Swag002
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| Joined: 02 Aug 2013 |
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| 03 Feb 2015 08:36 PM |
Hook(GVD)- Got the vizor on me, blocking out the haters I won't procastinate, that's the only thing I'll do later Vizor vizor vizor, balling like the vintage Lakers Boy you might be good, but I'm the only one greater Hey, hey, hey Put on the vizor, Hey, hey, hey Put on the vizor, If anyone tryna go against me I'll put on the vizor The only time your songs are heat is when I put your tracks on fire (True that)
Verse1(GVD)- Ain't a pro but I don't flop like Lebron in the fourth quarter The new kid on the block causing chaos but may I take your order? Foreign whips, foreign watches, to have a matching girl I had to import her Told her to come here but if she hispanic I asked her not to cross the border Lordy, lordy, Lorde must be on my playlist cause I'm royal I don't own no million dollar bills but I've made hella withdrawals (PULL OUT GAME) Uh, no baby mamas cause I know most of them gonna be disloyal I won't be fooled even though your clapping booty is colossal It's another episode I'm watching the rugrats in the bando We the kings here, no rats in our gold rugs over in Sacramento Mexicans in Orlando, but no immigrants going back to the central Her breasts look like baby eyes, so I had to be gentle Fake designer I don't like, all these fake rhymers I don't like Go back to your bedrooms it's past curfew, can't you see the night lights Y'all Stevie Wonder, can't see your lane and can't see what you write Both ways your lyrics gonna sound lame, both just written and on a mic They hate me when I call their girls like Seahawks Super Bowl 49 I don't skateboard but they know that I'm always on my grind Money on my mind, I never leave it out of sight But I can't see my thoughts cause it's clouded by asses side to side
Hook(GVD)- Got the vizor on me, blocking out the haters I won't procastinate, that's the only thing I'll do later Vizor vizor vizor, balling like the vintage Lakers Boy you might be good, but I'm the only one greater Hey, hey, hey Put on the vizor, Hey, hey, hey Put on the vizor, If anyone tryna go against me I'll put on the vizor The only time your songs are heat is when I put your tracks on fire (True that)
Verse2(Bullet) - IGH! Clique ball out like them Harlem n[]s, Pop Pop shoot em dead in front of his daughter n[], Squad mobbing, While her clt throbbing, My squad NBA we only got that live, Trap buzzing more than bees in the hive, God flow shouts out to my Lil n[], My gun game just like my s[] game, I pull out, Hunnid papers we stacking count, Vizor on I can't see you goofys, Rocking Kufis, I don't love these fake b[]s, Got that coco for the low low shout to my n[] Stitches, Ballin out shouts out to the Lakeshow, Ask ya girl if she take throat, I got the 30 on me like my name Stephen Curry, Vizor on so you n[]s blurry, You n[]s ain't competition, You n[]s barely even opposition, Karate flow leave the bodies flipping, I intercept yo plans let Butler in Superbowl 49, Packing for the flow I always flip that dime, I told these boys don't play that like my name Lil Mouse, These n[]s cross dressing caught em in a blouse, B[] we for real, Catch a n[] lacking in the field, Whacking n[]s, Body packing n[]s, Visor on so you know its real, B side, Radix,
Hook(GVD)- Got the vizor on me, blocking out the haters I won't procastinate, that's the only thing I'll do later Vizor vizor vizor, balling like the vintage Lakers Boy you might be good, but I'm the only one greater Hey, hey, hey Put on the vizor, Hey, hey, hey Put on the vizor, If anyone tryna go against me I'll put on the vizor The only time your songs are heat is when I put your tracks on fire (True that)
Outro(Bullet)- Ayo GVD welcome to the Radix fam bruh. |
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Wobull
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| 03 Feb 2015 08:44 PM |
| i guess it was decent, laughed at some of the lines. 8/10 |
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Swag002
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TruH4WK13
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| Joined: 21 Dec 2013 |
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| 03 Feb 2015 09:21 PM |
Bullet did good. GVD you have some A+ Potential we need to collab |
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Swag002
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| 03 Feb 2015 09:34 PM |
| Ok thanks man. If you want to collab then just private message me or "party" me. |
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YoungUgly
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| Joined: 06 Mar 2014 |
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| 04 Feb 2015 01:15 AM |
| GVD x Bullet vs. FATOS - Vizor Rampage (Tom Simon Edit) |
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| 04 Feb 2015 06:43 AM |
You have a lot of potential. Rhymes were decent, the message was not. If this was a joke-rap, then 10/10.
It would be funny when this guy starts dissing |
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Swag002
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| Joined: 02 Aug 2013 |
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| 04 Feb 2015 04:43 PM |
Alright Thanks! Well I am trying to be a little comedic |
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LilDong
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| Joined: 02 Feb 2015 |
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| 04 Feb 2015 08:41 PM |
| Super bowl 49 was disappointing homie. |
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Indiella
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| Joined: 15 Jul 2011 |
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| 05 Feb 2015 08:27 PM |
"Lordy, lordy, Lorde must be on my playlist cause I'm royal I don't own no million dollar bills but I've made hella withdrawals "
ayeee I see you!! I love Lorde <333
Really good guys, 8.5/10! |
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iaw35
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| Joined: 22 May 2013 |
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| 12 Feb 2015 02:19 PM |
Meaning less, lack of major flow, no metaphors, no similes, no good vocab. Honestly a3rd grader on crack could better than this. Please dont take my words into offense, just see them, and the. Think about what you just wrote. 5/10 |
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| 12 Feb 2015 06:31 PM |
| I can't take Iaw's comments seriously. |
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| 12 Feb 2015 06:37 PM |
Iaw, proofread your comments for lik, spelling errors and stuff. It comes out looking weird and it's hard to sound serious when someone messes up their spelling and stuff.
8/10 |
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Cybertro
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