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| 04 Feb 2015 10:45 PM |
Yo... I'm lost under like I'm caught deep I sometimes wonder why I'm lost steep Can't follow speed like I'm offbeat I've got no creed but a reason's what I need to keep walking It's more r(arded) than somebody gawking, a strange stare as if you're following, stalking No warnings in life, a lack of honking, just a couple of people taunting They're going for haunting, flaunting their annoyingness around the room, it's becoming exhausting It's gotten me yawning, drawing attention to themselves and people are scoffing Others are vaunting And up roaring for more than enough adoring According to average day there's no such thing as ignoring It happens every morning and it's really annoying, I should wear the clothes I wore for the most recent mourning Social media has information out and pouring, during the exact moment that you see it is flooring Everything existent lasts from the instant that the subject was witnessed cause the people got the equipment If there's a chance consider it your number one ticket A moment to catch right on top of the secondly digit All these people say is that they want all the riches But if your shot is there, then make sure you lift it They slowly drifted, but they only shifted And now it's frozen frigid and won't bend as if it's rigid B(ch) you talking twisted with a mind that's seen as wicked The pains that I afflicted, the ways that I have printed Got it gassed up in any way that you could vision Got a mind image, but you know they're too vivid You just can't see through it, so it is only hinted The little snippet that you say can only show you're gifted So get people to listen to what you writing down, listed All you hear are crickets and a couple laughing b()es A sketch that I depicted in your head through simple thinking Written in a notebook, that's where all of my ink is So maybe I'm assisting but you're the one who is linking The words together and you're the one letting it sink in When any story unfolds, my heart is ice cube cold I'm colder than dry ice, but it's also hot so we know where that adds spice
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EchoLoud
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| 04 Feb 2015 11:13 PM |
| Post what you want to state, rates, constructive criticism, etc. |
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| 05 Feb 2015 08:06 AM |
| Why did you make alts to rate your work? |
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| 05 Feb 2015 02:17 PM |
None of them are alts. I know all of them, they've even been in-game with him.
Anyways, 9.5/10. I was really impressed. |
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| 05 Feb 2015 02:45 PM |
| Bruh, why am I getting accused of that sht now. I bash on people for doing it, and I bash on hypocrites. So either one wouldn't make sense. |
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| 05 Feb 2015 02:48 PM |
| Thanks for the ratings guys |
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| 05 Feb 2015 03:21 PM |
CheetahBoy vs. Universal
THAT I'd like to see. |
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| 05 Feb 2015 04:13 PM |
| 8/10, I liked this! Not bad |
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| 05 Feb 2015 04:23 PM |
| Means a lot coming from an Icon. |
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| 05 Feb 2015 05:02 PM |
| Oh OK. Cause logic I guess. Just seems really really weird those 2 accounts only rate your work. |
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| 05 Feb 2015 07:34 PM |
| They're my friends from school. I tell them to check it out if they want. |
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