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iiMarshmalow is not online. iiMarshmalow
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29 Dec 2014 05:37 PM
--Disclaimer--

This story was not very well written whatsoever. I appreciate if you can give me tips on how to improve this story. Please no hate.

It was a dark and stormy night on Christmas Eve. Santa was on his way delivering presents to the children of the world. However, there was a flaw in his way. He lost a reindeer, without Santa noticing. He landed on the roof of a house. After that, he looked at the sleigh, counted the reindeer and there was only 7. Santa panicked.

"Where is Prancer?" Santa went looking for him in the freezing blizzard. Meanwhile, it was hard to find Prancer on the severely dark night. It was pitch black. So black, you could barely see anything. He checked his watch. It read 11:59 PM. He was late for those Canadian individuals. There was no possible way he could reach Canada on time. He was diverted to New York.

"Well, we can't take any risks. We don't want to disappoint the children on Christmas morning." He went down in the chimney delivering the presents. Eventually, he got stuck in the chimney. The elves were impatiently waiting for Santa. Then, a kid came downstairs to check what the commotion was. She saw 2 black boots in the fire place. It was the big man, Santa Claus. The elves were furious on Santa's long time on being stuck in the chimney.

"Santa?" Santa was panicking. The elves grabbed a rope and tried to get Santa out of the chimney. The little girl was watching the elves trying to pull the big man. The reindeer were becoming cold. So cold, they were going to turn into a huge Popsicle. It was a hard task for the elves to pull the big man out of the chimney. He looked at his watch again. It read 2:14 AM. He wasn't going to make it on time. The reindeer couldn't wait another second. A few minutes later, they finally got Santa out of the chimney and off to the prairies they go. However, Santa lost another reindeer.

"Another reindeer? Oh well. We have to move along." They went to the prairies to deliver the presents. He had to move faster. So fast, almost faster than a rocket ship.

"We have to look for the reindeer in the morning. However, I don't want to expose myself in front of the world." They were still going on in the prairies. When they approached they Yukon area, the temperature was down at merely -50 Celsius. The elves were screaming "Santa! Santa!"

Santa slowly came up the chimney and the reindeer were back. The ones he lost on the way to Canada.

"It looks like we don't have to expose ourselves after all." Santa read his watched once again. It read 5:01 AM.

"Oh no. We have to get back to the North Pole in less than an hour." The reindeer were moving furiously in the cold blizzard. They got back on time to celebrate all the over 2 billion presents Santa has delivered.

Eventually, the world woke up. The children were opening their presents and the whole world said "Thank you Santa!"
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TheSecondPotato is not online. TheSecondPotato
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29 Dec 2014 05:38 PM
H“a“n“n“u“k“a“h“.“
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iiMarshmalow is not online. iiMarshmalow
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29 Dec 2014 05:39 PM
@TheSecond

Well, my family doesn't celebrate Hanukkah.
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29 Dec 2014 05:39 PM
There are too many mistakes(or details that could be better) for me to point out in one whole post.

bruh
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29 Dec 2014 05:40 PM
das a great stori m8

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29 Dec 2014 05:40 PM
@Black

I can try better to use proper grammar next time ;)

@godzilla

Thanks.
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29 Dec 2014 05:41 PM
Y“o“u“ “j“u“s“t“ “s“a“i“d“ “y“o“u“ “d“o“n“'“t“ “c“e“l“e“b“r“a“t“e“ “C“h“r“i“s“t“m“a“s“.“
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29 Dec 2014 05:43 PM
H“o“l“i“d“a“y“s“.“
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30 Dec 2014 09:33 AM
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wow backwards spells wow
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02 Jan 2015 07:56 PM
tl;dr
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TL;DR
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so l0ng but kewl st0ry m9


omg kethcup
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05 Jan 2015 04:59 PM
nice man
will u marry me
im ur biggest fan

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05 Jan 2015 05:07 PM
Uh
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05 Jan 2015 05:09 PM
i have a bacon ring with a bacon gem
marry me
pls

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05 Jan 2015 05:09 PM
brb making this my siggy

I bet you all hated FNAF before today.
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16 Jan 2015 04:58 PM
TL;DR

Ice Cr3am C00kies
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davinhi1 is not online. davinhi1
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16 Jan 2015 05:01 PM
not even christmas
;-;

I find it really hard to believe her.
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peacocksock is not online. peacocksock
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16 Jan 2015 05:05 PM
i dont really get it
why is it in 2021
what was the moral of this story

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