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| 27 Jan 2015 05:05 PM |
I worked so much on it.
http://www.roblox.com/The-Grim-Open-EBR-only-place?id=208619436 |
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| 27 Jan 2015 08:37 PM |
| I suggest bumping the clouds up and making more shapes, same with the trees. Have them look different. You might also want to try to add in some different types of grass and different heights of ground, other then that it's looking good. |
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| 27 Jan 2015 08:41 PM |
"Worked so much."
I could do that in less than an hour.
But anyways, you are hired if you want to join my dev team, Exedon Studios!
"I could tell you... butI don't have time to explain why I don't have time to explain." - The Speaker. |
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| 27 Jan 2015 08:46 PM |
| Shadow, at the fact that you need to go around spamming to join your dev team is proof that you probably couldn't do much better. |
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| 27 Jan 2015 08:47 PM |
@Trust
No, I liked his building, I was just saying I could do that faster.
Why would I invite horrible idiots into my developer team?
What would be the same is you inviting some kid who joined roblox today to be your 2iC.
"I could tell you... butI don't have time to explain why I don't have time to explain." - The Speaker. |
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| 27 Jan 2015 09:06 PM |
| Thanks for the suggestions TrustMe |
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| 27 Jan 2015 09:08 PM |
| Anytime. I was in DBXdev and EBR and even nominated for "Best looking game of the year" bloxys 2014 so feel free to ask any questions. |
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| 27 Jan 2015 10:35 PM |
StarterGui:SetCoreGuiEnabled(Enum.CoreGuiType.All, false)
stick this in a local script inside startergui then take a screenshot :D |
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| 27 Jan 2015 11:08 PM |
Love it :) if u dont mind me asking what is that song?
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| 27 Jan 2015 11:40 PM |
| No idea. i youtubed peaceful song. |
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| 29 Jan 2015 10:16 PM |
| its a little short? is that the whole game? also make the gui closeable |
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| 29 Jan 2015 10:22 PM |
Clouds are low. Repeated designs. A bit small.
I think it looks just okay at the moment, but this has potential and could easily be made into something quite good. Size doesn't matter, stick with a small but detailed area.
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| 29 Jan 2015 10:24 PM |
oops instead of saying "A bit small", I meant to say "A bit large". You're trying to make it a large area, but it'd be a lot better if you just kept it small but more detailed in one area.
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| 30 Jan 2015 01:32 AM |
That is something that many people have submitted to me as entries to EBR. If the place is small it has to be insanely detailed to get our attention.
We are searching for builders who knock our socks off with their creations! Try reading our suggestion thread if you're thinking of submitting a place:
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=79174181 |
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| 30 Jan 2015 01:36 AM |
I do like it so far, but I will say that the clouds seem a little unnatural, especially when you zoom out. Try to vary them with different properties, as well as the landscape. Your work is sitting on square chunks of land! Give them shape! In EBR, every little item needs to have detail!
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