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| 20 Jan 2015 06:08 PM |
Hammers Axes War
Chaotic will rip your intestines and leave you in misery My artillery will make you disappear like wizadry Deserted on an island leave you crying in confinement In my environment we use violence to keep you silent Illumination records will destroy radix with axes Take your whole career off the axis and turn you to a lost planet in the galactics Im Cocky and i'll knock your career down like Rocky It's like going up against somebody that could blow your career up- Kamikaze Kamehame, disembody anybody that was on your side before Chaotics Im catastrophic, barbaric, and psychotic like the opposite of an antibiotic You'll need hypodermics when I chop your epidermis like kermit Can't even understand the language i'm speaking You'll be pleading and overeating because I hurt your feelings You stupid feminist i'll abolish your whole mindset Chaotic doesn't need friends he needs paychecks You need a reality check to help you face reality Verbal Slurs not Verbal Truts are what you're spitting at me
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| 20 Jan 2015 06:18 PM |
| It's not bad but I'm not a feminist. All I said was I want beef not your ravioli because you dissed me first but good try |
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| 20 Jan 2015 06:20 PM |
| Upset? You tried to throw a shot at me and it backfired. |
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| 20 Jan 2015 06:22 PM |
| Not upset I'm responding to the shot you took in Takeover |
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| 20 Jan 2015 06:25 PM |
| And then I responded back and obliterated you. gg |
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| 20 Jan 2015 06:27 PM |
| tried too hard on the rhyme schemes |
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| 20 Jan 2015 06:28 PM |
| Because I used words too big for you to comprehend with alot of multi's. You wanted me to use small words and no multi's? Thats called a Dr. Seuss book sir. |
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| 21 Jan 2015 02:42 PM |
not really, there are people that like more wordplay and metaphors with like 3-4 syllable rhymes and it will still sound and look good on paper
not throwing shots or anything, just saying |
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| 21 Jan 2015 02:46 PM |
Correct, and I did that here. You just couldn't see it because I focused more so on Vocabulary and multi's, because of M4's comment and then Snoop warned him. I m thinking about focusing more on just being creative with words. You can still maintain multi's and a distinguished vocbaulary in doing that. |
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| 21 Jan 2015 03:15 PM |
None of the words here are hard for me to understand, you just tried too hard.
Syllables aren't needed every 5 seconds.. |
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| 21 Jan 2015 03:39 PM |
Well, can't say it was bad. 7.9/10
Some of it just seemed forced to me when reading this though. |
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| 21 Jan 2015 08:23 PM |
Thanks m4
And Jalman, shutup. You can't tell what's forced unless you hear someone rapping it. It's just the way you read. |
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| 22 Jan 2015 03:42 PM |
| Then learn 7th grade English so you can read better. |
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| 22 Jan 2015 04:25 PM |
| 8.5/10 this good lyrics, metaphors could been better but they were good. |
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| 22 Jan 2015 05:35 PM |
| Had fun baiting you about lyrics on a website for building |
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| 22 Jan 2015 06:04 PM |
>Baiting >Internet
Conclusion: Spent time that they could've used to do something more productive, baiting someone. |
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| 23 Jan 2015 02:29 PM |
| Baiting someone doesn't take 24 hours, but I guess that's the steps in the process you take for baiting. |
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| 23 Jan 2015 02:39 PM |
| >Assuming doing something productive would take 24 hours |
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| 23 Jan 2015 07:59 PM |
| You're implying instead of baiting I could have done something creative, I'm telling you I have a ton of time to bait you and baiting only takes a matter of seconds to complete. I do plenty of other things, other than baiting an idiot. |
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| 25 Jan 2015 09:52 PM |
| Exactly. And that time baiting you could've been doing something better with your life. gg |
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