birm123
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| 30 Jan 2015 02:18 PM |
I'm writing a story, and I was wondering if anyone would keep up with it if I posted it on Wattpad. I want this to be my first sort of good actual story, but whether people will actually read it or not, I honestly don't care.
Anyway, the idea is that we, the roleplayers, get trapped into our minds by a villain; could be a troll like Mario to a largely hated person like Soardlo, and maybe for a plot twist a well liked person.
The roleplayers are sent into their minds and have a single goal, to get to the part of their mind that "contains" fears and face their worst fear, and each person that conquers their fear brings us one step closer to being freed from our minds. Some people would be sent into a mind as pairs, and the mind would work on the mood of the person. If their mad, the "ground" will crack, there will be "storms", etc.
The idea may have be done before, however I came up with it[in this order] by imagining how it would feel to be good at drawing, to TOS, to this story. No idea how this happened, but I like the idea of it, and I think it would overall increase my evergrowing writer skills.
Would anyone follow and read through the story as I released chapters, if I were to do it on Wattpad? |
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PawzKat
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birm123
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| 30 Jan 2015 02:45 PM |
| http://www.wattpad.com/99729725-sweet-dreams-lo?d=ud |
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wdtarz
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| 30 Jan 2015 08:12 PM |
I LOVE IT
Always remember that you are absolutely unique. Just like everyone else. Margaret Mead |
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| 30 Jan 2015 08:42 PM |
Soardlo as villain.
Please. |
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| 30 Jan 2015 08:51 PM |
| No. Writing about roleplayers is stupid. |
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| 30 Jan 2015 08:55 PM |
Because of course, mage always considers everything that exists as stupid, due to him being a downer.
Magr died as a drunk in the gutter, and only six people attended his funeral. |
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birm123
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| 30 Jan 2015 09:00 PM |
don't worry
mage is the first person to die |
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| 30 Jan 2015 09:09 PM |
DO IT, O MIGHTY BIRM!
And yes, Soardlo as villain. That would be perfect. |
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| 30 Jan 2015 09:11 PM |
| Yeah, but what if you get the personalities wrong? |
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| 30 Jan 2015 09:13 PM |
| I'd love to be tortured half to death. We all need a scrapegoat. |
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| 30 Jan 2015 09:17 PM |
@Rock >scrapegoat
I'm gonna assume you're on a mobile device, Rock.
@Birm
Anyway, the story isn't really something that I'd keep up with because I don't like the plot-line since it's a bit too... immature, for lack of a better word.
You've got other people interested though, so definitely don't quit. Stories are and never will be for everyone anyway. |
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birm123
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| 30 Jan 2015 09:18 PM |
If I get the personalities wrong then the characters must be disposed of.
It is the only way. |
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birm123
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| 30 Jan 2015 09:23 PM |
"immature"
What about childish? |
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| 30 Jan 2015 09:29 PM |
| 99.99% of my posts are on my phone. I rarely get on a computer. |
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| 30 Jan 2015 09:32 PM |
mage is the first person to die
Oh. Is the little child upset I was mean to him? Does killing off my character in your story make you feel better? Does it help you vent your pent up anger?
--- Magr died as a drunk in the gutter, and only six people attended his funeral.
Two. Two people. |
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Craxian
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| 30 Jan 2015 09:33 PM |
Could I be in it, perhaps? I'm just wondering.
Also, it seems interesting so far. |
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birm123
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| 30 Jan 2015 09:40 PM |
"h. Is the little child upset I was mean to him? Does killing off my character in your story make you feel better? Does it help you vent your pent up anger?"
Yes mage, you have scarred me forever. My growing mind cannot comprehend what you just said, so it has decided to go to my five year old roots and cover my ears and scream like someone just ripped off my arm.
Also can I have my arm back? |
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| 30 Jan 2015 10:13 PM |
@Birm
Like I said, for lack of a better word. It's not something I'd be interested in because the writing isn't fit to my age range. It seems to dip below it. |
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