gmixer
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| 18 Jan 2015 02:20 PM |
It was a nice day in many places all over the world, and in the places that were in the Earth's shadow, it was a nice night. The people on the bright side of the world were enjoying the nice sunny day outside, unless they were inside, then they enjoyed the nice day from the comfort of the indoors.
The Earth's average temperature that day was a whole two degrees higher, but people barely felt it. Especially in places which were colder than their average temperatures, for not everywhere had the same temperature.
But this nice day was all ended when an unfortunate event happened, and it happened for every person on the world, and every planet, moon, asteroid, comet, and speck of dust in our entire solar system. Just not at the same time. It happened for everything in other systems which could see Sol in their skies, whether day or night, just many, many years later.
The sun had disappeared. Nobody knew why it happened, how it happened, or anything of the sort. People didn't even take notice of it until 8 minutes and 20 seconds after it happened, but this is only because light from the sun takes that long to reach us here on Earth. As soon as people noticed, panic, fear, and just overall displeasure with the loss of our star sounded all around through the streets of every city which noticed.
News casts around the globe covered the disappearance of the sun minutes after it happened. The internet lit up with thousands of blog posts, social media posts, and posts of all kinds, and hundreds of millions of them, too. Everything was about Sol disappearing into the great unknown.
But the world wasn't completely dark, everyone who had artificial lighting still had it, and it all worked perfectly fine. But the amount of light in the world wasn't the biggest problem people would have.
Even though the sun had disappeared many minutes ago, people looked up into the now-eternal night sky. As minutes went by, and even hours, the people who stared into the infinite dark of the universe saw small dots of light suddenly get dark. These were the planets who had only just realized the sun has gone. After a long, long while, the farthest of the dots finally went black. Now all of the planets, including the dwarf, Pluto, had lost the sun's warming rays and gravitational pull.
By now it had started to get ever so slightly chillier, and people barely noticed. This is because in some places, mostly the ones on the dark half of the Earth, hadn't experienced the warmth of the sun for enough time for the sun disappearing to matter much in terms of temperature.
This was only the beginning.
-END- tell me what u thought and if you'd like to read a lot more of this. kbye |
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gmixer
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| 18 Jan 2015 02:42 PM |
if it were a report. id give an a plus
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hgsc4TyXzz8 |
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jjj344
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| 18 Jan 2015 03:00 PM |
Inspired from this - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rltpH6ck2Kc
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| 18 Jan 2015 03:00 PM |
It was good for an intro.
-Spiritshade (Secret agent) |
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| 18 Jan 2015 03:02 PM |
@jjj yes thanks for pointing ti out to people who didnt see where i put it in my thread announcing this
@legend thanks |
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| 18 Jan 2015 03:04 PM |
Let's see who can make the better story ... hmm?
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| 18 Jan 2015 03:08 PM |
@jjj you can write your own story, but im not really gonna strive to compete with it
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| 18 Jan 2015 03:46 PM |
you get feedback from 4 different people with just the prologue
only 1 bit of hate from 3 parts of mine qq
it is good, but make a thread that you post all the links on!!! |
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| 18 Jan 2015 03:48 PM |
@boxsale wow that sucks hope ur next stories get more noticed
also thanks and i will make that thread after a few parts, and in every part i will link to the previous one |
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