V401
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| 24 Jan 2015 12:12 AM |
i know i suck at writing but better than nothing
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=154514633
"why are all of you egocentric idiots?" -Zealots |
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Fraghound
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V401
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| 24 Jan 2015 12:17 AM |
i'd be suprised and impressed if anyone read more than the first two paragraphs
"why are all of you egocentric idiots?" -Zealots |
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V401
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| 24 Jan 2015 12:20 AM |
"why are all of you egocentric idiots?" -Zealots |
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JoshD43
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Sheoboroc
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| 24 Jan 2015 12:26 AM |
You have a nice imagination. I quite liked the start, but to be perfectly honest, it got a bit clustered around halfway.
But nice job. |
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