutes
Spitting image of mama, but you act just like daddy
If he could see us right now, he would take the chance gladly
Know that he loves, and know that no one's above us
Keep in mind that he passed his legacy to both of us
Remember what mama told us back in Daytona:
"Sujetar abajo tu corona"
"Hold down your crown", and let none [F] around
Always stand your ground, and never back down
Hey, I heard you wanna be seen on the big screen
Can't wait to watch you'll be flawless- pristine
I know you'll get there no problem one day
That's why it's so hard for me to say

[Bridge] (2:53 - 3:07)

I can see roses but I sense the ruin,
I thought you knew it...
We're on the far side of the moon and,
I thought you knew this... (x2)

[Hook] (3:08 - 4:03)

I'm falling apart, I can't match you
It's not for long 'til I can't catch you
It's never 'til I'm all alone that I wish I had you, here
I see the sun, but the rain is near
Prove me wrong, and make all the pain disappear (x3)

[Outro] (4:04 - 4:19)

...

Now that I finally got that out of the way
I'm done looking for sentimental [S] to say
And to many I know that these sound like fables
But this is my story, this is what I bring to the table
From here its only bitter truth, and soon will be proven

This is the intro to Roses and Ruin.

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OsirinKing is not online. OsirinKing
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07 Feb 2015 04:44 PM
I couldn't read. It was already a 10/10 without looking at it! Hit me up with a collab on your album Chanel!
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drake17dude is not online. drake17dude
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07 Feb 2015 04:44 PM
9/10
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ChanelG is not online. ChanelG
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07 Feb 2015 04:44 PM
Sure will buddy! Thank you! :)
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CheetahBoyHD is not online. CheetahBoyHD
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07 Feb 2015 04:47 PM
Mk. I wasnt feeling it tho so like Iggy/Eminem
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ChanelG is not online. ChanelG
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07 Feb 2015 04:49 PM
Thanks :P
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minniem is not online. minniem
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07 Feb 2015 04:52 PM
Thank you for sending me this, I'm gonna go ahead and rate all the songs I see while I'm here.

I'm gonna give this a 9.5/10, the Outro got me hype for the next song lol. Beautifully written, dope, deep song. Keep at it girl.
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RandyMD is not online. RandyMD
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07 Feb 2015 05:00 PM
I think now I understand why you were so out of it today. Probably over thinking or contemplating on the release of this, but.. There was no need to. You poured your heart into this, and I had no idea how this was going to come out, but it came in something I've never seen before. The rise before the storm. You are the sky. Everybody else is the weather. You are in control of who You are. Don't let anybody change that. As a friend, I'm very proud of you. As a fan, I'm inspired by you. As an artist, I'm all of the above. I would quote my favorite verses but.. That would mean me outshining other parts of the song, but it the entire thing its self deserves recognition.


Sujetar abajo tu corona.

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ObeyScourge is not online. ObeyScourge
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07 Feb 2015 05:08 PM
trash. you should just quit


Mixtape Nostalgia!
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master0691 is not online. master0691
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07 Feb 2015 05:10 PM
9/10
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ChanelG is not online. ChanelG
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07 Feb 2015 05:11 PM
Thank you very much guys, and Obey I'll take that into consideration darling. Thank you for taking time out of your day for me. c:
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KyleRilyx is not online. KyleRilyx
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07 Feb 2015 05:15 PM
YESS CHANEL!! <33 10/10
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minniem is not online. minniem
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07 Feb 2015 05:15 PM
Yw, DON'T FORGET TO PM ME THE NEXT ONE
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DevilishFilip is not online. DevilishFilip
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07 Feb 2015 05:16 PM
This seems really simple..
But if you'd like more of constructive rate
-Most of rhymes were end rhymes
-Had like no wordplays..(Not really neccesary, but, some are appreciated.)
-Was low on punchlines
-Metaphore also.
-Instrumental and lyrics dont flow well together, atleast in a way i read it.
-But it was a well told story
So..around 7/10.
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KyleRilyx is not online. KyleRilyx
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07 Feb 2015 05:19 PM
punchlines...............
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ChanelG is not online. ChanelG
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07 Feb 2015 05:21 PM
Thanks Kyle :)! And THANK YOU Dev I'll work on that next time.
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Indiella is not online. Indiella
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07 Feb 2015 05:24 PM
8.5/10, I like the beat.
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lunafanplace is not online. lunafanplace
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07 Feb 2015 05:39 PM
Really nice, I like it.
Not going to give a rate just because I'm not in the mood to rate anything.
But it'd probably be above 6 or 7.
Nice work you got here, very personal.
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ChanelG is not online. ChanelG
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07 Feb 2015 05:41 PM
Thank you very much, means alot.
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Rapt0rzLmAd is not online. Rapt0rzLmAd
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07 Feb 2015 05:49 PM
Caught my eye 9/10!
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Wobull is not online. Wobull
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07 Feb 2015 05:50 PM
7/10
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UniversalDanger is not online. UniversalDanger
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07 Feb 2015 05:52 PM
OHHH SHT. Chanel G is back. The song is a 9/10, if not, higher.
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ChanelG is not online. ChanelG
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07 Feb 2015 06:05 PM
Thanks Rap and Wob!

and @Universal ayee you know it! Gracias chico! <3
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Wobull is not online. Wobull
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07 Feb 2015 06:18 PM
Read your PMs hoe
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Rapt0rzLmAd is not online. Rapt0rzLmAd
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07 Feb 2015 06:38 PM
es bueno
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